PLATINUM7
Star Platinum
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They sound like their written like some of the PotD's, that is it's meant to be Sakurai explaining them, hence the personal pronouns. 'But no idea' also makes it sound like the description is meant to be someone talking to you.I know I said it before, and maybe I'm just irrationally ranting about this late at night, but...
They really need to rewrite some of those trophy descriptions. It literally sounds like a 12-year-old wrote them. I expected better from you, NOA.
"A living embodiment of gross..."
"Did I mention he's gross?"
How about "A living embodiment of grossness?" Why is there the personal pronoun "I?"
"She and Fox also became romantically involved, but no idea if her telepathic abilities were useful there as well."
"...but no idea?" What? How does that make grammatical sense? It doesn't! How about "but it is unknown?"
"Just by glancing at them, she makes guys wonder if she likes them."
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Seriously, who wrote this s***? Maybe they had to condense their writing due to the small size of the screen, but damn...10- or 11-year old me could write slightly better than this...
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Anyways, I like the idea of Bowser Jr. having the Koopalings as alt costumes. I hope this is true!
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