My approach is shedding light now. I can see how detrimental it can be to provide groundless words connected to a paradoxical chain of abstract notions without ever explaining what it all truly represented. LT, you are like a flea - quick to jump to suck life out of someone. Let me explain the idea of my writing and what you defined as practically ****, and senseless along with your other quick to judge comments as if you could critique it after you didn't understand most of it in the first place. Sounds familiar, eh? Then I will explain it all to you. Then we'll see if it changes any weight of your opinions, and your belittling insults.
My writing is about using paradoxical formulas carried by puzzle pieces. I use pieces of my mind - putting them in places to where they all may be different as if I was jumping to different theories, but they all do come together in the end as one actual idea through a labyrinthine puzzle.
Fruitless Aftermath
To choose to be or not to be you must first choose to see or not to see.
I thought it worked both ways. Also, no. My writing isn't vague. It's a puzzle. Which is why you complained about the whole thing in the first place. So it won't be a reference to the rest of the diddy as if you were reading a book, but through an underground web that puts it all together instead.
A decision is always made. A decision for making a decision is never made. So, we choose to We seek power, control, of ourselves. Animals are not of us, because we say so?
What you gathered from this was an abomination to any reasoning I have ever seen. ''A decision is always made. A decision for making a decision is never made.'' Translates to: We as people choose to do things through decisions, but never do we choose to exercise a decision to make a decision more intact. We never question as to why we make our decisions, we only weigh them out in the beginning. Our future is now what slowly folds out the answer to our reason for making a decision. Sometimes, it's best to ask ''Why?'' before we carve a path. Two words define life in my eyes. There is will, and there is understanding. To do, and to understand why you do it.
Animals are not of us, because we say so?
See? You do not understand anything I write. You always look at everything theoretically, and never even try to see the underlying message underneath my ''page of crap''.
''Animals are not of us, because we say so?'' Translates to: Humans hide from their instincts, and play the perfect game. Saying you are not an animal, only makes the animal inside feel ignored. Soon you'll understand what happens when you cage in this animal far too long. We tend to fight off other people's beasts, but we forget about ours until it's too late. We all have a shadow. We all have a beast.
To see a decision and to be a decision are two different fields.
Again, you don't understand my writing, and what I am talking about. ''To see a decision and to be a decision are two different fields.'' Translates to: To descry a choice that was made is irrelevant to living as a choice. We see changes in life through people's decisions everyday, but it's an inanimate subject. A human who lives a choice is never always what they appear to be. The things we see that aren't living is what we get. While we have the ability to mutilate choices that make us who we are from every sense possible.
To accept what we decline, is just as we are to be what we decide. Nothing more, nothing less, a simple yet complex question to another question. ''Who Am I'', a question asked many times more than ''Does God Exist''? Which inquiry seeks further placing? Obvious, yet not so obvious.
This is a mouthful of logical paradox. I am mocking the idea of ambiguity, and how common sense could place the pieces together any day, no matter if there is no proof.
''To accept what we decline, is just as we are to be what we decide. Nothing more, nothing less, a simple yet complex question to another question.'' Translates to: What we hide from is only creating more schisms. Humans have created a pseudo-mad scientist archetype that creates things to hide and ease their burdens. They never learned how to destroy it. Humans who lie to themselves somehow fall in this world they created to where they actually believe it's true. They live a lie. Pain was locked in a black chest behind a locked metal door deep inside of their subconscious. This fits perfectly with the thesis of my writing. ''To be or not to be, you must first choose to see or not to see'' is an ambiguous mock towards those who live under shreds of lies. So please, learn to evaluate more properly LT. The above already elaborates the rest of this patch of ''critique''.
We are what we want to be, not what we were to be.
I am baffled that you didn't even understand this simple thought LT.
''We are what we want to be'' Translates to: We want to be like those around us, erasing all of our personality replacing it with fabricated personalities built off other people we admired. We create masks to hide the true side of ourselves, and as time goes by this mask starts becoming our new identity. To adhere on broken truth is remarkably ignorant. Since you can't even comprehend simple lines, I will explain this part thats self explanatory just for you. ''not what we were to be'' Translates to: We aren't who we really wanted to be, but an experiment we created through faulty respect for ourselves letting people decide who we are. (When they can't even define themselves)
Chained to a tree, asking endless questions that only we ourselves can answer. Nobody else. Not even God.
