Haha, well, I actually had to be pretty vague so that I didn't break any rules. I would have also been specific about being a "delivery boy" for the gang, but I just wanted to be careful.This is what tipped me off. It just didn't seem right; it didn't quite feel like the way someone would talk about it if they had experienced these events.
Still, it was fun, and I read the rest of the story anyway and enjoyed it.
Haha, thanks! I'll take any donations.I still wanna send you moeny, that story was to touchinq!
By the way guys, how was the actual story? I'm thinking about getting into writing fiction.