Forum Fight: The Story Forum

[Grizzlpaw]

[COLLAPSE="Airship Temple"]




Xiroey: Take that!

Take that, prosperity!​

And that!​

-Bowser Jr. walks in and sees Xiroey destroying the temple-​

Bowser: What the Cheep are you doing!?

-Xiroey pauses with a glowing hammer hovering over his head-​

Xiroey: What does it look like?

I'm giving prayer.​

-Resumes breaking things-​

Bowser Jr: YOU'RE WRECKING MY SHIP!!




Xiroey: But thats what you're supposed to do at temples right?

-Smashes a statue-​

Have a nervous meltdown. Come closer to God.




Bowser Jr.: THAT'S NOT HOW IT WOR--

Bam!!!
​

Xiroey: What was that...?





Bowser Jr.: Oh, just everyone you care about being attacked.

Which you would've known--

if you weren't down here WRECKING MY SHIP!​

Bam!!!​

Xiroey: Sounds serious...

We had better get up there.​

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Gliscor: Life just couldn't give us a break. Could it?

-The stench of Oil and gunpowder fills the air. The ship tilts ever so slightly to the side from all the damage it took.-

-Up above, Magolor continues screaming and crying for help-​

Chrysalis: I'm starting to get a Migraine...

-Xiroey and Boswer Jr. burst out on deck-​

Xiroey: Whats going on? Is anyone hurt?





Magolor: Ahhhh! Xiroey, get me down from heere!

-Xiroey takes in the giant dog-ape hugging on to the Lookout post-​

Xiroey: -blinks-
Aanyway, I heard explosions, whats happening?





Mari: It's Muhti again.

He's attacking the ship!​

Xiroey: Muhti!?





Magolor: Seriously, somebodyyyy!




Mari: Somebody should probably--




-Xiroey pulls out a glowing blue hammer-
Xiroey: On it...




Chrysalis: Hey, that's new.

What exactly do you plan to do with that.​

-Xiroey shrugs. Then tosses it at the dog's head-​

Rover: Rawoo--?

BOOM!​

-The hammer connects with a thunderous crash. Rover's head shoots back from the impact. His finger's lose their grip on the pole-​

Magolor: Faaaalliiiing!~

-Xiroey extends his Psychic to Magolor and holds him in the air. The beast dog hits the deck of the ship with a loud Crash-​

Mari: Nice...




Xiroey: Thanks. I think, maybe, I've been reading too many marvel comics--

Bam!!!​

Crack...​

Bowser Jr: *sobbing*

Daddy's Airship...​

Mari: We need to defend ourselves quick!




Xiroey: [To bowser Jr]: Does this ship have any cannons?




Bowser Jr: *Sniff* B-Bullet Bills...




Xiroey: Use Them!

Gliscor and I will head over to the other ship.​

Mari: Are you nuts!?

Bam!!!​

Do you realize just how dangerous that is?





Xiroey: What choice do we have?





Chrysalis: I'll come too!





Magolor: Guuuyyyys!~




Gliscor: Xiro, you'd better let him down.




Xiroey: Oh... Sorry.

-He lets Magolor down gently-​

-Kissing the ground-
Magolor: LAAAND!

(well, ship...)​

Chrysalis: Well good so that makes Me, Xiroey, Gliscor, and--




Gliscor: Buddy!!!~




Chrysalis: Buddy?

Rooooaaarr!​

Mari: Is that...?

-By squinting their eyes, the group can just barely make out a black object spewing fire against the opposing ship-​

Chrysalis: Perfect Timing.




Gliscor: Charizard's here! Yay!




Mari: Uhm... Guys?

- Shortly after the appearance of Charizard, another newcomer appears. This one is much easier to make out than the last.-​

Xiroey: No way...




Valoo: Imputant humans!




Chrysalis: That... Is a big Dragon.

[glow]Valoo[/glow]
Has joined the brawl

Gliscor: Yeah! Woohoo!




Chrysalis: Gliscor, calm down please...




Xiroey: What are we standing around gawking for?

EVERYBODY ATTAAAACK!​

Fitting Music - Airship Battle
(Music - "Dragon Rider - Two Steps From Hell")

[/COLLAPSE]

 

[smashfan666]

(after his collision with the airship, rover shrinks back down to his original size)

rover: "rrrgh... wh... what happened?"

fido: "boss!"

spot: "come quick! you gotta see this!"

rover: "(notices the giant dragon attacking the group) a giant dragon fighting a group of people. that, you actually DO see everyday, here..."

spot: "we gotta help them! after all, they did turn you back to normal..."

rover: "wait... those guys getting their ***es burned by valoo shrunk me back down?"

fido: "yessir."

rover: "well... if they helped us, i see no reason we shouldn't do the same for them! ATTACK IT, PACK!!"

fido & spot: "right, boss!"

(the diamond dogs climb onto valoo's long neck)

NEWCOMER!

Diamond Dogs joined your team!​

 

[mars16]

*Meanwhile*

*Quan chi and Mileena do MORTAL KOMBAT!!!*

HOW THE HELL DID i end up ...... here...... I wanna go HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!
... i DONT DESERVE THIS ABUSE AT ALL!!
______________________

 

[Muhti]

Dimentio: Tabuu, go help them!

*Tabuu goes an glides to the airship*

*Dimentio teleports elsewhere, most likely the ship*

Muhti: FIRE!!!