You are very amusing. You may be a great writer, but you surely do not understand my philosophy. This entire ''pile of crap'' is a hidden message to ambiguity, and what has become of it. Ambiguity has turned neutrality into a monster that cannot be destroyed, because there will never be solid proof to deem it false. We continue to turn to leverages, or outlets to hide our weakness. Living life for granted. We won't confront the darkest corridors of our subconscious when thats where alot of our problems arise. The answer has been with us since day 1. Knowing who we are, understanding life. To do things you want to do without any bad influence. We need to understand how to manifest things people tell us, not let it mutate with our very own person. Which is why I continue to fight your accusations, and belittling - LT. I understand who I am, and won't let somebody like you say otherwise. I am defending my ethos. Therefore it has yet to crumble my delightful friend.
We are the skeleton in our closet, we are the scars to our past.
Again LT, you are nothing but a theoretical bull****ter, who has no sense to incline one's self into a deeper perspective I have provided. You just mount everything you have already gathered from what you think - regarding my writing, and my character as a person through your lack of understanding, and poor manifestations through everything I have explained.
''We are the skeleton in our closet, we are the scars to our past.'' Translates to: We are the burden, and we are the problem. We tend to blame everyone, or something - but never do we blame ourselves. Who chooses to let our past haunt us? Who chooses to let our scars ruin our future? We may not have gave birth to said scar, but we are the ones who carry it as a trial. Skeletons are negative segments of our life we just couldn't handle to admit, so we stuffed it in our childish closet hoping it never will haunt us again. The ambition to forget our skeletons is why we can actually convince ourselves what we said that was once a lie, is now the truth today. It must not be nonsense if I can back up every one of your half-***** attempts to be a critic. Atleast you wasted your time to spout out unfavorable nonsense, right?
Nothing chooses us to harm ourselves through sorrow, only us.
I agree with one thing, that yes. It does sound like I wrote it wrong. It still stands true as another underlying idea that you just can't begin to fathom. I explained this above through our scars and skeletons. We choose things. We are the master chariot. People can't make you mad, only you can. People can't make you sad. Only you can. This is again ''To choose to be or not to be, you must first choose to see or not see'' I'm just destroying all of your ridiculous ''critique'' LT. u mad?
We have the hands, the legs, the power, the control. Where am I to say such lies?
This is the second most helpful tip you have given me underneath all your arrogant, belligerent bull****. Well done. I will give you 2 stars.
A lie is the truth, the truth is a lie.
Continue to read my persona wrong LT. I dare you to. I see what you were implying when you said ''flashy''. Once again. That critique you think that matters - being the answer to all my future writing is bull****. You fail to understand 95% of any of this, because your attitude is equal to a petty child.
''A lie is the truth, the truth is a lie.'' Translates to: We have been raised to fear things as lies, but in reality it's where our answers are hiding. We convinced people what is truth, when it's nothing but lies. Whats your IQ? You seem to only be book smart.
We hide from our strength.
I agree with you to an extent. Learn to put pieces together, and stop looking at things with rigid analyzing. Maybe you'll stop looking like a pugnacious critic, and actually provide beneficial critique. Mhmm?
''We hide from our strength'' Translates to: We hide from what gave us strength as a child. We didn't care about what people thought about who we were. We were what we were. We hadn't a care in the world. I believe it's neutral understanding accompanied by action. To see both sides, and to accept the opinions of others while still disagreeing. That is a true opinion, and a way to reflect your expression towards life. To accept that we all stand in the same world only to see it in different perspectives. These people who get defensive. The ones who lash out at you. Do not deserve to hold an opinion, if they can't even hold themselves together being chained to their unadvancing world they created. Which is where this power was abandoned. Alot of people shatter too easy when you challenge them, because they fear inferiority. If we were to stand up as a person who believes in what we devoted ourselves to understand in life - then that would make us a human who is a warrior at heart. That is our strength. To fight for who we are, not what we created and convinced ourselves that we were that creation. I dare you to relate this to me, because you are so obsessed with me allegedly not accepting your godsend critique.
We wallow in our fear. What we see in the mirror is more real than we are, yet what we see is a lie?
This isn't critique you fool. Whatever. What did I expect from somebody who has grown up to be a systematical git, who believes they are always right - picking out the negatives from other people, never to admit to their own mistakes when discussion is at a high level.
