C.o.o.l.

[Sleepz]

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Okay, so my mom died... after the funeral the weridest thing
happen I met KiD CuDi and Lupe Fiasco. CuDi let me freestyle
on a track with him as well Lupe.

For those of you who don't know

Lupe Fiasco: Is the best lyricist out right now

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbiOexUs22E


KiD CuDi: Is like the chillest dude out now

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kmg48qjrmb4
(The beats sounds like Zelda)

So this is where things get dope

Kanye West wants me to sign to G.O.O.D. music label
(I'm only 16)

But I first have to finish school first ( Junior in H.S.)

But until then they want me to make Lyrical Book

My first song has these lyricals


Walked thought the door from school

Lying about what happen, so they’ll think I’m cool

But hoping they will not find out the truth

I’d be so exposed if they do

How those kids knocked out my tooth

At school I’m that quiet kid

Getting picked on for my appearance

For seven years he stayed patience

He stayed plotting out his vengeance

When his plan was ready

He heard a voice that said hold steady

So he question his current actions

He thought about his thinking causing meta cognition

His brain instantly went off like a chain reaction

He just wanted to be accepted

They saw the right side of him and treated him like a nuclear reaction

You made me like this for a purpose
But I still don’t why yet

You made me like this for a purpose
But I’m forever in your debt

You made me like this for a purpose
I thank you for it as I set out my path
I should show the world happiness not wrath
Not a dictatorship, but more of a friendship

Happiness and peace is what we all want
The world that we live in now is unconsciousness
300 people out of millions run a country and taunt
Should I through away my mortality and try to save the billions
I will so my words will become universality
In a dimensional reality were my words are spirituality
As a formality I save millions, but theatricality can’t save the billons
As for the this verse I put you in a virtual reality to save the human race nationality
Watch me as a save billions of civilians


You Made Me

Copyright: G.O.O.D. MUSIC LABEL

 

[Falconv1.0]

I'd like to be first out of many to say

lol wut.

 

[fromundaman]

What do you mean wut? He walked thought the door from school. I'm sure it makes perfect sense if you're tripping on acid.

 

[cookieM0Nster]

I'm sorry for your loss.

And wow. Kanye is one of my favorite rappers right now, Kid Cudi and Lupe are good too. And your lyrics are good, your vocabulary is dope. I'm actually gonna start writing raps this summer, I don't really have time during school. I'm actually only turning 14 in two days... But I wanna write some lyrics this summer. I love hip-hop and rap, its pretty much my life. I come home and listen to music for like 5 hours, every day. And I don't care if people say, "You're white, you can't rap." I got a good vocabulary, I listen to a lot of the best rappers, why not? I live in California, and plenty of dope rappers came out of Cali. Pac, Dr. Dre, Mac Dre, Mista Fab, Sir Mix-A-Lot, and a ton more.

But I love Eminem's raps, they are great. Rakim is also one of my favorite rappers too, he has a great flow and amazing rhymes. And Kanye West of course is up there, his and Ludacris' music really got me to like Hip-Hop. 2Pac is definitely in my favorites, he's a legend. Run-DMC started getting hip-hop popular, so of course they are great.

Well, add me as a friend. I'd like to see what happens to you and maybe you can help me with my writing later on.

 

[fromundaman]

I'm sorry for your loss.

He doesn't seem to be from the tone of his post/lyrics, if one could stretch the term enough to call them that.

And your lyrics are good, your vocabulary is dope.

What? Are you serious? That stuff is utter garbage. It's pretty much just emo-etry. Bad emo-etry at that (I know that's kind of redundant). I don't see who could possibly-

I'm actually only turning 14 in two days...

Oooohhh... Well, that explains a lot.



OP, this didn't actually happen, did it? Just fishing for attention? There's no way anyone would have let you into the music industry, even as ****ty as it is today, with lyrics that bad.

 

[Falconv1.0]

Thank you for making me laugh cookieM0Nster. Really, thanks, I've been having a really ****ty day and you really brightened it up.

Man it's threads like this that make me miss the times when we could spam "cool story bro" and whatnot.

 

[Sleepz]

****, so much hate I probably should have said
that this is my first time writing a song and I wrote
in about 15-20 mins..."Cool story bro" you wouldn't believe
how many people are hatin off me rite now

 

[DtJ Glyphmoney]

Can you blame them? You just randomly showed up claiming to be the next big rapper.

I'm not saying anything you've said is a lie, but without any evidence no one is going to trust what you've just said.

 

[cookieM0Nster]

He doesn't seem to be from the tone of his post/lyrics, if one could stretch the term enough to call them that.

well still someone dying is hard on you.

