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Well yeah, but Shiny didn't seem to be going for comedy, which was the issue. Mood Whiplash and whatnot.
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Well yeah, but Shiny didn't seem to be going for comedy, which was the issue. Mood Whiplash and whatnot.
May, June, July etc are Gregorian Calendar months thoOH MY GOODNESS.
THAT IS THEIR YEAR. They use the same numbers as us I guess ( Too complicated to make new numbers ).
They do not use the Gregorian Calendar. It does not take place 15000 years after today.
Because villains with silly names are all automatically nothing more than comedy?Well yeah, but Shiny didn't seem to be going for comedy, which was the issue. Mood Whiplash and whatnot.
I know, but it happened in those Earth months. The years are from Xoden, the months are from Earth.May, June, July etc are Gregorian Calendar months tho
That's... insanely confusing.I know, but it happened in those Earth months. The years are from Xoden, the months are from Earth.
Dang it. How about I make those the human years? IDK....That's... insanely confusing.
Why have the months in Gregorian and the years in Xerox?
Both should follow the same format for consistency.
I'd argue Gravity Falls' over all tone allowed for that kind of thing more easily. What Shiny's going for doesn't seem to have any lighthearted moments. That's kinda my point. :vBecause villains with silly names are all automatically nothing more than comedy?
You need to remember your trigonometry lessons, dude.
:V
My story is not supposed to be lighthearted, so good point.I'd argue Gravity Falls' over all tone allowed for that kind of thing more easily. What Shiny's going for doesn't seem to have any lighthearted moments. That's kinda my point. :v
I actually enjoy Ruby's voice a lot lolive seen a some persona peeps online, some Yosukes, Some Yus, And Like, one Chie and Yukiko. I hope I never see ruby online though, her voice is grating to me
and yeah, The reason Yosuke kept doing that was because I was trying to do his skill, the wind skill, and other skills and it just didnt wanna happen lol Yeah, the Persona Can get hit and ****ed also, pretty sure thats what saves me from getting hit in most of my matches. But im glad I did good, I feel like Im improving
Oh god he was even more broken originally?No I just find it funny that Gordeau is "broken" here which is nothing compared to how he was back in UNIEL.
Gordeau/Azrael is UNGA PLUS ULTRA
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Fair enough :VI'd argue Gravity Falls' over all tone allowed for that kind of thing more easily. What Shiny's going for doesn't seem to have any lighthearted moments. That's kinda my point. :v
Your goal when making up a fictional race is to ascribe to them a cultural history. Look at Tolkien, and you see Elven names are very different from Dwarven names. They're both completely made up, but they feel like they belong to the different cultures.My story is not supposed to be lighthearted, so good point.
Rather a made up history lesson.
How about..... Vanalthin?
So what you're saying is that Friendships need to come back.And Mortal Kombat ain't really the "sunshine and rainbows" kind of thing.
Nevermind it was just an OboroI got three posts at the top of the page just today what the hell
Brb gonna roll on FEH
Not before Animalities. :VSo what you're saying is that Friendships need to come back.
The other thing to keep in mind is how sounds feel to the ear.My story is not supposed to be lighthearted, so good point.
Rather a made up history lesson.
How about..... Vanalthin?
"Vanakthin"The other thing to keep in mind is how sounds feel to the ear.
Vanalthin is a very elegant sound. The letters flow together. It feels calm, peaceful.
Change just one letter, Vanakthin, and now the name has a harsh stop. It's broken in two, it feels unbalanced, unnerving.
YEP. Changing it.Vanalthin also has "anal" right behind the V and I don't know how to feel about that.
I'd probably change the second A just to quell the inevitable Drax the Destroyer comparisons. Maybe an O.YEP. Changing it.
How about.."Vandraxthin"?
I love how this post got more likes than my story post.Reading Shiny's story thing makes me want to do that kind of worldbuilding stuff myself, LOL. I wanna give input on Shiny's story, of course, but I'm...really bad at critique. So instead I'll write my own thing, LOL.
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OK once upon a time a mindless but hyperadaptive eldritch abomination laid a bunch of eggs on a planet and left. Those eggs developed sapient minds from gestating in close proximity to intelligent life and have been gradually hatching one by one over the last several thousand years. The local intelligent race started worshipping the influx of overpowered terrors both to save their own lives and out of fear and respect, and basically the whole thing hijacked religion and to some degree politics on the world.
And everything was fine until the Human Nation attacked. Just one of them. Like. . .Framany, or something.
Yeah.
Oh gosh this lack of ability to word things properly and concisely is why I haven't really started yet.
Drop "thin" altogether. Avoid anything like that that diminishes the power of the villain. It's diminutive, cute. Like naming him cthuluchan.YEP. Changing it.
How about.."Vandraxthin"?
I'd probably change the second A just to quell the inevitable Drax the Destroyer comparisons. Maybe an O.
Vandrox?Drop "thin" altogether. Avoid anything like that that diminishes the power of the villain. It's diminutive, cute. Like naming him cthuluchan.
Sounds like a cleaning solution, lol.Vandrox?
Makes me think of an xylophone, Magikarp and a crop.Xythlkrop
Is that a good one?
Scythe Crop.Xythlkrop
Is that a good one?
I'll take that as a no.Scythe Crop.
Well, she is a Gormotti... So it is possible.>Not putting her hand on her heart and standing up straight
Clearly Nia is better qualified to be a true representative of the proud Ardanian Empire.
Also that Heart-to-Heart between Nia and Mórag which is the best one in the game, where they talk politics and Nia drops one of the best quotes in the series.
I can tell the character is spoiler then lol.I mean....
I coooould name someone who looks even better.
Lemme try.And I hardly even come up with character names because I'm awful at it, despite NEEDING character names. And when I do make them they're super basic and awful and more placeholders than anything.
Tootsie Roll.Like, have a six foot tall lizard woman gladiator mercenary?
Jolly Rancher.Have a guy that's a Latino zoologist/veterinarian on contract with a US/diet US military taskforce? Nada.
Waffle.Backstory albino medieval bishonen prince with the personality of a cinnamon roll? Hahahah you have too high of hopes for me.
What's the quote?>Not putting her hand on her heart and standing up straight
Clearly Nia is better qualified to be a true representative of the proud Ardanian Empire.
Also that Heart-to-Heart between Nia and Mórag which is the best one in the game, where they talk politics and Nia drops one of the best quotes in the series.