Mini-WWYP Scores and Comments (Scores posted! Next contest coming soon!)

[Eor]

Matt said around tomorrow.

 

[OnYourMark]

Congratulations, Scav and Sheepyman!

Darn... oh, by the way, Virgilijus, did you really find THE mistake? Which one did you find? lol.
Darn again... "corny is also the one word I would use to describe this story" I knew that was coming. The day after Christmas, I told my cousin, "Ahh! it's so corny! and cliché!" >.<
Darn... "I think that your story lacked a lot of necessary color." I'm color blind (Actually, it's color defficient!). haha.
I could go on...

I'll try again. I'll try harder. BEWARE! I will never quit!
EDIT: I'll learn how to ride that bicycle
EDIT2: Thanks for the comments. I have learned much.

 

[Scav]

Hooray

Though I'm warning everyone now: if anyone has sex in their story for WWYP4, I'm going to judge you REALLY closely (harshly). I don't want Gideon breathing down my neck

Congrats everyone, and thanks to the judges for putting in the time.

WWYP4 goes up tomorrow.

 

[Kragen]

My scores differed the most from the other two judges. That makes me awesome (or stupid, but I'm going to go with awesome).

I don't care what anyone says, Kragen's story deserved top three.

Thank you

I'm happy with fifth place.

Edit: Of course, congratulations to all who scored well!

English isn’t your first language?

Why are you asking this? Because I've told that?

I don’t know if it’s against the rules to write about a song with such few lyrics, but I don’t think it’s very fair.

I'm confused, why isn't it fair? Because there are lesser words to be taken into account in the story?

 

[Virgilijus]

Congratulations to Eorlingas, sheepyman...and Scav.

Edit: I was hoping the next prompt would have something to do with myths but after looking at the first WWYP...

 

[Skywalker]

'Tis the story of how Sky gets his *** handed to him... for the second time.

Edit: Virgiligus, I'm hoping that WWYP4's prompt will be based on the genre of mystery, fantasy, or sci-fi.

 

[demoncaterpie]

To Kragen: Your song only had four lines, and they were pretty ambiguous. You could have written about anything and it would have fit the song.

But, your story was awesome and that's all that matters

 

[Sizzle]

Congrats to all. I appreciate all of the comments, and I especially thank you demoncaterpie for critiquing me the way you did. I appreciate knowing what I did wrong. I should have posted a link to an mp3 of the song. It really isn't an upbeat song at all, pretty slow in fact. The end has two sort of emphatic shouts but thats it, lol. But overall, this being my first WWYP and really any entry into a competition, I thought I did fine. I probably shouldn't put it off to the last minute either 0.o

 

[demoncaterpie]

Congrats to all. I appreciate all of the comments, and I especially thank you demoncaterpie for critiquing me the way you did. I appreciate knowing what I did wrong. I should have posted a link to an mp3 of the song. It really isn't an upbeat song at all, pretty slow in fact. The end has two sort of emphatic shouts but thats it, lol. But overall, this being my first WWYP and really any entry into a competition, I thought I did fine. I probably shouldn't put it off to the last minute either 0.o

No problem Sizzle. I'm glad you learned something.

Here's to your next story (*cheers*).

 

[technomancer]

THX DEMONCATERPIE FOR TEH BAD PLOT SCORES TO MASKE ME LAST ZOMG

lol just kidding, I was afraid I was going to lose points for not having a plot. I also thought I was going to lose points for the girlfriend, 'cuz that broke the tone on the whole, IMO, but haha you guys all liked it.

 

[Wak]

Can't wait to know the theme of the next WWYP!

 

[EEvisu]

Any idea when is it cause I'd like to try and enter lol

 

[Skywalker]

http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=94589

February 16th is the deadline.