What? Are you serious? That stuff is utter garbage. It's pretty much just emo-etry. Bad emo-etry at that (I know that's kind of redundant). I don't see who could possibly-

"He thought about his thinking causing meta cognition

His brain instantly went off like a chain reaction "

that was the vocabulary i was talkin bout lol. i mean a lot of rappers nowadays dont have vocabulary at all

Oooohhh... Well, that explains a lot.

-.-

 

[highfive]

>.>

What an interesting tale of interesting events my good gentleman smasher.

 

[Grunt]

wait so you get to sign w/ a record label
...
because you wrote a song 15 minutes ago?

 

[Sleepz]

No, the only proof i could offer rite now is going to 1 of their myspace's and asking them

Edit: I sat down with KiD CuDi and wrote the first things they came too my mind
so, I sorta made a freestyle and he was impressed w/ what I came with, so I might
get a record label plus I've been underground for like two years

 

[Lore]

Here's my problem with this:

How did you actually meet them? All you said is that you met them after the funeral.

 

[Falconv1.0]

well still someone dying is hard on you.

How gullible are you exactly? It's like you're COMPLETELY ignoring why we say things when you tell us to not be mean.

Edit-I dunno if I really doubt whether or not is mom really died, but either way this story is impossible to believe it's not even funny.

 

[fromundaman]

Cookie, my point is that he devotes one whole line to his mother dying in an optimistic sounding story. Funny considering it has nothing to do with the story itself, and he appears as happy as a hog in heat, and makes his story seem even more like an attempt to get attention from his faceless online peers.

And your being so defensive makes me think... BS!

Not to mention, spontaneous or not, you do realize those aren't the type of lyrics about 75% of the audience rap targets will like or appreciate? (And spontaneity still doesn't excuse that. I could write about a dog taking a **** on my carpet and it would make more sense than what you wrote.)

 

[cookieM0Nster]

Check out his other blog and say if his mom is dead or not. :/

 

[fromundaman]

Just did. Seems he recovered pretty fast

 

[Teran]

You guys have to bicker about pretty much everything. :/

Try and be a bit nicer in the tone of your posts.

 

[Sleepz]

Just did. Seems he recovered pretty fast

Recovered pretty fast
Huh...no stage 2
Denial I still haven't
gotten over

BTW: I meet CuDi beause he's good
friends with my uncle google No I.D.

Gotten OOver it pretty fast
boi you're crazy

 

[Drayden]

Recovered pretty fast
Huh...no stage 2
Denial I still haven't
gotten over

BTW: I meet CuDi beause he's good
friends with my uncle google No I.D.

Gotten OOver it pretty fast
boi you're crazy[/QUOT

He's not lying, but you shouldn't be on some website
bragging about what happened. You should be writing
right now you know as well as I that you getting sign
is a 30/90 chance.
Don't believe since we have some connection with
them you're going to get a deal even if you do
the industry will most likely be done with you
in a few years, unless YOU somehow keep
progessing which I doubt you will

 

[Falconv1.0]

My head is starting to hurt.

 

[Jim Morrison]

Your lyrics made me think of the typical Eminem song, especially Lose Yourself (good song, not hating though), but they just don't feel right.

 

[MLEsis]

man, give em a break! whether or not he's 'lying'--why should you care? people need to start thinking about their posts 'fore they post them.

if you don't like something don't crap all over it! give them some meaningful criticism.

 

[Drayden]

man, give em a break! whether or not he's 'lying'--why should you care? people need to start thinking about their posts 'fore they post them.

if you don't like something don't crap all over it! give them some meaningful criticism.

I agree with this, he should've thought about the blog/post throughly before he posted it; however being he's younger brother I believe it's my duty to criticize him.

I so didn't mean to put that laugh at the end.

 

[¯\_S.(ツ).L.I.D._/¯]

Lupe Fiasco is a cool guy.

 

[Super_Sonic8677]

Don't waitin on
Hatin on
Lying and cheatin on
Even if it's a con
We should all get along
That's why I made this song
But don't think it's not wrong

To say what didn't
To think what shouldn't
To be what isn't
To see good in it

It may be true
It could be lies
That doesn't mean you should despise
The kid's mom died
Now he's contimplatin
And simply statin
or maybe he's just been intoxicatin
But now this rhyme's gone out of hand
He's in the band or just a fan
No one can say for sure my man
He's just a kid
That can't be hid
The truth is lie
The internet sly
This rap aint fly
So I better get movin
Because Ive just been losin
Because you know they see me trollin
While they're patrollin
And they hatin
Spiten
Cursin
and Fightin
But I'll be leavin
They'll be siggin
And mods'll be lockin while they're talkin