Gengar: I'll kill the siblings.....

*Gengar seeps into the floor*

Muhti: FIRE!!

-BAM-

Mr.L: MUSIC TO MY EARS!

*Muhtis new necklace glows a bloody red and fires at the ship*

Drawcia: My, my, you have Maris powers! Ooooo, and their ship is ablaze! Yippee!

 

[smashfan666]

(dracwia freezes for a second, then faints. her eyes turn a solid black. she is now lost in her own thoughts...)

(cut to inside drawcia's mind. she is in the middle of a completely white area)

drawcia: "hey... wh- what's going on?! i don't deserve this kind of sappy treatment!"

???: "how right you are..."

drawcia: "where are you?!"

(black writing appears on the solid white ground)

FOLLOW ME...

(arrows also appear on the ground, also in writing format)

drawcia: "this is so creepypasta..."

(drawcia follows the arrows for what seems like forever, until eventually finding a paintbrush and paints)

drawcia: "!!! FINALLY! RED!"

(drawcia hugs the paint set, spilling some paint in the process. the paint blots on the ground alter themselves to form a painted version of discord)

paint discord: "heheheheheheheh..."

drawcia: "...discord?"

paint discord: "welcome to your lucky day, drawcia. you've found the one thing you could love more than your own sheer beauty. (dissolves) paint as you please, milady. it's your mental state..."

(giddy, drawcia begins to paint a replica of herself on the ground)

(after finishing, the paint drawcia comes to life)

drawcia: "*SQUEE!* it's alive! (maniacally, as thunder booms in the background) ALIIIIIVE! AAAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!"

(paint drawcia slaps drawcia right in the face, leaving a yellow smear on drawcia.)

paint drawcia: "aaaaah, shaddup!"

drawcia: "AGH! hey! what'd ya' do that for, ya' fruitcake?!"

paint drawcia: "nothing personal, but i just think you're egotistical. a painter must not be so full of themself so as to paint stacks upon stacks of self-portraits! (snags paintbrust from drawcia) here, let me show you..."

(paint drawcia draws what appears to be a cyclone)

drawcia: "...okay, and the purpose of this is... ?"

(the cyclone comes to life, creating a raging hurricane that sucks drawcia in)

drawcia: "AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!"

(in the eye of the storm, drawcia comes across discord on a broomstick in a witch's outfit)

discord: "drawcia, my dear. it's hardly out of the ordinary."

drawcia: "how so, you living patchwork?!"

discord: "tell me, do you remember any of the mooks you've created, and just tossed aside like last week's sunday comics?"

drawcia: "well i... well, you see... it's..."

discord: "and do you ever consider their feelings when you believe they've outlived their usefulness?"

drawcia: "..."

discord: "do you ever consider how YOU feel when you shove them away?"

drawcia: "d-don't be ridiculous, discord! you're just bluffing me!"

discord: "oh, really?"

(discord and the cyclone disappear, leaving drawcia in the middle of a crowd illuminated by a dim red... a painted teddy bear comes forward)

drawcia: "t... terror teddy?"

terror teddy: "i love you, drawcy!"

drawcia: "...is this... ?"

(terror teddy grows to large proportions, gaining a bear trap for teeth)

terror teddy: "I LOVE YOU, DRAWCY..."

drawcia: "WHAT THE- ?!"

(terror teddy morphs into the fake groudon from Jirachi Wishmaker and sucks drawcia in)

drawcia: "AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH-"

(chomp!)

terror teddy: "YOU AND ME, DRAWCY... (distorted) FOREVER..."

(cut to drawcia floating in a bubble in a red area)

drawcia: "what's going on?! why'd my teddy turn into that giant not-groudon thing?!"

(various figured in other bubbles float around drawcia)

misc. things from drawcia's past: "we're back, drawcy! back for more fun!"

drawcia: "no! NO! STOP IT!!"

smiley paintbrush: "you're safe now, drawcy..."

broken paint trainset: "you're, (distorted) WITH US..."

items from drawcia's past: "TOGETHER WE'LL HAVE FUN... FOREVER..."

drawcia: "I JUST WANNA GET OUT OF HERE!!!"

(discord floats by in another bubble)

discord: "oh, poor drawcy... and here i thought you loved your old toys. and here they are, after being tossed aside so callously... they REEK with age... seriously, paintbrush, have you ever heard of a shower?"

drawcia: "i... i got older. i had to put SOMETHING behind me every now and again! live in the now, as they say. things change, you know..."

discord: "(merging his and drawcia's bubble traps, and caressing drawcia's head with his finger) if your interests can be changed so easily, then maybe we can do the same about your heart..."

(back in the real world, drawcia loses all color to her, and her personality changes as well)

mr. L: "drawcia, are you alright?"

drawcia: "...oh, i'm fine, dear... just... (clenching teeth) PEACHY..."

 

[mars16]

*Meanwhile*

(Sneeking away while Mileena and Quan chi fight) < Finally I got away from them>

Raiden: From whom?

From those freaks........... Who are you?

Raiden: I am Raiden, Former elder god. I over heard that you defeated Shoa Khan.

Yes I did, can you please get me out of here..... this.. this freaky realm and send me back to mines PLEASE!!!

Raiden: But why go back to a world that is in shambles!! The evil of your world has won the war, Who is fighting back? Why try, it is over. THE DIMENTO creature will win, give up.

