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Nano WWYP 2!

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bluezaft

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What the hell is write with your power?

I'll celebrate my remembering its existence by submitting something. =)
 

Evil Eye

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____, pronoun verb.

____, pronoun verb.


I think you should tinker with that a bit, because it reads super formulaically. Uh, I'm not sure if I spelled that right. Or if it's even a word.

Also don't forget to bold if you want it to be your entry.
 

Luigitoilet

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made quite a few more...

-Shook the tears from her eyes-

Searching. Serving. Falling on my knees.

Dragged out the dead. Buried myself.

The exposition rises, climaxes, falls , ends.

Like love, but bleeding bubbly horror.

I saw, I conquered, I came.

Let him inside. It felt wrong.

~~~

seem to be some running themes here :063:
 

Dodongo

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Hmm I think I'll change my entry.

Their eyes couldn't meet. He knew...

She closed her feeble eyes, "hello".

Saturating fog. Lachrymose without even eyes.

Its blood spilled, the mountain cried.
 

Spire

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Hmm I think I'll change my entry.

Their eyes couldn't meet. He knew...

She closed her feeble eyes, "hello".

Saturating fog. Lachrymose without even eyes.

Its blood spilled, the mountain cried.
I'm liking the last one the best. It recalls a vague memory of an unknown creature giving in to death after being shot by hunters.
 

MidnightAsaph

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You never listened. Midnight is here.

Can't say I dig the six word story thing we have going here, but I think I'm proud of my work.

EDIT: I edited the entry. Will they realize this or should I post again?
 

Frank West

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One land. Two nations. War everlasting.

Oscar nomination..."Two girls one cup"

The case re-opened: Suicide note forgery

Mistakes were made. She forgave him.
 

Eor

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"You see, there's this other guy...."
 

Evil Eye

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Eor, that's hardly a story.
Completely disagree.

Eor's story implies a history, a present happening (with a great deal of emotion), and a future. It's one of the most cohesive and complete entries in the contest, actually.
 

Matunas

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Past the deadline but putting it up here anyway.

Help needed: Paraplegic. Veteran. Can't pay.
 

Hydra.

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I'm kind of wishing I had entered -
Played with time, but didn't win.


When will we know the winner?
 

DtJ Jungle

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I have a feeling i know who this other judge is.


no i dont

what am i talking about

jungle speaks, it doesn't make sense
 

Eor

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Bite marks, bullets. No more family

He ran, but not fast enough

"You kill people. Why? Why?"

"Business"


I adapted the last one from a song, but I'm pretty sure it's a line from some Vin Diesel movie. I like it anyways. Bolded it just so people knew it was together, I'm aware the deadline is passed.
 

Virgilijus

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Tiger Queen asked for an extension to the 10th. Whether she forgot them or legitimately has internet problems, I cannot say. They may get in this weekend though.
 
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