The Legend of Lucario (LoL). Not really a Comedy, but it has its moments.

[Talazala]

All I can say is: Thrillz.

 

[Ilucamy]

It's good, just some of its not my style, keep doing what you're doing though

Personally, I think Ike should have died, it would have made the story more dramatic.

 

[Kinzer]

Ah now why would I go and kill my favorite character? XD

Anyway I have a very dramatic ending if drama is what you want, you'll just have to stay to see it. :D

Edit: you know seriously at first I thought about getting Ike killed off but I wanted to get a laugh out of anybody that would've read the ending of chapter 9.5, at least if you got the joke *wink*.

 

[Steel_Dragon]

Ah now why would I go and kill my favorite character? XD

Anyway I have a very dramatic ending if drama is what you want, you'll just have to stay to see it. :D

Edit: you know seriously at first I thought about getting Ike killed off but I wanted to get a laugh out of anybody that would've read the ending of chapter 9.5, at least if you got the joke *wink*.

lol
10char

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter X - Halberd shot down)

Narrator: Welcome to season two of the Legend of Lucario, we are at the midpoint of this story now, and if you are still here, fantastic, now that I have you eating out of the palm of my hands for more, I'll give it to you!

*After Ike made a rather quick and full recovery for the blast, Meta Knight had Kirby bake a cake in celebration*

Meta Knight: Well Ike, I hope you and everybody else enjoy this cake, I got it so that it was your favorite, cheery and coconut.

Ike: H'oh boy!

*Just as Ike was about to stick his fork in the cake and grab a slice for himself, there is yet another tremor on the Halberd*

Ike: Woah I missed!

Meta Knight: darnit, again?! I thought this was over with! Fox, do you have anybody else that we should know about?

Fox: Afraid not searg, the whole Starfox crew is all here!

Meta Knight: Hmph, fine! Everybody stay here *Meta Knight wraps himself in his cloak and teleports to the control room of the Halberd*

*Kirby being himself would always try and eat whenever he had the chance, seeing his opportunity with everybody in disarray he sucks the cake in, nobody even noticed and he would rub his belly in satisfaction.*

Meta Knight: Computer, get a camera on what is attacking the Halberd again, and status report on the ship!

*Meta Knight looks at the monitor, seeing the halberd damaged but still capable of flight, and as he requested, he sees some little purplecarrot-like things being tossed at the Halberd, he doesn't know how but they are breaking through the Halberd, and with each one that gets in the ship makes it much mroe heavier*

Meta Knight: Whatever these things are, they are coming from the West, and they just keep coming, if this doesn't stop the Halberd will take up too much destruction and weight to be able to float about anymore! What?! The ship has already taken too much to steer anymore!? Fudge, looks like nothing we can do be but embrace for emergency landing *Meta Knight speaks over his intercom to let everybody in the Dining Hall know what is to come* Everybody grab on to something, The Halberd is losing altitude, and we will be crashing into the ground!

*BAAAAAAAM! Like a smart bomb going off a loud boom can be heard as the Halberd makes contact with the surface of the world of Smash, Meta Knight just shuts down everything seeing as how it won't do of any use, and returns to the Dining Hall with everybody else*

Meta Knight: I hope you are all alright, because we got shot out of the air, apparently by some things being shot at us. We are going out to investigate.

*Meta Knight leads the crew to where he believes the source of the problem came from, and meanwhile...*

??????: Yes, took them out with just a few shots, hurry up and make more ammunition, slave!

*The small alien-liek creature could not pull out anymore pikmin due to severe exhaustion*

??????: Augh, you are useless, I am better off shooting you with your own minions, dead!

Sonic: Not so fast, pal, just what do you think you're doing?

??????: Nyargh, seems like I failed to kill any of you while taking down your ship.

Wolf: Shaddap! We want an explaination, and now!

Bowyer: I won't tell you anything other than what you will address your master as, I am Bowyer, bow down! (You probably want to know what he looks like, well since he can shoot Pikmin a distance, refer to this youtube video, if any of you have played Super Mario RPG, you should already have an idea. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9YAX9A-rLA )

Samus: Not even in your dreams, pal!

Bowyer: You will not bend down and look at the floor?! Then I will take you down with what ammo I have left, no thanks to this useless piece of junk!

*Bowyer grabs the purple pikmin and starst to rapid-fire*

Lucario: Wow, this guy is fast!

*nobody can do a thing to stop Bowyer because he reloads too fast for everybody to be incapable of donig anything except dodging for dear life, if those pikmin could take a chunk out of the Halberd, imagine what a direct hit would do!*

Lucario: Hey wait a second, I got an idea! Sonic!

Sonic: What is it?

Lucario: you think you can take out that string, that's what's allowing this hideous monster to fire these...whatever it is he is trying to hit us with!

Sonic: Oh hey right, What is a bow without its bow "string"?! I am on it!!

*Sonic dodges any pikmin fired at him and curls in his ballform spinning fast enough to slice through anything he passes! although he gets close to his assignment he is hit with a missile*

Sonic: Gah, where did that come from?

???????: Puny little rat, you cannot dodge my heat-seeknig Missiles!

Sonic: Rat?!

Bowyer: Thanks Galleom, I didn't see that one coming

Galleom: Just do what you were made to do and shoot them until they die! (Again, if you have played Super Smash Bros. Brawl you probably know who Galleom is but a reference video just in case. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cpeTz4JqB4 )

Bowyer: I can't, this stupid little alienman couldn't make anymore ammo for me, I got nothing!

Galleom: Grr, he is better of smoshed into the ground *Galleom raises his foot as if he is gonig to squish the tiny man.

Ike (stopping Galleom's foot in place): Ah no you don't, if you are holding this man against his will, then of course he doesn't belnog her, but he doesn't belong 6 feet deep in the ground either!

Galleom: Why you little pest! *Galleom puts a bit mroe force on his foot, he is determined to crush Ike and the slave*

Ike: Marth, do it now!

*seeing his chance to shine, Marth Dolphin Jumps towards Bowyer while he is observing Galleom and slices the string in half, making Bowyer shriek in sheer agony*

Bowyer: Waugh, you cut the very thing that holds me in place like a human has their spine!!

Galleom: Hmph, idiot, instead of watching me do all the dirty work he should've done something to help, even if he had skinny legs and arms...owell I will crush you mortals like the insects you are!

Bowser: Not if I can do something about it! *Bowser jsut rams his back onto Galleom, throwing him off balance but otherwise not causing any real damage.*

Galleom: Insolent turtle, none of your atatcks can penetrate my armor!

Mario: Not now, but maybe after we all take a bite out of these! *Mario tosses mushrooms going all ways to everybody, increasing their size.*

Galleom: Uh oh!

*lucario leaps into the air and holds his foot above his head, when he gets to melee range he swings his foot down and drop kicks Galleom into the ground, making it impossible for him to get back up because waist-down, he is stuck!*

Galleom: I can't get back up!

