I'll be frank, and you can criticize me for being negative, but if you didn't want it to be critiqued, posting it on a site like this is just plain silly. It wasn't unbearable, and it had it's moments, but the clips you showed were just average playing, nothing spectacular, and parts of it weren't even tight by those standards. The clips were really loose and quite a few of your combos were brought on by poor playing of your opponents. I watched some of your other vids (so I'm not just judging you on your fragments in the combo vid) You do use a projectiles in better balance then some TL's I've seen, but it could afford to be a lot tighter and more precise, TL has very versatile projectiles, and they still have more to offer. The aerials could be afford to be a lot more aggressive once you have them on the defensive, more off-stage aerials would be nice, as TL certainly has the ability to pull it off; you did a bit of it, but your main means of chase seemed to be your projectiles, and while they're a favorably defensive/stunning technique rather then an edgeguard. If you didn't want an in depth critique, then no offense meant, just suggesting. Brawl is still young, I realize, and much of the advanced play is still being discovered, though that's no reason to shun critiques, doing the best to add something to the discussion based on what we know. Keep on truckin'