Who the hell is Dimento?

Raiden: you now the one working along side Muhti...


Who the F*ck is Muhti?

Raiden: <This kids clueless>

*Meanwhile*

 

[Grizzlpaw]

Chrysalis: DOGS!!!

-The dogs pause, dangling form Valoo's neck-​

Your fight is not with Valoo.

Look Yonder.​

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Latios: Gliscor, Incomming Cannon Balls!




Gliscor: Gotcha!

-Gliscor dashes straight into the attack, and lets the projectiles crumble against his Protect-​

-Latios flies by him, and angles himself towards Muhti's ship-​

Latios: Lets see how you jerks like it...

-Latios brings his claws together, and summons a screeching ball of white light-​

Gliscor: Watch out, Don't hit Charizard!




Latios: Then he better move!

-Latios unleashes the sphere-
​

 

[mars16]

*Meanwhile*

You Know so much stuff about SMASH BOARDS REALM!!!!!

Raiden: I've seen what chaos, the smash boards realm could bring to other realms. Thats why I will not allow in and out. I will not Let Quan chi open a portal that leads to that realm. Im the one who is stopping his ability to travel through realms!

Really? Well, can you get me out of here please just send me back.

Raiden: Sorry Mars16 of SMASH BOARDS REALM. You are stuck in Outer world for ever

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


*Meanwhile*

 

[Mari]

Mari:...And what do I do? Nothing....Jeez...

Magolor: Don't worry, Mari. We're staying right here with you.

Sonic: Yeah! We'll protect you!

???: Awww...That's soooo sweeet!


(Marx suddenly appears right in front of the trio.)

Marx: Hey, Hey, Hey...

Mari's still alive...You just absolutley refuse to die, Don'tcha?

Mari: Marx...You're being controled by Dimentio!

Marx:....Duh. And you know what?

I'm starting to like it!


(Marx Springs forward, Snaping his wings straight at Mari...

But is suddenly stopped by a star-shaped sheild! )

Magolor: Marx....I don't want to hurt you. Please stop.

Marx: Oh...So you won't hurt your best friend?

That makes this MUCH easier!

Magolor: ....Sonic.

Take Mari. Get to the Lor. Get EVERYONE to the Lor.

I will handle Marx.


Marx: I'm going to enjoy this...


-Magolor and Marx Remix. GOOGLE IT!-

 

[Grizzlpaw]

(( Haha, this should be fun.

Because now everyone's defense just fell ))


SUDDEN DEATH!




Gliscor: You... Hit Charizard didn't you?




Latios: Yeah.

And also everyone else. Including myself...​

Gliscor: You do realize that one of us is royally f***ed now right?




Latios: Yaaaa!
Sudden Death War Wooooo!





Gliscor: Dude, this isn't a good thi--

Aww, screw it!​

Lets start tearin' **** up!
Bwahahahahahahahahahaha!~




[Please note: Do not leave these two alone toegher!]

 

[Muhti]

Mr.L: CRAP!

*The Brobot teleports away, projected at Gliscor*

Dimentio: *taps on Brobots window outside*Watch out, I'll help out

*The ship sends a cannon directly at Gliscor*

Muhti: BULLSEYE!

*The Bot was teleported to their old spot.*

Dimentio: I have business to take care of, stay safe

-ELSEWHERE-

Discord: I got Drawcy, where's my choco milk? Hello? Anybody?

???: Hello.... Discord..... You're ruining my plans

Discord: YOU'RE A SICKO! AND THAT'S SAYING SOMETHING!

Dimentio: Protagonists.... Never look at it from the bad guys point of view

Discord: What are you talking about? And where's my chocolate milk?

Dimentio: I was a good guy too. I told jokes with villagers, until your so called protagonist Blumiere ruined it, he destroyed his own kingdom! He ruined my life, his people's lives, his parents lives! Did the heroes care? NO!

*His no bounced off the walls harsh*

*Discord was silent*

Dimentio: *Starts crying* All I wanted, was to avenge my kingdom! Now you all will suffer!

*The ground started to rumble*

Dimentio:Ciao

-BattleGround-

*Dimentio teleports in the Brobot*

Dim: Drawcy, come here.

Drawcia: Sure, I suppose

Dim: you're not the same, did Discord do anything to you?

Drawcia: Uhhhhh...

*In an instant Dimentio returns Drawcia back to normal*

Dimentio: There we go. Oh, and I brought a surprise for all of the heroes!

*The sky then grew dark with purple and yellow Dimentios*

Mr.L: One Dimentio is enough.... But 9,001?!?!??

 

[smashfan666]

(it is revealed that muhti's post was really just a though by smashfan666)

*shudder* i'd hate if THAT happened...

flim: "i'd have to agree. 9001 dimentios is just overkill."

(meanwhile, marx suddenly faints in the same manner as drawcia from before...)

magolor: "...the hell?"

(marx starts writhing, squirming, and cringing. as if something were tampering with his mind)

sonic: "what's going on?"

magolor: "i'm not sure..."

(marx loses all color to his body and re-awakens)

marx: "huh? (notices magolor, mari, and sonic) AAGH!! (curls into a fetal position)"

sonic: "grey colors, opposite personality..."

mari: "...(smiles) discord..."