Trying to critique something that they failed to comprehend 95% of is undoubtedly amusing. You really need to take up humility as a new hobby instead of using big words as monoliths to protect your pathetic common sense, and respect for those around you as if you are on a higher level than they are. A hypocrite trying to critique my work? Please. Unlike you. I explain myself thoroughly through neutral explanations rather than ''Oooh, I am a wise man who will lead you to your eternal salvation. My words are the neccessity of life, and I will bite you in the *** if you disagree with me''
''We wallow in our fear. What we see in the mirror is more real than we are, yet what we see is a lie?'' Translates to: As I stated already above, because everything blatantly connects; you inflexible dunce. We wallow in weakness, and retreat to everything but ourselves for strength When you stand infront of the mirror (You should do this, and ask yourself why you became the person you have LT.) you see yourself, but you know that this isn't who you really are. It's only your body that stands in which you have corrupted by giving up on the only strength that held you together. Our reflections are real. We are not. I will further explain this if you reply to all this ''garbage''.
Binded truth, is a lie that is free. Wings of judgment are the horns of a demon, the horns of the demon are the whispers of our light. What is light? What is this darkness?
I don't blame you. Failing to understand 95% of something that obviously makes perfect sense.
''Binded truth, is a lie that is free.'' Translates to: Truth that is buried, gives freedom to deception. Do I need to simplify this for you? ''Wings of judgment are the horns of a demon, the horns of the demon are the whispers of our light. What is light? What is this darkness?'' People who seem perfect, and dress like a gentleman are usually a beast who has no chains to balance him if something wakes up the monster inside. They are obviously going to dress to where we can feel comfortable, and put up a great white smile to kick everything off. Those who we see as a monster are usually decent human beings who hold alot of insight for us. Do I need to further explain this too?
Who are we, and what are we not to be? Questions inundate our shadow encrypted life force. Buried questions. Living questions. It's the answer. Standing, walking, chasing. Never to leave one's place. Endless endeavor for this endless curiosity, only rewards you with fruitless aftermath.
If you are going to mock me my omnipotent friend, then do it with reason. How pro are you at being stupid? Can you wavebounce ignorance?
''Who are we, and what are we not to be?'' Translates to: Asking who we are now, and what we have become that we created by becoming a mad scientist. Playing with our own personality, and psyche. ''Buried questions. Living questions. It's the answer. Standing, walking, chasing. Never to leave one's place.'' Questions are a neutral mechanism that should be respected in all forms especially if it is buried. We shouldn't leave questions unanswered, and shouldn't fear to ask a question. All it does is create turmoil. ''Standing. Walking. Chasing'' Pay good attention to those three words. Now. Connect it to ''Never to leave one's place.'' Do you see it now? Or are you still too incompetent to comprehend things that you don't learn through books? Let me give you a hand. When you question everything in life but yourself, you are advancing nowhere. We are a big part of life, and to understand ourselves is just as important as understanding our characters in a game.
To understand, and to take action as who we are, and what we want to achieve is being held back by this ambiguous bull****. ''Endless endeavor for this endless curiosity, only rewards you with fruitless aftermath.'' See it now? Everything makes perfect sense you intolerable putz.
Let's see how you ended your childish analysis.
''Ah! Finally you come back to the original point.........and then just as quickly cast it aside without a tiny bit of clarification.
This whole paragraph is redundant. You already said all this earlier.
...wait, that's it? What meaningless drivel. I just wasted my time. This reads like a teenage journal entry. You probably won't even take any of this criticism anyways. All I can recommend to you is to read more books, practice humility, and truly think about each individual idea you crap out onto the page. ''
Wow it fits your post, and your attitude. What a convenience!
Actually, no. I finally got around to it because you can't comprehend my intricate way of wording. You basically could only understand the beginning, and the end because you don't seem to have a high IQ my friend. I know people who are in 7th grade who understood this perfectly. Your benign foundation is a laugh. Learn to critique when you actually understand atleast 50% of something you unrenowned ****. Meaningless drivel is due to your childish ability to comprehend something that you learn on your own, not through books. What criticism? Please tell me what criticism? I basically just blew everything you pulled out of your self-rightous *** to oblivion. You only gave me two helpful tips LT. You broke your old record. Well done. I should recommend you to stop reading too many books, and look at life through different perspectives, rather than this wiseman archetype you built to protect your weakness as a human being.
practice humility, and truly think about each individual idea you crap out onto the page.
I should say the same thing to you, providing I gave you 50x more explanations to back up my reasons. Rather than your little ****y, meaningless responses that you call critique. I see insults, I see more misunderstanding. Alot of it actually. 95% of it actually. More boundless nonsense. Pathetic attempts to shoot down my writing because of your already weak analyzing.
Please, if you are going to excoriate; atleast make it sensible. Kthxbai