Meta Knight: Now is the time to strike! *If you have played Meta Knight in Brawl you know his down-throw move, he gets on top of Galleom and stomps on top of him, pushing him further into the soil to the point where anything shoulder height and up is visible. Just in time to, the effects of the mushrooms wore off, it is only permanent when used onto one person, but has a short duration when going to a lot of people*

Fox and Falco: Tell Shadow mario just before we put you out of working order that we don't work for him anymore! *Fox and Falco just kick each of Galleom's eyes out, and so he is destroyed not being able to see anything anymore*

Luigi: Well, glad to see that monster is rid of, but the Halberd is out of the sky, what will we do?

Meta Knight: I know one man who can help us witht hat problem there...that man, is Colonel Snake!

Narrator: Meta Knight is right, with the Halberd totaled they will have to repair it, but who is this Snake character he mentioned? Tune in another time to find out!

 

[Steel_Dragon]

nice one
3char

 

[Kinzer]

Alright I have some bad news and some good news. The bad news is mom decided to try and suprise me, so I will be gone to Six Flags this week, exciting right? wrong...If anything this has a lot of inconviniences for me, but for the one that will be affecting you I will not be able to continue writing up chapters for the Legend of Lucario. The good news is however I will only be gone until Saturday the latest, and to try and catch up I will be posting new chapters like mad. I know some of you were looknig forward to reading more but please hang in there a little bit longer, I will try and make it all the worth while even though I might recall having said that before. Again I am really sorry for misleading you all but blame my mother not I. O.o

 

[Steel_Dragon]

BAD MOM lol

 

[mantlecore77]

@ Kinzer's Mother

O_o

Curses.

EDIT: GAH!
Bowyer!???!?
YES!

 

[OlimarFan]

Interesting story. Just out of curiosity, did you watch Pokemon Movie 8/play Diamond or Pearl so you could understand more about Lucario's personality?

 

[Kinzer]

Okay I am back, I won't tell you about the trip but I will answer Olimar's question.

To be honest, I do not have Pokemans Diamond or Pearl, and I have only watched enough of the latest movie to see where Lucario thinks he has been betrayed by his best friend and when he is released back out of his prison or something he is a bit skepitcal of all humans. If you want to know where I am getting the idea for Lucario, I am trying to make him like me. Get comfortable, I am going to tell you everything I think I know about myself. Please do keep in mind I am not completly making him like me, I am just going along with what I see fit. First I will try and describe Lucario, then I will tell you how I think I am in person, oh and I won't tell you much because I don't want to spoil anything that might later come, for Lucario anything, however if you aren't itnerested don't read a thign about me, I am warning you now it will be long.

Lucario: Does not trust too many people, but does what he feels is necessary. He is like a follower type of person, he is unsure of the world of smash and walks in the shadow of Meta Knight because he knows nothing of the planet he is on. He is mostly in a bad mood but he bottles up his emotions and tries to keep a neutral stance with everybody else. He thinks of others that need help before anything else, which explains why when he saw Sonic at first he did not put any thought about his "mission", he just knew that he was in fire need of assistance, and like a gaurdian angel Lucario saved him from shear destruction.

Me: I don't talk too much in person nor do I talk to a lot of people (although my online alter-ego Kinzer does not know when to shut up), if I do talk, I try and make it so that people won't forget what I said, usually a joke or something dead serious. In this sense I am little like Lucario, I don't know too many people, and the people I do know as aquiantences in class or anywhere public I do not want to be around, like gangsters for example. My trust is hard to gain but easily destroyed. I do not get annoyed or angry very easily, I am forgiving for the people I do want to be good friends with, I know humans are not perfect, and if you don't give people a chance, there is no hope. I have a past I want to forget, I would not have too many friends, I was always a weakling and picked on. Now let's say I am in P.E. playing football and you push me to my overlimit, I get some thing like "aura" but I think it is adrenaline, I lose all concern for anybody but me, if I have the football, I will ram you and shove you down on the ground but if you cut your knee hitting the ground I don't really care, I just keep on running to the other side to score a touch down. Further into this condition of beastliness I sort of think I am a wolf, I walk with my arms and legs, I tend to snarl at random times, I will go for blood and injure you pretty bad when I try to... you know it would be easier to tell you that nobody would want to be around me in this state, I am like a walking bomb waiting to go off. At the moment I am losing my faith in other people who claim to be my friends, I just finished my freshman year of high school, I made two friends who just both happen to be women 3 years older than me, it was fantastic, these two were the type of women I could tried to get as a girlfriend, I even went as far as asking one of them, but alas they couldn't. Now I can understand that when you are seeing somebody else, you can't claim to be with two people, and I am fine with that, you know what pisses me off so much though? I can't tell with these two but I think they were just telling me what they thoguht would make me happy maybe because they felt sorry for a nerd like me, but it was all a bunch of lies, the last thing they said before we parted was "we will meet again someday again, don't worry", Well you know what, you have my cellphone number, I only specifically gave it to you, 3 months later...Yeah I am still waiting, you could at least come out and tell me what you honestly think, why don't you just say you couldn't wait for the school year to end so you would never have to see me again? But oh no am I devasted because I won't see tehse two ever again? Not really, seeing as how this has only happened after every stinking school year where I try to make friends and people end up leaving me on my own again, and their reasoning, they have to move out of town or some place, maybe a new school, or if they are going to the same school like me next year, they completly forget who I am. Hey why am I complaining, I should be used to this kind of crap, just because I feel detached from my family which is probably the same thing as not having friends. I have my mom and a step-dad, my real dad is probably a jerk/idiot I believe because when I was four years old he wanted to go back to Mexico which is a worse place in America, for this he is an idiot, now why do I think he is a jerk? He hasn't helped with anything since, he hasn't paid a dime, he only calls once a year, and recently he has the nerve to tell me he met somebody else and I have a half-sister...Right now I want to go down there and punch his eyes out. I like my stepdad as much as I do my real dad but I only respect him because he actually TRIES to act like a dad, however he is quite insensitive, constantly teases me on my problems, he is not very patient or understanding, in fact I used to do Kung Fu when I was 12, I quit two years later because the old man had nothing better to do but watch me perform, and he would be in the background yelling "you missed the target" or "put a little more power into those combinations", not once would he acknowledge me if I did something right, I always just screwed up, and after a while this gets depressing. I tell him if he can do better and what's his excuse? "I got a bad hip". Yes you have a bad hip, so why don't you just shut the hell up and don't say a thing if you aren't even willing to try you moron?!

Aww I would tell you more but I am probably boring you all to death, and this is only a fragment of 16 years of my life, I will tell you tomorrow Saturday more of the Legend of Lucario, even though it will cripple my fingers, you all deserve it for putting up with me anyway. XD

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter XI - Camping out)

Lucario: A snake...we are going to get a big ol' flying ship repaired, by a snake...?

Meta Knight: No Lucario, that's his codename, as far as I know I don't know what else to address him by (Seriously I think in the Metal Gear series that's what he was created with).

Lucario: Alright, so where is this guy?

Meta Knight: Unfortunatly, his terrace is quite a ways from the site, so far we will have to take a two-day trip to get to him...Well two days if we all want to stay together, I know fast people would have no problem getting there in much less time.