(meanwhile, in the mental realm, we are waiting outside a door labeled "marx", signifying that we are just outside marx's mental state. discord exits the door)

discord: "2 down, a few more to go..."

elecman.exe: "aren't you the least bit worried about dimentio? i mean, if he can turn them back to normal?"

discord: "oh, he should be of no concern. it'll take YEARS for him to be of any problem with how i get to people..."

i can't believe dimentio would turn our own allies against us like that...

gilda: "sucks just as much for us, smash. and i don't even know half these people..."

elecman.exe: "i suggest we go for near next, he can pose quite a threat if he catches onto what's happening."

flim: "agreed! next mental state, brother?"

flam: "next mental state!"

(we all board the super speedy cider squeezy 6000, then head on to near's mental world)

(discord enters near's mind)

discord: "here we go!"

(cut to near in a void, with only a puppet as company... the puppet begins to float away)

near: "(chases the puppet) get back here!"

(near follows the puppet around for a while, until it finally returns, but with discord's face)

discord/puppet: "near. looks like you've been left behind by your TRUE friends, huh?"

near: "you speak foolishness, draconequus. dimentio would not simply abandon his troop."

discord/puppet: "i'm not talking about dimentio, neary-boy... smashfan needs your help, near. the whole world of smashboards needs your help. despite what dimentio may have you believe, evil is NOT the way!"

near: "hmph, lies. the world would be MUCH better off without those like smashfan in the way of true freedom."

discord/puppet: "yes, well, surely you've at least CONSIDERED swapping back since dimentio snagged you, right?"

near: "last i checked, dimentio's deal was pretty solid."

discord/puppet: "a stubborn one, this near. the point i'm trying to get across is; you're not cut out for evil, near. you're talents are much better appreciated if you'd put them to use for good."

near: "...pass."

(discord turns back into his normal form)

discord: "OOOGH, i HATE when people pull sh** like this!"

(discord slams his finger onto near's head, turning him grey)

discord: "you've been cruel for far too long, good sir! time to be kind! (bends neck backwards and gets all up in near's face) ARRIVEDERCI!"

(discord comes out of the door to near's mind, huffing)

discord: "that one was probably the most stubborn yet! (puts fingers to face in attempt to regain composure) ...anyway. moving on... who's up for giving Mr. L his turn?"

buizel: "well, we're going to have to sooner or later. so hell, why not sooner?"

gilda: "by the way, now that doll boy's his opposite self... what do you suppose he's like?"

discord: "trust me, you DON'T want to know..."

(meanwhile, near is dancing around dimentio, skipping and singing)

near: "sunshine, lollipops and, rainbows, everything that's wonderful is what i feel when, we're together!"

drawcia: "what are YOU singing about?!"

near: "oh, i'm just embracing this lovely world we live in. don't you ever wish to just frolic through the flowers with the wind blowing through your hair, drawcy?"

drawcia: "admittedly, yes, but have you SEEN this place?! it's a DISASTER!"

dimentio: "WTF is happening to my troops?!"

 

[Muhti]

L: Pretty simple Dimentio, Discord is going into their mental state

Dimentio: DIDN'T I JUST GIVE HIM A PEP TALK?!

*Dimentio teleports to Discord*

Dimentio: YOU!

Discord: Oh hi!

*Before Disord could attack or do anything else, Dimentio planted a florosprout on him, only this one, connected to his heart*

Dimentio: Now then. Who is your leader?

Discord: Lord Dimentio!

Dimentio: Good, now take my army out of their mental state!

Discord: Yes sir.

Dimentio: Let's see what Smashfan has up his sleeve now *****!

-Brobot-

Dimentio: Guess who's my new slave! And if somebody takes off his florosprout, he dies.

Muhti: So our troops will return to normal?

Dim: Hes working on it.

 

[smashfan666]

(discord finishes his dramatization that is muhti's post/dimentio's invalid interference)

discord: "*shudder* i'd hate to be susceptible to florosprouts... anyway, onto the last one..."

(in muhti's mind... muhti is chasing a rabbit)

muhti: "i've got you now, angel..."

(muhti chases the rabbit, only to find discord at his *muhti's* computer)

discord: "oh, i can see why you like it here so much, VERY refreshing to just let it all out..."

muhti: "hey, i know you. you're with smashfan! get offa' there and put 'em up! (assumes fighting stance)"

discord: "hey, i'm only here to help you better yourself!"

muhti: "fat chance, i'm already my best at fighting."

discord: "listen closely, this is important."

(discord flies around muhti)

discord: "smashfan's been having doubts about you, as your idol is making your mind askew. if one more wrong choice you choose to pursue, your once friend shall be forced comment without you."

(discord shows muhti a vision using a virtual boy)

discord: "don't look in there too long, these things can cause eyestrain..."

(muhti sees smashfan at his computer, looking very disappoint)

*sigh* and to think, i almost thought i had reason to stay...

(cue the vision showing smashfan breaking all his friendships, logging out and taking smashboards off his bookmarks)

bye, d**ks. i think i'll check how SONBoomer's doing.

(muhti backs out of the virtual boy)

muhti: "he... he's actually considering... ??"

discord: "sadly, yes. you can break from dimentio and leave his force, or you can carry on putting your friendship on the line for the sake of your idol. your choice..."

(without discord even touching him, muhti slowly turns grey)

muhti: "i... i..."