 

[fromundaman]

Don't waitin on
Hatin on
Lying and cheatin on
Even if it's a con
We should all get along
That's why I made this song
But don't think it's not wrong

To say what didn't
To think what shouldn't
To be what isn't
To see good in it

It may be true
It could be lies
That doesn't mean you should despise
The kid's mom died
Now he's contimplatin
And simply statin
or maybe he's just been intoxicatin
But now this rhyme's gone out of hand
He's in the band or just a fan
No one can say for sure my man
He's just a kid
That can't be hid
The truth is lie
The internet sly
This rap aint fly
So I better get movin
Because Ive just been losin
Because you know they see me trollin
While they're patrollin
And they hatin
Spiten
Cursin
and Fightin
But I'll be leavin
They'll be siggin
And mods'll be lockin while they're talkin

We might as well lock this now, because nothing will top this post.

 

[cookieM0Nster]

Don't waitin on
Hatin on
Lying and cheatin on
Even if it's a con
We should all get along
That's why I made this song
But don't think it's not wrong

To say what didn't
To think what shouldn't
To be what isn't
To see good in it

It may be true
It could be lies
That doesn't mean you should despise
The kid's mom died
Now he's contimplatin
And simply statin
or maybe he's just been intoxicatin
But now this rhyme's gone out of hand
He's in the band or just a fan
No one can say for sure my man
He's just a kid
That can't be hid
The truth is lie
The internet sly
This rap aint fly
So I better get movin
Because Ive just been losin
Because you know they see me trollin
While they're patrollin
And they hatin
Spiten
Cursin
and Fightin
But I'll be leavin
They'll be siggin
And mods'll be lockin while they're talkin

:O

Win. Win. Win.

 

[Drayden]

We might as well lock this now, because nothing will top this post.

You're right there's probaby even more people trying to make songs (freestyles) and what not, so I hope that this thread/post gets lock before that can happen.

 

[Super_Sonic8677]

You're right there's probaby even more people trying to make songs (freestyles) and what not, so I hope that this thread/post gets lock before that can happen.

Rap ****, son

 

[Lore]

Something similar happened to me as well.

I was walking on the street, and Lil Wayne was across the street. He was on his way to his sentencing, and I went over to him. I asked him if he wanted to freestyle for a bit, you know, to get his spirits up. He started, and I punched him in the face. I ran home and told my mom. My mom got scared and said, "You're moving with your auntie and uncle in Bel-Air."

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say is that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Man forget it' - 'Yo home to Bel Air'

I pulled up to the house about seven or eight
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked to my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air

 

[Figgz]

Something similar happened to me as well.

I was walking on the street, and Lil Wayne was across the street. He was on his way to his sentencing, and I went over to him. I asked him if he wanted to freestyle for a bit, you know, to get his spirits up. He started, and I punched him in the face. I ran home and told my mom. My mom got scared and said, "You're moving with your auntie and uncle in Bel-Air."

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say is that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Man forget it' - 'Yo home to Bel Air'

I pulled up to the house about seven or eight
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked to my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air

You had me until you got to the Bel-Air part
Was that supposed to be funny fail

 

[Super_Sonic8677]

Something similar happened to me as well.

I was walking on the street, and Lil Wayne was across the street. He was on his way to his sentencing, and I went over to him. I asked him if he wanted to freestyle for a bit, you know, to get his spirits up. He started, and I punched him in the face. I ran home and told my mom. My mom got scared and said, "You're moving with your auntie and uncle in Bel-Air."

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
The license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror
If anything I can say is that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Man forget it' - 'Yo home to Bel Air'

I pulled up to the house about seven or eight
And I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo homes smell ya later'
I looked to my kingdom
I was finally there
To sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air

Lookin like a fool with yo hat turned around and yo pants on the ground.

 

[cookieM0Nster]

Lookin like a fool with yo hat turned around and yo pants on the ground.

Lookin like a fool with that gold in your mouth, hat turned sideways, lookin like a fool, walkin, talkin with your pants on the ground.

lrn2singpantzontehgrowndd

 

[Super_Sonic8677]

Lookin like a fool with that gold in your mouth, hat turned sideways, lookin like a fool, walkin, talkin with your pants on the ground.

lrn2singpantzontehgrowndd

Dude that's not cool
You tryin to make me a fool
Like a tool
My rhyme's cool

You know it don have be the same
Sometimes re-words are way less lame
But I had my fame

And I don claim to be perfect
Or to remember perfect
You can try to be perfect
But I can tell its not worth it

 

[Falconv1.0]

**** son **** just got real.