Fox: We will have to perform maitenance on our Arwings, We know where you are heading, we will meet up there later.

Meta Knight: Alright, thank you for letting me know.

Mario: Darn it! If we could a get to him a right now, we wouldn't a have to go through all of a this!

Ike: Aww quit your complaining, it would be good excercice for you.

Mario: So is that a challenge a? You think just a because I am a slighty overweight I cannot kick a your butt?!

Bowser: Ike, you need to shut up, and Mario, I am much bigger than you and I am not complaining, so deal with it!

Ike & Mario: *Hmph*.

Lucario: We will not get anywhere arguing here, Meta Knight could you get the ball rolling?

Samus: And he sure will get us started, I will just get R.O.B. here to set up a GPS-powered map with our current location, where we are heading to, and the way to get there. The only problem is while R.O.B. projects this map through his eyes he won't be able to move on his own, so somebody will have to push him along the way.

Ike: I'll do it, babycakes!

Samus: Hey just because you saved me doesn't mean that I don't still find you annoying, really move on...

Ike: NOOOOOooooo...

Luigi: Uhm...I'll take care of that, I guess...

Mario: Thanks a Luigi!

Luigi: Yeah sure...no problem...

*After hours of walking day turns into night, and most everybody is exhausted, so they decided to stop and rest. They were very close to where they needed to get to but it was getting late anyway so yeah...*

Meta Knight: How are you all holding up?

Sonic: Well I am not one to brag but I Could've gotten here in minutes, that "stroll" felt like an eternity!

Lucario: I can keep going.

Luigi: I am... okay over here...

Ike: I was trained under tough conditions, I am with Sonic on this.

Marth: Usually I have a horse for things like this, but it was a nice change of pace.

Nurse Peach: I am not used to walking so much, but Mario was kind enough to give me a lift on his back.

Mario: That'll a prove you, Ike that a just because I am a not like everybody else a, I can still a carry my own weight and a others!

Ike: I don't know...you could fool anybody with that hat of yours, no sweat can get through.

Mario: Why you ignorant little!-

Meta Knight: Enough!! While all of you were reassuring yourselves I setup a bunch of tents, now there weren't enough for all of you have your own so some of you will have to share, so this is how it -

Sonic: I call the blue tent!

*Sonic just zipped to it, not even asking Meta Knight if he could take it for himself.*

Meta Knight: Well with that taken care of...I will be sleeping in the white tent. Ladies, you are free to choose your own just as Sonic did, but it has to be with the two of you together... Mario Brothers, You will take the orange tent. Bowser, you are big enough where nobody else can go with you, nice isn't it?

Bowser: A tent to myself, alright!

Meta Knight: you take the green tent.

Ike & Marth: What about us, sire?

Meta Knight: Ike, Marth, you will take the black tent.

*Marth and Ike just bow their heads, and head for their tent*

Meta Knight: Finally, Lucario, you -

Lucario: No thanks, I know what you are gonig to say, and it is a nice offer, but I like to be one with nature. On my old planet I just slept on top of a branch on a tree or on the grass in the open plain.

Meta Knight: As you wish, nobody is stopping you. Samus, please turn off R.O.B. so that lgiht won't blind us or keep us awake when we are trying to sleep, as for everybody else, sleep tight...

Everybody: Good night!

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter XII - The Smash Saviors = the Army of Shadows?)

Narrator: After a while, everybody got a little bit of sleep, until the sun was visible in the horizon, and then everybody gets a rather rude awakening, except for Lucario who was already up at the time and sort of saw it coming...

Lucario: What a beautiful sunrise. Such a shame that everybody else is asleep and theyy can't enjoy this view...

*A few seconds later Lucario sees a flying object coming his way, he didn't want to risk anything so...*

Lucario: Uh-oh, I go to protect everybody else, and warn them! Aura Barrier!!

*Lucario conjures up a spherical defense chamber, anything inside it could not be harmed from anything coming outside. Lucario's shout can be heard by everybody, waking them up from their impending doom*

Meta Knight: Lucario, what's wrong?!

Lucario: Well, you know this ball that surrounds you at the moment, this is the only thing stopping this torpedo-like thing dropping down on us!

Meta Knight: Make an opening, I will cut that thing into a million pieces ,making it incapable of doing any damage.

*Lucario nods, then makes an opening in his Aura Barrier, Meta Knight just flew straight throguh the thing and as soon as it got into Lucario's face, it just shattered like a vace, boy was he terrified*

Lucario: Hey Knight, could you have cut that any closer?!

*Lucario dispels is Aura Barrier, shortly after this automated voice is heard*

This is Colonel Snake's area, in order to keep the premises safe from the Army of Shadow, all ground units have been flagged as so. That was your warning shot, and in a matter of time many more missiles and bombs will only follow, I either suggest you find the hidden switch on the Terrace or run away before you are blown to bits, only by pressing the switch will you be able to communicate with the colonel.

Sonic: What?! We're going to be blown up?!?

Meta Knight: Nyrgh! Great, the man is prepared, too well-prepared.

Marth: My liege, we must do something, standing around will only make us sitting ducks!

Meta Knight: Yes I know that...Everybody, scatter around, there is less chance of everybody being taken out in one shot if we are in multiple places, also one of us might find that switch he must've installed to call off the attack.

Everybody: Right!

*The automated voice can be heard again*

You have been warned, you are still on radar and you have yet to turn back, prepare to be terminated.

*All the Smash Saviors have made their way around, but even so bombs are flying from all directions*

Sonic: haha this is suppose to be a threat, I am hundreds of feet away from where those things land, I am too fast for -

*As Sonic was talking to himself he hears a loud beeping sound, and 2 seconds later KABOOM!!!*

Sonic: Gah, landmines? If I think I know this Snake guy, he might've placed a lot more. I better go run around and set them off before some other unfortunate person triggers them and gets themselves incinerated!

*The automated voice can be heard again after a while*

We have noticed all of you are still alive somehow, we have been going a little easy on you with the first wave of bombardments, so now until you either find the switch or run, we will gradually increase the explosions, eventually leading to your deaths

Lucario: These things are only going to keep coming, unless something is done we are all going to be blown to smitherines! Where is that switch to deactivate the armed security?!

Narrator: Seems as though Snake did not any unwelcomed guests, but now our heroes face quite a challenge to stay alive, all because they have been falsely accused for the very things they are trying to take care of!

 

[Steel_Dragon]

goodone kinzer i like it

 

[Kinzer]

Ugh, these stupid delays, you know why I could only post two chapters last night? My stupid ISP (DSL) Was having trouble in the zipcode 89108 area (guess where Las Vegas is...). As I was about to post chapter 12 it goes down, luckily I happen to remember Notepad and I copied and pasted it there to save it and then when my internet would come back up repost it on SWF, and I wanted to do more but it was already late. Anyway it's sunday today and I will get to posting another few chapters. Now I would like to again request that people go back into some of my chapters and find any spelling/grammar errors, I can't catch all of them on my own, and to encourage you, I forgot to include the Starfox team in Chapter 11, so i will have to slighty edit that chapter. O.o Again your help is appreciated by me and anybody else who is new to reading this.

