http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EdBAX-O6yFw
Please critque. Even if you are a noob you might know what I did wrong anyway.
Please critque. Even if you are a noob you might know what I did wrong anyway.
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Because I wouldn't know where to start.amsah: you didn't really say anything.. but yeah, green is good.
All of which is useless, if you don't know when and how to use it in a fight.And amsah, if you admit you didn;t say anything, why post.. my god.. just copy what sveet did.
It's not like I moved my cursor to an empty part of the char. select screen and just picked up sheik. I know how to combo with sheik, I can shino stall for a good two minutes before I mess up, and I can do that run-off explosion thing about a third of the time.
No, that's exactly it. Which is why you're asking for help on these boards.Its not like I don't know how to play her, its that I got nervous and started rolling.
Just look at Sveets post as a model if you really need help critiquing. or just don't critique.
In other words, you don't know how to edgeguard.Like I said, I know how to edeguard, I just freaked out and went back to my habit of bairing cpu foxes after firefox from the center of the stage. I was looking for help with approaches and such.
Compared to who..?And from what I see, amsah's sheik isn't even that good. maybe in europe it is.. if you come to pound 4, have fun with all the foxes there.
If you say so..You are obviously pissed off at me cause you are bad at giving advice.
Language barrier..:embarrassYou also probably have to deal with a language barried when trying to understand all my posts.
What?Get over the fact that I'm new with sheik And don't be a crying ***** please..
I suggested you watch videos of good Sheik players, because it's quite obvious to me you haven't. You ignored it and said it wasn't advice.I don't get why you're so arrogant anyway, most pros are real nice..
Yes, obviously I came into the thread just to ruin your day (because I have nothing better to do). I'm notorious for being an incredible ******* and have never given new players advice (unless I was telling them to jump of a bridge).I guess he gets off to bashing new sheik players who know they need help.
Thank god...Suit yourself, I won't be bothering you anymore.
Ask him.dayum guys! why ya gotta be fightin like dis?
As you said, you didn't even give me advice, because you couldn't.. now you are just confused..Ask him.
He asked for advice, I gave him some, then he decided to insult me..
I told you, you need to watch vids to get Sheiks basics down.As you said, you didn't even give me advice, because you couldn't.. now you are just confused..
Point out to me where I was being a douche before you insulted me. Show me now.If you really want to know what happened, look at amsah's posts. Cause he's kind of being a douche at the moment.. way to troll someone's 4th best character in a critique thread.
You need to work on your edgeguarding, your approach, your combo's, your recovery, and anything else you can think of that I didn't list here..
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This is a very kind statement. And not arrogant at all. You see, the point of critique threads is to get specific advice, not general categories. Like, "maybe you should fair during your recovery for extra distance" or "you should mix up your up-bs onto the stage with an airdodge." stuff like that. Which is actually critque.
I don't think anyone cared what you were quite sure of. I do watch vids and no how to play sheik, it was my first time playnig him against another person (except one tournamnet set 4 months ago against a bowser who beat me, which tells you how good I was)Elvenarrow for example is telling you you need to edgeguard, which is good, but vague. Because I'm quite sure that because you don't know the character, you'll have trouble properly edgeguarding even if you try, which would lead to you posting more vids and asking us how to improve your edgeguarding.
"In other words..." I do, I just didn't.. I was nervous. This is a classic douche bag line, using imitation of a person's phrasing and then manioulating it to try and be witty or w/e the hell you were being.No, that's exactly it. Which is why you're asking for help on these boards.
In other words, you don't know how to edgeguard.
To think I was actually going to give you advice this time..:embarrass
And forgive me if the point of this thread wasn't to learn how to play better..
If you were such a nice guy you'd give me advice. You claimed you couldn't give me advice, then you claimed that you did, then you said, "to think that I almost did," then you said you did.I suggested you watch videos of good Sheik players, because it's quite obvious to me you haven't. You ignored it and said it wasn't advice.
Yes, obviously I came into the thread just to ruin your day (because I have nothing better to do). I'm notorious for being an incredible ******* and have never given new players advice (unless I was telling them to jump of a bridge).
If that's what you really think then suit yourself, I won't be bothering you anymore.
I'm still curious though, who did you compare me to when you said my Sheik wasn't even that good? Or was that a random insult you pulled out of your *** because I said you don't know how to edgeguard? :embarrass
I watched some of your vids in grand finals and your sheik isn't that good. Go to pound 4 and get ****ed up please...
And I watch vids. It would be nice if your opinion on this fact mattered, but it doesn't, so stop repeateing it.
I wish you had held to this.. and this is an arrogant statement.[edit]
On second thought, I have better things to do.
you didn't give me any (according to you)Ask him.
He asked for advice, I gave him some, then he decided to insult me..
You said that wasn't advice. Once again, I have sheiks basics down. I got nervous.I told you, you need to watch vids to get Sheiks basics down.
Point out to me where I was being a douche before you insulted me. Show me now.
Why can't you be like everybody else in the thread and actually give me advice? KK and Sveet actaulyl helped... and elvenarrow, when he told me to watch pc (iirc).
There. I did. Idk why you have some chip on your shoulder where you want to demean new sheik players.
I honestly have a lot to work on right now thanks to the other posters, so I don't even need any more critique until my next vids.. which I will probably go fox or jiggs for mostly, unless I get a lot recorded.