+SFX: dramatic heartbeat+

 

[Muhti]

-ignore this-

 

[mars16]

just to be sure..

Muhti your still evil right???

 

[Muhti]

No, I guess I was forced to become good, one way or another :/

 

[Grizzlpaw]

Aww, Muhti's good?


That's no fun :<

 

[Muhti]

I had to, it was unfair that Smashfan all of a sudden made my team drowsy and blank, including me, the only person left was Dimentio. I couldn't do anything anymore. Oh well.

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Dimentio: WHAT THE!

*Dimentio awoke in midair, Mr.L, Muhti, and Drawcia yelling at him to wake up*

Dimentio:It was a dream..... Thank God

-AirShip-

???: Hello Xiroey.... Latias.....

Xiroey: GENGAR! STOP THIS!

Gengar: But why? Its fun

Latias: You're insane!

Gengar: I don't mind. Always taking advantage of me *nudges at Xiro* But, forgive and forget


and die

-Brobot-

Drawcia: Hey, uhhh now what?

Muhti: FIRE!!!

*Another cannon fires at the airship*

Mr.L: We wait....

 

[Grizzlpaw]

Strategic Withdrawl?

You must fight Muhti.
Think as you would if it were actually happening!


Normally I woldn't do this.
Buuuut, so Muhti doesn't quit I shall tell you that some of your options are:

[COLLAPSE="Stuffz"]

• Run Away (Hey, eveybody has to retreat sometimes)
• Plant Florosprouts on your own team
• Have Gengar make them Sleepwalk
• Remind them of their true goal - (Similar method to how it was countered in the anime)
• Wake them all up somehow, then have Gengar eat their visions (if he tries it again)
• Distract Discord by writing someone's name on the Death Note - (Flam's maybe?)
• Stuffz

Gotta think on your feet man.
Can't let others out wit ya. [/COLLAPSE]


...Also I just got Ninja'd :/

 

[Muhti]

Beat ya to it buddy LOL

 

[Mari]

(((....and this is what happeneds when I leave for ONE DAY.....O_o )))

-The Lor-

Marx: GET AWAY FROM ME! GET AWAY!!

Mari: Marx, It's me! Mari!

Marx: NO! LIES! GET AWAY, SHE-DEMON!

Sonic: Well, he's hopeless. AND we're in sudden Death.

Magolor: We should go help Xiro and the others...

Sonic: Right. Mari, You stay here with Marx.


Marx: NO! Don't leave me here with her! *glares at Mari* She's evil...


Mari: -.-

Stay safe.


Sonic: You too.




-Outside-


Gengar: Now we'll see who's the stronger one, eh, Xiro?


Xiro: Come on, buddy...I don't wanna hurt you.


Gengar: UGH. Why is it that you're allways so...WEAK?!

I HATE IT! I want you to hit me with all you got and Don't hold back!



???: That's no way to treat a friend.

???: And now you deal with us!


(Magolor warps right next to Xiro along with Sonic.)


Xiro: Mari?

Sonic: Safe, in the Lor with Marx.


Magolor: Meaning we can kick his butt with no worries.


Xiro:....Gengar....I'm sorry in advance....But this is for you're own good!





-The Lor-


Marx: NOOOOO!!!! GET THE F*CK AWAY FROM-

Mari: Cookie?

Marx:.............Only because I'm hungry. *noms on cookie* Nom nom nom....



Mari: You're wierd, Marx, you know that?


???: And you're so strange as well, Mari!


(Mari turns around to find Dimentio Leaning against the wall)


Mari:......


Dimentio: I must say, You're one of the most strong willed human I've ever met.

You just refuse to stay dead, don't you.


Mari:...I know what you want. You want me in you're army.


Dimentio: EEEEHH! WRONGDAMUNDO!

You're pritty much useless to me now.

But....since you're completely mortal...AND a girl....

You Make the perfect hostage!



Mari: .....Fine.


Dimentio: Resistance is futile- Say what now?


Mari: Take me. But don't hurt Marx. Don't hurt anyone.

Just take me.



Dimentio: ....That was easier then I thought.....Very well.


Mari: (....If I can get to Muhti, I can get my necklace...Unless Muhti Binded his life force already, which would grant him my powers..... )


Dimentio: Off we go, then!

Muhti will be absolutely GLAD to see you....

 

[Muhti]

((Mari, I already used your necklace XD, it's mine now, but my life doesn't depend on it. I used it and it burned your ship))

-Brobot-

???: I got a hostage!

Muhti: Dimentio! Don't scare me like that!

Dimentio: Sorry, I brought a present!

Mari: *sighs* Hi

*Muhti slowly walks to Mari, staring at her*

Muhti: I suppose you want this? *Holds up necklace*

It's already mine dear girl. I used it to burn your ship. Even though its connected to me, my life doesn't depend on it.

*Mari stares at him hard, bewild that Muhti knew what she was going to do*

*Muhti puts his foot on Mari*

Muhti: Ya know, you look cute like this. As my slave I mean. You heroes ruined my life, now I'll ruin yours. They killed my parents! AND YET YOU CONSIDERED THEM HEROES!

Dimentio: Well this is getting awkward *snaps fingers*

Muhti: Now stay here. FIRE!