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter XIII - Confrontation)

Lucario: Uh oh, another volley of those missiles! Let's see, maybe if I can create copies of myself I can stop the missile fire and find the switch faster... Double Team!!

*Lucario creates 3 images of himself, all capable of thought, touch, personality. (you know, that kind of junk)*

Lucario: Okay, you *pointing at a specific doppleganger* I want you you see if you can hold off those bombs.

*The doppleganger nods*

Lucario: You two, I want you to help me look around here.

*The other duplicates nod their heads as well, then the one doppleganger leaps up into the air and does what he was assigned to do, or at least try, meanwhile Lucario along with the duplicates he wanted to stay with him begin to speed around the area*

Lucario: Extreme Speed!
Lucario duplicate: Extreme Speed!
Lucario duplicate: Extreme Speed!

Samus: R.O.B. can you pick up on the location of the switch?

*The little assistant just gestures a no*

Samus: Hmph, then I guess just returning fire is all I can do.

*After quite some time of playing dodgeball with explosives, the Starfox team can be seen in the air inside their Arwings, Falco's voice can be heard from a speaker*

Falco: sorry we're late, did we miss anything?

Meta Knight (returnnig the call over his intercom): Yeah, some of you might think of it as action, others will say we are dodging for our lives.

Wolf: Anyway to stop this?

Meta Knight: There is suppose to be a switch around here, but we can't find it, and that switch is suppose to seize this shower.

Falco: Ah I see it, but it is underground! You are going to have to get somebody qho can make a hole.

Ike (trying to yell at the Arwings): Can you take me there?! I know what to do!!

*No response, it seems as though the Arwings are too high up and the explosions are causing too much noise which doesn't help the situation*

Ike: rfgh, they can't hear me...Oh that's right!

*Ike Throws Ragnell high up in the air*

Ike: Now if I can just land on top of that plane he will be able to not only hear me but see as well, there is no way he wouldn't notice me...Aether!

*Ike follows his blade and happens to catch it, while he is descending to the ground Fox happens to spot Ike just freefalling, he then turns to catch him inside his cockpit*

Fox: How did you jump up so high, you know how high we are?

Ike: No time for questions, if Falco can see the location of the switch, I assume you can too?

Fox: That's right, but -

Ike: Get me there now , and make sure everybody clears away from the site!

Fox: You got it:

*Fox ejects Ike directly above the switch, Ike then turns Ragnell downward, and begins to charge up something...*

Ike: ...Huuuuuuuoooooooo.... Eruption!!!

*Ike pushes Ragnell into the floor, and as soon as it makes contact he makes a big crater, like a meteor just landed over the site, after all the smoke clears up, he sees the button, he presses it, and this is heard...*

Congradulations, you have pressed the disarming button, you are either quite resourceful, lucky, or somethin of the like, either way, you are granted permission into the Terrace. A clear pathway will be laid out for all of you, welcome!

Lucario: What a relief...

*Lucario brings his palm and fist together, the images he makes then come to him, and then Lucario is one again*

Lucario: Ouh, fussion always feels wierd for me...Let's see, if this road will lead to the terrace, everybody else should be heading that way as well... I have a few words for this Snake for almost getting the wrong people killed...

 

[kingdomofthehearts_snucas]

lulz, nice man, keep it up.

 

[Kinzer]

Nice 626 avi/sig. Anyway Chapter 14 coming up now.

 

[kingdomofthehearts_snucas]

cool, thanks, gotta love him

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter XIV - The Don...err, I mean the Snake)

Narrator: Our heroes all meet up inside the building, they notice a bunch of cameras watching them

Wolf: This isn't such a bad place.

Sonic: If you ask me, I don't really like it...I feel like a hedgehog in a cage, or a conman in a prison, you are constantly being watched on, and you don't know what is going to happen...

Ike: Just don't drop the soap.

Samus: Shut up.

Ike: Yes, Ma'am...

Meta Knight: The man built this place on his own, quite a feat if you ask me, to be able to maintain and upkeep this place...

*The Smash Saviors are then lifted up by a elevator, eventually stopping at a corridor with a bunch of security doors opening, leading into a hallway. Again this place is under heavy surveilance.*

Marth: So I guess This man is leading us somewhere...shall we get going?

*Everybody nods, but after a few steps instead of having to walk a long way they are further transported by a a flat escalator (what the heck are those things called you see at airports that are like escalators but don't go up or down, just get people to the other side of it? How about for my convinience we just call it a conveyer belt huh?), everybody is caught by suprise and trips*

Lucario: Oh, my rump *Lucario rubs his butt*

*A bunch of robots come out of nowhere with office-like chairs, and force everybody onto them, this is much better than just standing up. This voice can be heard saying...*

We are terribly sorry about the earlier commosion (sp?), We could not identify you as the Smash Saviors while outside the terrace, however you will be directed to Snake in a matter of minutes, until then please enjoy the comfort. Chat if you want to pass time, we will hand you beverages shortly

Sonic: What, no movie along the way?

Mario: I think this is a pretty good a, after all the trouble we a had to go through.

Luigi: Good point, bro...

Here you are, all the delights to satisfy your taste buds. Yes Kirby, even you, we made this HUGE wallet especially for you, so nobody else will have a chance to lose their food to you.

Kirby: Weehaw, airpwane food!!

Meta Knight: It's funny, because we aren't on an airplane, but he will think so since he is sitting in a comfy chair and being taken somewhere without effort anyway.

*After everybody is done drinking their refreshments and cleaning their plates empty because it was great food, they finally reach a room that is rather..."roomy", if you will. They notice a desk with a chair facing the opposite way*

?????: Meta Knight, old pal, it's been way too long.

Meta Knight: Yes it has, Colonel.

Snake: Aww hey, we're good friends aren't we, just address me as Snake.

Meta Knight: Alright, if it makes you feel any better, "Snake".

Snake: so what can I do for you all?

Bowser: Well, first you can say you're sorry for almost taking us out!!

Snake: I know, I know, but please forgive me, I have yet to build a system that can identify any land units, you all were the appropriate size to be mistaken with those black pugs that call themselves the Army of Shadow.

Meta Knight: Well Snake, we need your help, The Halberd has been shot down and is beyond our powers to repair it, but you have what it takes to get us back in the sky.

Nurse Peach: Oh I forgot to tell everybody about this, but I have been holding this guy for a couple of days now, not sure what to do with him but maybe you have an idea.

*Nurse Peach reaches in her pocket and gives Snake the little creature*

Snake: Ah, I know what this thing is, it is one of those guys from Hocotate, they travel planet to planet collecting they find to be valueable...thiso ne however must've got lost, where did you find him?

Peach: Well, I found him from the floor after we took care of these two lieutenants of the Army of Shadow, they made this very thing pluck out purple carrots that took down the very Halberd itself.