I told youGOD! said:KK and Sveet actaulyl helped... and elvenarrow, when he told me to watch pc (iirc).
He told youKirbyKaze said:You need to be more comfortable doing stuff.
He actually said more useful things than I did.Amsah said:You need to work on your edgeguarding, your approach, your combo's, your recovery, and anything else you can think of that I didn't list here..
I suggest you watch videos..
Also, I would be surprised if PC Chris's Sheik was better than Amsah's.You need to get Sheiks basics down first, or it's impossible to give you useful advice. That's why I'm telling you to watch videos of good Sheik players and get to know the character, then when you hit a glass wall and don't know how to get better, show us vids so when can give you specific advice.
How is that arrogance...This is a very kind statement. And not arrogant at all.You see, the point of critique threads is to get specific advice, not general categories. Like, "maybe you should fair during your recovery for extra distance" or "you should mix up your up-bs onto the stage with an airdodge." stuff like that. Which is actually critque.
You would be surprised..I don't think anyone cared what you were quite sure of.
No, you don't know how to play Sheik, which is why you're asking for help. And I didn't mean just watching videos, I'm sure you've seen a ton of Sheik players. But that's different from ANALYZING their different approaches, edgeguards, gimps, strategies to recover, etc and trying to learn from it. Whcih is what I'm telling you to go do.I do watch vids and no how to play sheik
The fact is, on the vids you've shown us, I don't remember you even attempting an edgeguard once. So to me, the most logical conclusion is that you don't know how to and need help. But I personally, first need to see you edgeguard, to be able to tell you how to get better at it.It was my first time playnig him against another person (except one tournamnet set 4 months ago against a bowser who beat me, which tells you how good I was) "In other words..." I do, I just didn't.. I was nervous.
Oh? So I'm supposed to help you after you've insulted me? And I think I stayed relatively polite.This is a classic douche bag line, using imitation of a person's phrasing and then manioulating it to try and be witty or w/e the hell you were being.
You're trying to get worse then..?And forgive me if the point of this thread wasn't to learn how to play better..
I was actually being quite serious with my second post in this thread and then you insulted me. That killed my nice side.If you were such a nice guy you'd give me advice.
I couldn't give you advice on your Sheik, but I did give you general advice.You claimed you couldn't give me advice, then you claimed that you did, then you said, "to think that I almost did," then you said you did.
I watched some of your vids in grand finals and your sheik isn't that good. Go to pound 4 and get ****ed up please...
Repeating*And I watch vids. It would be nice if your opinion on this fact mattered, but it doesn't, so stop repeateing it.
No, it's the truth.I wish you had held to this.. and this is an arrogant statement.
Keep telling yourself that, you'll improve rapidly.[/sarcasm]I have sheiks basics down. I got nervous.
Because you insulted me before I could. :embarrassWhy can't you be like everybody else in the thread and actually give me advice?
Oi oi, you insulted me first remember?There. I did. Idk why you have some chip on your shoulder where you want to demean new sheik players.
No, it's just you. I've never had problems communicating with anyone.Moral of this thread:
-native english speakers don't communicate well with non-native speakers
Don't blame this on me, you're just ********.-Amsah has a temper
No, it's not just me. Your wording is pretty weird.No, it's just you. I've never had problems communicating with anyone.
Don't blame this on me, you're just ********.
I've been laughing through our entire argument.
Yet I've been on these boards since 2005, have 1.6k posts (and that's just this forum) and never had any problems, until I met you.No, it's not just me. Your wording is pretty weird.
I can clearly see that, much like your ability to edgeguard..:embarrassUm I'm actually a really smart person. Good try?
I laugh because I think you're amusing.So you laugh during an argument, huh. First, you have several non-laughing smileys, not that they actually convey anything correct about a person's actual feelings. Second, you laugh when you are insulting somebody and being insulted. You should check that out.
I'm bored and like I said, you're amusing. So this is just a way to pass time :embarrassAnd if you were so carefree and jolly, you wouldn't have posted here again, cause you wouldn't have cared. Unless you laugh when your and that's creepy.
I'm not trolling, I watched both matches and gave you advice. And I ate my dinner a couple of hours ago, thanks for caring..So stop trolling my thread and eat your dinner please.
Just Sveet? Ooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaaay...well sveet helped me.
as did pc.
Well as long as you are well nourished.Yet I've been on these boards since 2005, have 1.6k posts (and that's just this forum) and never had any problems, until I met you.
I can clearly see that, much like your ability to edgeguard..:embarrass
I laugh because I think you're amusing.
I'm bored and like I said, you're amusing. So this is just a way to pass time :embarrass
I'm not trolling, I watched both matches and gave you advice. And I ate my dinner a couple of hours ago, thanks for caring..
Way to misinterpret it..I love the correlation you drew between intelligence and edge guarding,
is that why your countries GDP is garbage? Because its brightest minds (who are excellent edge guarders, of course) come up with garbage like that?
You're not a problem for me at all.Well, at least I gave you a laugh... and I'm only a "problem" for you if you keep on posting.
Because you have made it very clear you don't want people to criticize you.No more critique is taking place, except of people's personalities/intelligence levels.
per capita GDP. So per person, you guys have more.before you bring GDP to the table, look at this link please
as you can see, USA is below Netherlands
get *****