 

[smashfan666]

(dimentio lands back in the brobot, to a bitter drawcia and mr. l, and an indifferently carefree near)

dimentio: "... (holds up mari) you don't even care that i captured mari, do you?"

drawcia, near, & mr. l: "nope."

dimentio: "well, at least i've still got... (holds up... MARI/MUHTI'S NECKLACE?!) this..."

near: "ooh! muhti's necklace! however did you get it?"

dimentio: "i've got my connections..."

(drawcia takes the necklace)

dimentio: "HEY! you give that back!"

drawcia: "KEEP-AWAY! (throws the necklace to mr. l)"

dimentio: "gimme that necklace!"

mr. l: "(throws necklace back to drawcia) what necklace?"

(drawcia & dimentio toss the necklace back and forth to eachother)

near: "music for your little duel? (puts the radio on)"

+brobot radio: the music from TF2's Wacky Races map+

dimentio: "...*sigh* f**k THIS. (extends arm to snatch the necklace when it lands in drawcia's hands) there, problem solved."

near: "bravo, dimmy! W00T! (holds up... the necklace?)"

dimentio: "wha- ? (holds up the necklace he snatched, but it turns out to be a bomb bird from Angry Birds)"

bomb bird: "heheheheh!"

dimentio: "AAAAAAGGGHH!!!"

(BOOM!)

dimentio: "(sigh) i can't believe this. my troops... my friends... have turned into EVEN BIGGER jerks than they were before!! A.I.D!"

(AID, the flying robot that was my former assistant, appears)

AID: "yes, lord dimentio?"

dimentio: "congratulations, AID. you're the new muhti. (puts the necklace in AID's compartment)"

AID: "ME?! b-but, what if he finds out i've been impersonating him?! *shudder* THAT won't end well..."

dimentio: "too bad, you're muhti now..."

AID: "muhti aside, aren't you missing someone?"

dimentio: "nope, we've got (hand to drawcia) the grump, (to mr. l) the brute, (to near) and the little lad who loves berries and cream... that just about covers it..."

AID: "what about marx?"

dimentio: "he's a coward now, he's no help to us..."

(AID casts a deathly glare)

dimentio: "...fine, we'll go get the coward..."

(meanwhile)

discord: "now, to make their changes complete... back to marx?"

back to marx...

flim: "(nudging flam, who's been frothing at the mouth for some time) uhh, flam? hey, bro!"

(flam gets up)

flam: "how was that?"

flim: "perfect rabies act!"

(cut to inside marx's mind, marx is cowering)

???: "marx? remember me?"

marx: "s... smashfan?"

(i appear, in an empathetic light)

remember when we used to fly around together? you used to love fighting for good causes...

(discord appears, and casts a memory spell on him)

(marx has many flashbacks. from smashfan reviving him from a trophy state, to both flying over smashboards city, to marx letting loose a powerful screech at wilfre)

(back in the real world, marx regains his colors, and his personality pre-dimentio)

marx: "*takes note of sonic, gliscor, and chrysalis* sonic?"

sonic: "s'been a while, marx."

marx: "i'm sorry about everything that's happened. after mari dragged me off, dimentio got to my head. he must've twisted everything all willy-nilly. it's a good thing i remembered the good times when i did... can you all ever forgive me? (places hat over face sheepishly)"

sonic: "(crouching down to marx) we already have, little guy. now c'mon, we've got a sudden death to crash!"

marx: "it'll be my pleasure!"

NEWCOMER!

Marx joined your team!​

(meanwhile)

dimentio: "ah, but... before we do... i'd like to add another to our squadron... (warps away)"

(cut to the ruins of equestria. a small, pink filly with a sparkling tiara is walking through what used to be a school ground)

(dimentio pops in)

dimentio: "aah, my little pony..."

tiara filly: "what do YOU want?"

dimentio: "let's be frank here. you don't like the way the world is right now, do you?"

tiara filly: "i guess it's KINDA cruddy. i mean, it's nice to have some alone time, but..."

dimentio: "then come with me. together, you and i could lead the forces of darkness on their final onslaught against the heroes... they've been LYING to you this whole time, little one... they claim that everything will be alright by the end of the day, and just look what's happened..."

tiara filly: "hmm... i guess you have a point there, mask guy."

dimentio: "so what do ya' say? will you join me... diamond tiara?"

(an evil glint *well, eviler...* comes into diamond tiara's eyes)

diamond tiara: "you got it... by the way. just what's your name, anyway?"

dimentio: "heh... it's Dimentio."

(dimentio and diamond tiara are warped back to the brobot)

dimentio: "alright, let's get the whiner back, see if we can't b**ch-slap him back to us..."

 

[mars16]

Him by the sound of Muhti's last post, He is still evil... because he going to make Mari his slave.... srry Im just trying to stay on the right track.
__________________________
*Meanwhile*

(Sitting in the forest looking at the tree's as they stair back) God why Do I get the worst of luck.

Raiden: Because you let your gaurd down, did'nt see the magic that sent you here.

I was not asking you.

Raiden: Yes you did! Im a god.

God.....

Raiden: What?

I was not....... Nevermind.
__________

*Meanwhile, in sky world*

The girl: (Sitting back having people fan her with big leafs and such) This is the life.

Asora: I think we should go back do, Im getting ......worried.

The girl: You worry to much Asora.

Asora: Everyone could be dead, even Mars.

The girl: If Mars die's, he'd be laying up here..... with ◇me◇

Asora: F©ck this, Im going done, getting permition.

The girl: What?

Asora: You can stay up here not do anything and be lazy.

The girl:...... But Ill be lonely.

Asora: You have your faners.

*Meanwhile*

 

[Muhti]

((I'm confused too. The whole thing with Discord was just a nightmare from Dimentio. And Mari is under my control and Near, Drawcy, and Mr.L are normal. I'm confused....))

 

[smashfan666]

(don't f**k this up. based on my understanding of how you've taken these stories so far, i'm beggining to think letting so many into the main story was a huge mistake)

(SPECIAL STORY: original idea became the story directly after. i can roll with this)

(STORY AFTER SPECIAL: no problems, very little interference, everything flowed swimmingly. some minor things got their plug pulled, but very little jimmy-rustling)

(SECOND-TO-LAST: was originally not going to take place in a virtual world. it was planned that discord would escape and warn smashfan of the organization capturing everyone, then smashfan would gather a team of who remains (an idea that resurfaced in the current story). here is where i started to have my doubts)

(CURRENT/FINAL MAIN STORY: was originally going to involve the AVS more directly, and not refer to them as this "Plague Union". no kefka. i can roll with this. but now, there is just too much conflict between whether discord completes his objective of turning everyone back to normal or dimentio interfering for anything to properly get done. i introduced diamond tiara as a companion to dimentio as a last-ditch effort to keep the bad guys looking absolutely heinous. now i am not so certain if letting xiroey or muhti in the main story was a good idea.)

(so yeah, currently contemplating in-story suicide and abandoning the thread. i'm just not sure if i want to do this anymore... we'll see, but you all must roll with my decisions as well as eachother's and be on your best behavior... remember: a story must flow like a low and smooth river...)

 

[Mari]

Ah... ....I'm sorry, Smash. I can litteraly roll with anything you guys throw at me, but.....

If I've been a pain in the A$$, I'm really Sorry.....

PLEASE DON'T STOP POSTING! I find this quite fun....

 

[Muhti]

But smash it was flowing smoothly. We had showdowns placed and all of a sudden you bring Discord and ruin everything with the mind realm. Everyone was enjoying it too. I just don't really understand :/

 

[Mari]

Muhti! Don't go! PALLEEZZZ!! *makes puppy dog face*

 

[mars16]

i think this story is the longest we've had yet

 

[Mari]

Ack, That is true....Don't go, everyone!


Ok, Really, just because we had a plot conflict does not mean we should break up this thread!


Let's talk this out....Please?

 

[smashfan666]

i'm not trying to wreck anything, it's just that i'm only mapping out how this section needs to go, to take the best course of action and make the story interesting. storywriting is a serious thing, especially on the internet, what you put down sets the track. ya' can't just retcon EVERYTHING, y'know.

plus, EVERYTHING in my life conflicts at once. what with halloween having ended but 2 days ago and having to get ready for thanksgiving and christmas, hurricane sandy wrecking everyone's sh** nearby and my mind going into panic overdrive, my mind being at a COMPLETE STANDSTILL when trying to thing of material for my VG Cats fanfiction, the version of paint i'm stuck with leaving me COMPLETELY UNABLE to make new MLP/TTTE crossovers on my DeviantART account... i think you can see where i'm going with this...

my point is, i have too much on my plate at the moment, and just SOMEWHERE i'd like SOMETHING to go as planned .

so it's like this: this is the part of the story where dimentio's comrades turn on him due to discord turning them back to good, leaving dimentio with only AID, diamond tiara, and the sad fact he's been tested positive for the HiV, ADD, SAT, and HiT viruses... oh, and a ginormous freaking brobot with which he can still f**k sh** up...

 

[Muhti]

((Alright fine. I know how you feel as well. I've been in the middle of Hurricane Sandy as well and a lot has happened. I luckily got power at my aunts in Brooklyn and everywhere looks like a war zone. I also have to make a High School application, keep up with grades, waiting for power in my school and home, I just think that 2 stressed people put together isn't good))

________________________

Dimentio: F*ck. Ya know, you lunes shall not pass!

*With that Mr.L,Near, and Drawcia disappeared somewhere else*

Dimentio: Whew

((One thing though, I am still here, I never disappeared))

Muhti: Crazy dopes

Mari: *wheezes* Sounds like you

Muhti: **** up! *Brooklyn Accent*

Dimentio: Im calling a retreat GENGAR!

*A dark purple ghost came up*

Gengar: You called?

Dimentio: We are leaving, lets go.

Diamond Tiara: Finally. I hate fighting by air.

AID: Cant you fly?

DT: Uhhhh...

Muhti: Come on we need to go!

*Brobot and everything else inside dissapears*

 

[mars16]

*Meanwhile*

+Tetris- Type A+


So im stuck here.

Raiden: Yep.. Have beer.

Sure why not(Grabs beer)

Raiden: You Know......

What?

Raiden: There is one way you can get back.

Really!!!!

Raiden: No im Kidding.

A$$HOLE!!! u...U make me jsut wanna kill my self!!.......

*2 hours latr*

(drunk)God I think Ihad to much... Where... were did he go.
(Gets up )

+Hungover Music from Conker bad fur day+

Great stuck and....... agh my god.
Mileena: And were are you going?

Holy shi* arent u suppose to be fighting?

Mileena: Quan chi is dead!!! I have you all to my self.

Noooo....wait.... yesss

(Mileena removes her mask thing)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

*Meanwhile*

 

[Grizzlpaw]

Oh boy, I really picked a day to sleep in.
Please don't leave either of you!

Damnit, now I gotta write a long rant :/

[COLLAPSE="Wall of text"]I'm not sure if Muhti plans on playing the Antagonist role from this point on,
But, the thing is, Muhti does a "very" good job of playing the "villian" role.

Sowing seeds of doubt, creating dramatic tension, turning our heroes against each other.
Dude's a natural.

On the othet hand, you, smashfan, are probably one of, if not, the most qualified person
to run this thread atm. Due to you having good leadership qualities, organization skills, and (overall)
media knowlege... I really can't think of a person better suited for the job. So plz don't leave. Either of yoi.


The biggest problem we have is that not enough communication was given at the right times.
Smashfan, if you noticed a problem with the main storyline you needed only place a breif post explaining the issue. I mean, you gave Muhti permission to write part of the main plot , which is good because Muhti is quite good at keeping things fun and interesting.

But, after that, ya both sort of went off and did your own things. Yoy can't have two people trying to develop two different storylines without any sodt of communication or prior planning.
You WILL have conflict.

I think this was an excellent idea tbh,
Fighting against Muhti gives us a clear bad guy who works against us. It's much more interesting than fighting against a "CPU" badguy that we all create. Ya just have to be willing to let each other know your plans beforehand. Even if you aren't sure-- at least hint at them in the begining.


I will stop here before I end up writing a whole book on mobile.
Just know you two, that this has been really fun, and Mari and I would hate it if either of you left[/COLLAPSE]

 

[mars16]

And good job to Mars16 for just...... Bieng Mars16!!!!

-__________________

*Meanwhile*

(Standing over Mileena's dead body, covered in blood) *Sigh* my life.

)___________(

 

[Mari]

(((Xiro's Right, You guys are awesome! And I'm sorry for all the trouble you guys are going through. I live in Texas, So this isn't affecting me. But I know just how much things can Pile up and sh*t. And the Ironic thing is that I'm 15 and I freak people out with my wisdom and...Stuff.....

Listen, Guys, I Know You, Smash, Said we can't retcon everything, But I think this time we should. And you can Take the story WHEREVER YOUR HEART DESIRES! I'm WITH YOU, DUDE! *fistpump*

If you want to, that is. I'm TOTALLY FINE WITH RESTARTING.

How about you guys? Xiro? Muhti? Mars?

 

[Muhti]

Im fine with restarting.

 

[Grizzlpaw]

[COLLAPSE="Muhti's Ship - Lower Decks"]

Clang...
​

-The vent grill hits the ground with a metalic clash-


​

(???): Damn... gotta be more careful than that.

-The intruder checks left and right to make sure nobody heard the noise.-



​

(???): All clear.

-Nimble as a kitten, a small frame squezes himself out of the vent shaft and drops to the floor-

​

(???): Now, to find where they're hiding her.



- - - - - - - - - - - -
Lower Hallway--
- - - - - - - - - - - -



Gengar: Man, why do I always get the dirty work...

-Gengar drags Mari along by the hair. Hey eyes glow a hazy purple, signifying that she's been put under Gengar's sleep-



​

Gengar: Hmph, figures I'd get the disposal job.

I'm sick of others always taking advantage of--



Skit...

​

Gengar: What was...

Skit... Skit...



​

-Gengar looks left and right suspiciously-
Gengar: ...

Damn rats...


-Continues walking-
​

Skit...

Skreech!
​

-Gengar notices a presence behind himself-
​

Gengar: (Think you can sneak up on he do ya...?)

-Gengar spins around abruptly and shoots out his Shadow Ball-

-Theres a blur of movement as something small evades behind a trash can-



​

-Gengar drops Mari-
Genagr: I don't know who you are. But you picked the wrong time to try and play stow away--

-Gengar feels a powerful force strike him on the back of the head. And then he goes unconscious-

-A small boy stands over him, holding a Neon blue Yo-yo-
​

(???): Sorry buddy, but you're in my way right now.

-The kid reaches down and waves a hand over Mari's face-

-She bolts bolts out of her sleep, instantly on alert-



​

Mari: Alright dementio! Fork over the necklace and nobody gets--!




Kid: Hi.




Mari: Huh?

-Mari looks up and sees a small boy standing over her shoulder-




​

Mari: H-hi, who are you little boy?

-The boy's eyes glow red for a second, and he gives Mari a wink-
​

Mari: (Red eyes...) Ohmigosh!

Xiro?
​

Xiroey: Hehe...




Mari: What happened to your bo--

-Xiroey rushes over and puts a hand over her mouth-




​

Xiroey: Shh... I altered my transformation a bit so Muhti wouldn't know it was me.

I'm going to help you get your necklace back...



​

-Mari pulls his hand off-
Mari: Are you crazy?

Dementio, Brobot, and Diamond Tiara are in there!

What do you plan to do?


​

Xiroey: Don't know. But like this, it shouldn't be too hard to pry it from them.




Mari: You're more likely to get killed first!




-Xiroey smiles, then appears to fade out of exsistance-
Xiroey: Can't kill what they cant see.

Heheh...
​

[/COLLAPSE]

A restart sounds fun.
I'm game! :D