Snake: Pikmin huh...This guy could use a footall ship (Being that Olimar is only an inch tall?) to get back to his home planet. I can get that taken care of really easily. Now back to the Halberd, you want me to help you fix this right?

Everybody: Correct.

Snake: Well, I will help you, but you must do me a favor...

 

[Steel_Dragon]

After everybody is doing drinking their liquids < you said doing drinking dnt u mean done?

 

[Kinzer]

That...would be correct...thank you for spotting that Dragon. Hey by the way I just wanted to take the time to tell you that you have constantly posted in my story, and I appreciate the feedback.

As for everybody else, just reading the story and making the view count as also greatly appreciated, I never thought this would turn out so successful. Anyway the next two chapters will be up sometime today and I will fix that typo.

 

[Steel_Dragon]

your welcome glad to be able to show some support ^_^

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter XV - He wants what now?)

Narrator: A favor huh, well the Smash Saviors had better hope that it is something one of them could do, otherwise they won't have any means of quick transportation...

Lucario: So what's the catch?

Snake: I always wanted a pet...

Sonic: No way pal, I prefer the outdoors!

Snake: Not a Hedgehog... I want a monkey, two of them to be exact

Everybody: Monkies?!

Snake: Not just any ol' Monkies...I want a specific pair.

Lucario: You want two Monkies, but how are we suppose to know which ones aret he ones YOU want, don't all primapes look the same?

Snake: In a sense you are actually right, one of them is suppose to be chimpanzee, this one has a hat that says "Nintendo" on it. The other is sort of like a gorilla, this one wears a tie...

Lucario: Okay, no comment on that, but do you know where to find them?

Snake: Unfortunately no, but I did happen to get a picture of both and them, but this is a few days old, for all I know they could be anywhere.

Sonic: Not a problem, man, can you hand me the pictures?

*Snake gives Sonic the photos*

Sonic: And Mario, do you happen to have any of those Power vegitable thingies left?

Mario: They are a called a Mushrooms, but a why do you a need them?

Sonic: well, one of them seems to be quite heavy, and I could use some extra strength.

Mario: Here a you go, but a what are you a going to do with it a?

Sonic: You'll see...

*Mario throws Sonic a Mushroom his way, he eats it, and he gets bigger along with his vocie a bit deeper*

Sonic: You know, I don't really like it how I sound funny with this but I will have to deal with it, now to use this Bunny Hood I picked up somewhere from some guy. *Sonic puts on the cap* Okay, now just sit tight, I'll be back faster than you can sing the alphabet!

*Sonic darts off at speeds even faster than most people would expect him to run*

Kirby: ... Dee...Aphabet? ... A... B... C... Uhm... what next? Oh! D!... Then... E...

*after a while of everybody trying to let Kirby say the whole alphabet, happening to be almost at the end, sonic returns*

Sonic: I am back!

Kirby: No! So cwose too!!

*In each of Sonic's arms were the primapes Snake had requested for, they didn't exactly appreciate being "monkeynapped" and were trying to get out of Sonic's grip*

Snake: Okay, fantastic, just set them down over...*Snake presses a button on his desk, a cage full of bananas lower down* ...There!

*seeing the delicious looking bananas, the monkeys just jumped out from Sonic's arms and rushed to the cage, they didn't seem to mind*

Ike: alright, we held up our end of the deal, so now can you help us?

Snake: But of course. Meta Knight, come over here and set the coordinates for where your crashed ship is, I along with my robot assistants will head to the specified point and repair the ship within a matter of time

Meta Knight: but of course, thank you so much for your help

Snake: Anything for an old pal of mine.

 

[Kinzer]

Oh, shoot, is it just me or does it seem like I am making these chapters smaller and smaller?

 

[kingdomofthehearts_snucas]

chimpanzee
thats how you spell it, happy to help

 

[Kinzer]

^ Fixed.

(Chapter XVI - Virus Implanted)

Snake: Alright, now that I know where I need to go, I will put this little guy in his rocket ship, I'll just get him flying off and he can then make his way back to his home planet or wherever he is going to go. You are all welcome to either help me fix the Halberd or you can "crash" *chuckle* here in my terrace, I'll just have a few of my robotic assistants prepare you a room for the night, I will have the ship fixed overnight.

Meta Knight: Samus, Ike, Bowser, I want you three along with the Starfox team to go help him, you all have the knowledge to help Snake or lift any heavy objects. as for the rest of you, let's wait here.

Ike, Samus, Bowser, Fox, Falco, & Wolf: Yes sir, right away!

Snake: Meta Knight, before I leave, I can trust you to take temporary ownership of the terrace, these blueprints will tell you how to work everything from the Mother Computer, and where everything is in here, and how to get around here.

*Snake hands Meta Knight the sheet of paper, he nods. After saying their goodbyes and all that Meta Knight orders those who have stayed with him to follow him to Snake's desk, this was where the Mother computer was.*

Meta Knight: Alright, You all are here because I want to discuss how we are going to take out the Army of Shadow, taking down my ship was the last straw! *Meta Knight bangs his hand on top of the desk* Snake and the others should be on their way to the Halberd, although he did mention he can get it fixed overnight, it is about 2-3 day trip from this point, their lives are in his hands, as for all of you, we will just patiently await here...

*Lucario and Marth Nod, The Mario bros. just continue to lsiten to see if he has anything else to mention, however...*

Sonic: What?! You have got to be kidding me, while those guys get to go out were stuck in here with nothing to do?!

*Meta Knight gives Sonic a strong grin*

Sonic: Ugh...(Oh boy, I better not get on his badside)

Meta Knight: I am in no mood for any of that, please... Now as I was saying...Let's see if I can pull up something that can create a projection of the world...*Meta Knight pushes a series of buttons...nothing happens...* That's strange, why isn't it working, the blueprints give specific instructions that you have to press these keys in this combination...

(Meanwhile...)

Fox: Uh hey Snake, are your minions suppose to be acting up like this...?

*The robotic assistants send off small sparks, and start to shake rapidly*

Snake: Not really...uhm...huh...

*The robotic assistants' supposed eyes start to turn purple, they then constantly chant...*

Robots: Destroy all lifeforms, destroy all lifeforms!!

*One of them brings their arm behind them and takes a good swing at Bowser*

Bowser: ...Is that it, I didn't even feel a thing! *Bowser grabs the arm and rips it apart, then punches the face of the robot inward* Stupid piece of junk.

Snake: I suggest we run!

*Snake brought along with him an army of his robot assistants, standing their to fight them all would be suicide*

*Back at the Terrace*

Meta Knight: Owell...If that won't work, why don't we just head to were the beds are suppose to be *Meta Knight browses through the blueprints* Okay here we go, all of you follow me once more, it's convinient that they're all in one room, hopefully we won't have to share beds and that there are enough singles going around.

*Somewhere within the terrace*

???? ???????(whispering): That's it, fools, while you all are falling into a deep sleep, I will take care of you all...

Narrator: It's another cliffhanger baby, you know the drill if you want to find out what will happen next!

 

[Ilucamy]

This points to.... JIGGLYPUFF the power of sleep is on her side.

 

[Kinzer]

You're close, it's a pokeman, sort of... TBH I didn't even think about adding Jigglypuff into this.

 

[Steel_Dragon]

pikachu is the scariest rat alive it can use thunder holy **** a electric rat

 

[Steel_Dragon]

planet or wherever he is gonig to go < you mean going

 

[Kinzer]

^ Thanks SD, and how did you know it was an avatar of a Pikachu, was it that he was the only other pokemon I could use from the Brawl roster, or the number of ?s I used?

Anyhow I will be posting the last part of these chapters sometime today, after this I must warn you I am gonig to make a mini-spinoff series focusing more on Ike, but it will still be insidet he LoL series...it's hard to explain, just continue to do what you do and in about two days you will see what I mean, and also you will get a chance to help me build up the story by making a plot/solution to it. How exciting huh? Haha!

 

[Steel_Dragon]

no i guessed lol
and i want to help out with the mini story

EDIT i actually thought pikachu was evil o i guessed it waas him lolol

 

[Steel_Dragon]

kinzer add my aim hughie aka Steel

 

[Kinzer]

^Done, and when is your earliest convinience to discuss the spinoff?

(Chapter 16...and a half... - Snake's party assaulted)

Bowser: Run, what are you, some kind of pansy, just watch this, If you think I am big now... *Bowser prays to the heavens for a Smashball, his petition is answered* Then watch me after this... There it is! *Bowser breaks the smashball, Bowser radiates with bluegreen flames* *Roar (sorry that isn't exciting) Bowser suddenly transforms into a ball of light, and then next thing everybody knows he is tripple (sp?) in size, and much scarier looking...*

Giga Bowser: Time to crush some pawns! *Bowser just then charges into the army of insane robot assistants, although he is outnumbered he is running over them like he were a car!* You're puny, simple attacks cannot harm me in this form! I will destroy you all!! *Bowser withdraws into his shell and starts spinning like a top, this is a bit overkill isn't it...?* HAHA!!!

*Just when Giga Bowser was about to finish off the last couple the effects of the smashball wear off, he then reforms into his normal still somewhat grusom (sp?) self*

Falco: Quite the show Bowser, but you left some still operational.

Bowser: Yeah, I ain't blind, I can see that! Help me take care of them why don't you?!

Falco: Don't take this so seriously, *chuckling* what's the point of living life if you can't have a little fun here and then? I'm coming.

*Falco leaps into the air and shoots his lazers (sorry, just regular ones, no shoop da whoops) at what was left of the devasted army, finishing them off for good.

Falco: there ya go!

Snake: Well, that solves one problem, but now we are interogated with another...

Ike: What would that be?

Snake: Maybe how it's just us, we still have to make our way to the Halberd ship and do some repairs on it, not to mention this will take longer without the help of my now destroyed assistants...

Ike: Aww, that's no problem at all!

Wolf: Man, you are just really optimistic, aren't you?

Ike: I try.

Fox: Shall we continue our way?

Snake: Yes.

Wolf: Hey hold up a minute, shouldn't we return to the terrace, what if Meta Knight and Co. are in danger?

snake: I am pretty sure He will be fine, if anything goes wrong, he always manages to come out fine. We have a mission to complete, or at least I do anyway, all of you were ordered to help me with it.

Starfox team: Correct.

*After walking in the forest for a long time nightfalls, and just everybody is pooped out.*

Ike: Can we call it a day please, we have been traveling for decades, and the ship isn't technically going to "fly" off anywhere.

Snake: As you wish, I hope you are comfortable sleeping in the open, I brought nothing but some explosives for protection and the necessary tools to fix a gigantic ship.

Fox: Sounds great, would be a nice change from being couped up around some heavy machinery.

Wolf: Defenitely!

Snake: Agreed.

Everybody: Good night!

*meanwhile somewhere close...*

???? ???????: While my twin works at the terrace, I got the more boring job. Oh well, I can't complain, I just hope that these guys are just as fun...especially with what I have in store for them when they make their way to the Halberd ship and get tired once more. They won't see it coming and they won't be able to fight back...hehehehehe...

*Hours pass, sunrise arrives*

Samus (Yawning, and in her thoughts): Wow, what a good sleep for sitting up against a tree... *Samus slowly lifts her eyelids up, to notice this...* AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! *punt*

Ike: OW, MY EYE!!

Samus: DON'T YOU EVER HAVE ANYTHING BETTER TO THAN BRUSHING UP AGAINST MY FACE EVERYDAY?!?

Ike: NOT REALLY, I CAN'T SLEEP VERY WELL BECAUSE WHENEVER I DO, EVEN THE SWEETEST DREAMS MEAN NOTHING IF I AM NOT WITH YOU!!!

Samus: Get another hobby would you please? I have told you countless times I do not want to go out with you!

Ike: You can't keep pushing me away forever, eventually you have to give me a chance, and when you do you wouldn't regret it!

Samus: *moan* What's it take? I will ask you politely to respect my personal space.

Ike: Huh?

Samus: MOVE! *shove* You're hopeless, it's like talking to a 3 year old that will never understand it. I am going to get the other's awake, we are gonig to continue our way, and when you follow, you will keep your distance.

*Ike just sits where he is.*

Ike (in his mind): Man, she hit me good this time around again, probably if I looked in a mirror right now my eye would be black...big men don't cry... *Ike palms his face with his hand, trying to hold his tears in, he successfully accomplish this.* Alright, I am good to go, they won't notice anything other than maybe my eye which I would be lucky if it was just swollen...I don't need anybody else seeing me right now like this, it wouldn't be good for my reputation...

*After more hours of walking in the forest the crew get closer to where they have to get to, Falco tried to start a light conversation between Ike when...*

Falco: Hey Ike, what's up with your eye?

Ike: Oh you saw it? Well, long story short, I got thi-

*Out of nowhere, A bunch of Black Toad pugs surround the crew, one of them though is different, this one looked like a dark avatar of one of the Pikachu's that naturally inhabit this part of the forest...*

???? ???????: Have a good sleep?

*Ike places his hand on top of Ragnells handle The Starfox team ready their arsenal, as so does Snake. Samus readies her handcannon.*

Ike: What are you suppose to be, some kind of black rat?

???? ???????: Aww, I ask you a friendly question and this is how you reply?

Ike: Shaddap! From the Black Toads, I can tell you are another lieutenant of the Army of Shadow, now start talking!

Dark Pikachu: In a way you are right, although not a "Real" lieutenant, Was created by shadow Mario to take out this half of your party. Another one of me, well, another Dark Pikachu, is back at Snake's terrace. We wanted to thank you in person for taking down his securites, it allowed to carry over to the next phase of the plan.

Wolf: I knew it, Meta Knight right now is probably in a war right now with aonther pipsqueak for a lieutenant.

Dark Pikachu: Alright, now that's getting annoying, I am an avatar of Shadow Mario, but I deserve as much respect as you should be giving him when we make you are slaves!

Ike: I would rather die than do anything for your cause!

Dark Pikachu: Enough, there has been too much talk! Minions, strike at will!

*The black toads charge at the heroes, although they get wiped out within seconds*

Snake: Is that it, we kind of have somewhere we have to be.

Dark Pikachu: *hmph* that was just the cannonfodder, now face...*evil laugh* Your enigmas!

*From the ground you could see purple swirly things, and from these voids would appear what seemed to look like... copies of the heroes?!*

Fox: What kind of sick game is this?!

Dark Pikachu: Do you like them, I hope you do, how can you "hate" yourselves?! HAHAHAHA!!

Bowser: What are they suppose to be...dopplegangers?!

*The doppleganger that looked like Wolf went in after Bowser*

Bowser: Whoa jeez, this Wolf seems to have a lot strength behind it!

*Bowser fails to hold off the Wolf, while being resisted by Bowser he would use his own center of gravity against him, and backflips with a instep kick right to Bowser's chin*

Bowser: Laubre! *Bowser falls forward because he was trying to push the Wolf away from him and halls on his front side, he just sits there in great pain* Auw, man, my jaw!

Dark Pikachu: Now would be the perfect time to explain, I opened up saying how was the dreaming because in your slumber I was grabbing samples of your DNA, and I managed to make copies of each and every one of you...the only difference is that these duplicates are stronger than you in every way imaginable!!

Samus (in her mind): This is going to destroy my power suit, but at least once I return to the Halberd I will be able to fix it...

*Samus inputs some codes on her armcannon, seems like she wants to try and take them out with one shot.*

Dark Pikachu: That was a great demonstration of what these dopplegangers are going to do to you all. Now focus fire on Snake!

*Snake reach for his grenade, but Samus yells*

Samus: No need Snake, just hold still!

*Samus bends one knee to touch the ground, uses her free arm to hold the armcannon up, and in the inside of it is a focused beam of energy*

Samus: Fire!

*Samus release the tightly packed beam, when she fires out comes a big lazer. To her hopes, it takes out the dopplegangers, but at the cost of shattering her power suit, as she had expected that as well.*

Dark Pikachu(whispering): Not good, while this failed, we can still have a chance, but I need to get out of here...*runs off*

Ike: You better run you coward! *walks up behind Samus* That was some pretty good stuff right there, babycakes! *Ike lightly slaps her butt*

*backhand*

Samus: That was your last warning, I am done telling you now. *she is still quite calm saying this*

*That backhand was so powerful it sent Ike flying to a nearby tree*

Ike: Gauo!

Samus: Leave him where he is, he will catch up. I want to get to the Halberd as soon as possible, and get things taken care of.

*all the other men were so scared of disobeying her, they let Samus lead the way, and as she had called it out, they get to the Halberd.*

Samus: Alright, we better get to work, this will take a while, and by the time Meta Knight is done on his side, he should be coming this way, and we need to have this ship up and running when he does come.

Everybody but Ike who was rather silent: Yes Ma'am, right away!

 

[Steel_Dragon]

kinzer i wont be online because of 2 things: 1st i have school andd secondly my laptops screen broke so i am using my wii but if i have time tommorow ill reply P.S. its Mah b-day tommorow ill pm you tomorrow to discuss the spin off as soon as i get time tomorrow ok

 

[Kinzer]

If by tomorrow and when you made that post you mean...thursday, alright I'll try and have my AIM on and be awake a little bit before 1:00 P.M. Pacific time. The Spinoff is gonig to take place after I post this chapter, and I am pretty sure I am going to need help from some people. This is gonig to be one heck of a spinoff...I repeat, any help will be accepted, please let me know if you are interested via PMs on the forum, contacting my AIM, or letting me know right here in this thread.

(Chapter XVII - Reliving the nightmares...)

* this is following up from chapter 16, we left off with the crew that stayed behind here...*

Meta Knight: Ah, here we go. So yeah, there's bunkers for everybody, I am sure some of you are not comfortable that way.

Marth: Well it's not that I hate it, but I would appreciate it if I were by myself in a slumber...

Lucario: Right.

Meta Knight: Well, I am going to go see if I can fix the master computer here at the terrace, as for the rest of you, are free to do as you wish, but most of you are probably going to go to sleep.

*Meta Knight leaves the room*

Marth: Yes, I am pretty bushed. I will see you all again when I wake up.

Kirby & Luigi: Good night!

Mario & Peach: We're gonna go into the kitchen, fix up a quick dinner before we head off to "dreamland".

Mario: And a besides, *winking at Peach* it a has been way too long since we a shared a "date". Hehe!

Peach: You stud.

Lucario & Sonic(in their minds, althoguh they think a syncronyzed thought): Ugh, how is that possible that a great girl like her can go out with a plumber like him...Owell, don't want to say anything, after all, love is for the blind...

Lucario: I am just going to stay up a bit longer, channeling my Aura.

Sonic: Yeah, and I am gonig to go see if Meta Knight can let me outside, do a quick lap or 15 around the terrace, I usually sleep better if i am tired.

*Sonic heads for the office to find Meta Knight. He find him, but frustrated...*

Sonic: Something the matter, chief?

Meta Knight: I can't get this thing to respond to any of my commands!

Sonic: You mind if I take a whack at that thing?

Meta Knight: You're welcome to try. Maybe you can get this thing to work *sigh*.

Sonic: Okay. *Sonic looks at the blueprints to open the door leading out of the terrace, he gets it working successfully* Alright, well, I'll be seeing ya around!

*Meta Knight just stares at Sonic in awe...meanwhile at the kitchen, Mario grabs a bunch of ingredients, then does some fancy work with them, like juggling the jars full of peanut butter/jelly/ketchup/mayo/mustard. He quickly stacking up all the material like food, such as the balogni, ham, cheese, letuce, tomatoes, etc.*

Mario: Sorry I have to a settle for regular old sandwiches, but I do hope a you enjoy!

Peach: Ah Mario, even though you do like to showoff a lot of the times, I still find it fun to watch you.

Mario(Blushing): Here a you go, one sand-a-wich, hold a the chili-peppers and anything else a you did not a want!

*Peach just laughes, even though Mario mixed up a lot of the stuff, he remembered the thing Peach did not in hers (also I am too lazy to type a bunch of other things, and besides, even if I did the list would go on forever).*

Peach: Thanks, Mario.

Mario: Don't a mention it.

*after a while of eating, Mario opens up and says...*

Mario: You know, have I ever a told you how much I appreciate a you? Back a long time ago, even a before we came to this world, you were a always there, if a turtle came flying at me and a gave me a bump, you would a do what you do best and help me heal a faster. If a goomba came out of a nowhere and bit me, you would always have a something ready to treat it a.

Peach: You don't have to say all that, I know that yo-

Mario: Oh, but a princess, I must a, in fact, I don't a think I have said it enough a times how much I -

???? ???????: oh, this is making me sick, too much mushy-gushy stuff, not enough misery! Time for a change of scenery!

Mario: Where a did that come from?

???? ???????: Up here you moron!

*Whatever this thing was, it was hanging from a pipe on the ceiling, but after it had said that dropped down on the very table that Mario and Peach were eating off of.*

Mario: Who are you? How did a you get in here? More important-a-ly, who a gave you the right to interrupt our carefree dinner?!

Doom Pikachu: They call me Doom Pikachu. I've been stalking this half of your ludicrous little clan for quite some time. As you probably have figured out, I am 1/2 of a lieutenant of the Army of Shadow, my other twin is worknig his dark magic on those that are stranded out there in the open. The reason why Meta Knight can't get anything to work is because I hacked the system. I am going to show you horrors undreamed of!

Mario: Peach a. get out of here and get help, I'll a deal with a this mouse until then!

Doom Pikachu: Oh you don't, neither of you two are getting otu of this room, awake! *Doom Pikachu sends a bolt of dark at both Mario and Peach, they both fall into a slumber, however they seem to be in agony* Impudent mortals, while you are trapped in your own nightmares I will take care of the rest of you...

*Doom Pikachu makes his way to where most of the others are, he tends to go for Meta Knight last...Doom Pikachu kicks the door open and to Lucario's suprise...*

Lucario: ! Pik...achu...?! *Lucario is sort of shocked, and readies himself in stance.*

Doom Pikachu: Nop, just an illformed avatar of one, now get out of my way so I can take care of those already asleep, my job is made only easier, I just have to corrupt their slumbers and deal with you...

Lucario: I don't know what you are, but if your intentinos are cruel, than I am afraid I can't let you pass.

Doom Pikachu: *hmph* So be it, you are only delaying plans.

*Both Doom Pikachu and Lucario engage one another, both acting very fast, throwing punches and kicks, taking hits, blocknig and parrying some wild ones here and there*

Doom Pikachu: It's hopeless, in the end you will only perish!

Lucario: True, but unlike you I will die of natural causes. I was born and I will grow old, you on the other hand you are created I assume, and if that's the case I can destroy you.

Doom Pikachu: Enough of this foolishness!

*Doom Pikachu sent another Dark Bolt to Lucario, but Lucario had already siphoned his will/Aura power into a small blue ball, it's as if Lucario had left his body in place, and everything else that was him was in the form of this Aura ball. This confuses Doom Pikachu into thinking he had Lucario down for the count.*

Doom Pikachu: They all go down the same. Now I will finish the rest of them off and deal with Meta Knight while he is on his lonesome...

Lucario: *I need to go warn Meta Knight: before he is blindspotted!*

*Doom Pikachu turns towards Luigi, Kirby, and Marth, sending 3 more Dark Bolts out from his hand, and now their dreams are haunted...meanwhile*

Meta Knight: I think I almost got it, now I jus- What the?

Lucario: *Meta Knight!*

Meta Knight: Lucario?! Is that...what are you-?

Lucario: *There's no time, Meta Knight, get to where everybody else is, I tried to stop him, but I couldn't do it on my own, but maybe you could do something...!*

Meta Knight: If there is one thing that is a surefire way to work, it's the self-destruct sequence, if you could barely hold him off, I don't want to work too hard at eliminating this threat, I'll st it for 10 minutes, it won't see this coming, and will be taken out with the explosion, get back into your body and get the others, I'll stale him!

Lucario: *Right*

*Coming back to Doom Pikachu*

Doom Pikachu: Mission accomplished, now that Meta Knight is alone, what's a leader without any followers, they won't get out of the eternal nightmare...

Meta Knight & Lucario: That's what you think, pal!

Doom Pikachu: What?! I thoguht I had you (directed at Lucario)

*Lucario looksat Meta Knight and nods, he leaves to find Mario, Peach, and he knew Sonic was fine because he must still be outside...*

Doom Pikachu: Hey, where do you think you're going?!

Meta Knight: Oh you don't, you aren't following him *Meta Knight covers himself with his cape and disappears*

Doom Pikachu: Darn, where did he go?

Meta Knight: ...Here's Johnny!!

*Meta Knight appears behind Doom Pikachu and before Doom Pikachu could react gets eviscerated by Meta Knight*

Doom Pikachu: Nice try, but nothing physical will work on me.

Meta Knight: Oh, is that so? You know I use to be a dark warrior myself, however I have seen the light, and Palutena has shown me the error of my old ways, and she has redeemed me. Although I fight for the light now, I stil kept some of the void's power... at least in the form of Galaxia. You see this sword in my hand, it isn't made up of physical properties, if I wanted to I could've used it for the shadows, but Palutena has also sanctified it with holy. I have spoken too much, just watch this... *Meta Knight snaps his fingers, the instant he does out comes what would seem to be blood from Doom Pikachu*

Doom Pikachu: Awaugh! What have you done to me.

Meta Knight: Simply put, This sword is Night's bane, I have rendered you immobile. Now while I may not be able to kill you off, I did set this place up to self-destruct in a matter of...oh look at the time, it's about 55 secodns to detonation. If you will excuse me, I will leave you here to die, and I alogn with Lucario will get everybody else out of here in one piece. Von Voyage!

Doom Pikachu: Get back here, I am not through with you!

Meta Knight: Oh, contrare (sp?) My evil friend, I am done with you, however.

*Meta Knight gathers Luigi, Kirby, and Marth and one place, he then throws his cape over him and them and safely teleports out of the terrace*

Doom Pikachu: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Outside the terrace, Sonic is startled by Meta Knight just appearing in front of him*

Sonic: Oh wow man, what are you doing out here.

*Meta Knight points to the terrace, 2 seconds pass... BOOM!!!!*

Sonic: Gah!

Meta Knight: I set the place to explode...

Sonic: Are you insane, what about everybody else that is in there, I see Marth, Luigi, and irby with you out here, but what about Lucario, Mario, and Peach?!?

*Out from the night sky appears to be dour Lucarios, one holding antoher passenger along with them*

Lucario: Fusion, ho!!!
Lucario duplicate: Fusion, ho!!!
Lucario duplicate: Fusion, ho!!!
Lucario duplicate: Fusion, ho!!!

*Lucario becomes one again*

Lucario: Well Meta Knight, seeing Sonic here means that we get everybody out safe and sound, even the chimps.

Meta Knight: Good, I was hoping since the cage was in the kitchen you wouldn't forget the monkeys.

Lucario: Well, yes. We have a dilemma at our hands though, everybody is out, but what is wrong with them?

Meta Knight: That thing probably invaded their dreams, and they can't wake up...

 

[Steel_Dragon]

kinzer my uncle is gonna try to get my laptop fixed so ... ill pm u now about the spin - off ok (im on mah wii )

 

[Kinzer]

Alright I am going to let you all now that I am going to hold off for a little while to work on the spinoff, Steel Dragon was kind enoguh to volunteer to help, and when I post all the chapters you will have one mroe person to worship...err, I mean give credit to. :D Anyway feel free to leave any comments on what you thought so far of the last two additions, I tried to make them longer than usual because I felt like I was being too lazy on the last couple.

 

[Steel_Dragon]

they were .................grrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeaaat