Stryks presents: War of the clubs 2.0! UPDATE: 18/03/08

[T-major]

All right!

FC: 060256250656

added you.

my code is

064552121037

 

[Colenstien]

added you.

my code is

064552121037

Added! So game on?

 

[T-major]

Added! So game on?

yes.

10 chars

 

[Colenstien]

Aight, I opened one. So join in!

 

[T-major]

it won't let me connect... :C sowwy

 

[Colenstien]

it won't let me connect... :C sowwy

Oh well. Past my bedtime anyway........ did I say bedtime? I-I meant my ultra super sexy partying....... bedtime.











****

 

[IsmaR]

Lol. PH is the new Hunters.

 

[lanky_gunner]

Speaking of Hunters, I think we should play Hunters before...well, something happens to me tomorrow which will leave me incapacitated for the rest of the week.

EDIT: I swear Sinistar is always on when I go online, but he never plays a match!

Maybe he's pissed at me for those matches we did a few days ago...

 

[Shuma]

What, you pulverized him?

 

[lanky_gunner]

Sorta...I guess the tactic I was using really pissed him off. I won using it, but maybe he thought it was cheap? If so man, I don't mean to be cheap, but that's how I plan on playing the game because it works for me.

Anyway, I probably won't expect an update this weekend? Oh well...I'm not looking forward to this afternoon. Another 13 hours before I'm gonna feel a LOT of pain.

So I'll see you guys around here probably next Sunday. Won't feel like doing anything for the next couple of days knowing what I'm about to go through. But I'll bring my DS, see if I can fight you guys on Hunters. At least something to help liven my week.

Well...see ya...I guess...

 

[IsmaR]

What tactics? Running around in circles, trying to pull of headshots?
And I'm up I guess...but I'm sick, and I might pass out at any minute...

-I HAVE CALM

 

[platnum]

What's going on with colb, what's this thing he's about to go through?

Is he like, psychic or something, and can see the future?

 

[antimatter]

whatever you do, dont head towards the light!

 

[Reyairia]

whatever you do, dont head towards the light!

But, it's so... beautiful...

 

[IsmaR]

Death shall come soon for us all.


-I HAVE FURY!

 

[Reyairia]

Death shall come soon for us all.

No, I don't think so.

 

[IsmaR]

Those who do not understand do not need to know anything..

 

[Shuma]

Death is a *****. Long Live Anubis.

 

[IsmaR]

Well said.
And what's wrong with the world when Ganondorf looks like he's power-walking instead of running?
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=CNdLECu0Zh4

 

[antimatter]

i loled.
on a different note, i'm gonna repost the first part of my first story on smashboards here. if you like it, but feel i could improve, tell me. if you think it sucks and i should quit, feel free and tell me, i'll ignore it anyway.


The time and place: The space pirate raid on Samus's colony.
Sylux was just a little boy at the time. he hid under a chair to hide from these scary people. Daddy said the federation would protect us from anything. Why aren't they here now? He looks around and sees only flame and death. His parents were killed instantly. Wait! He sees a ship! Bird people are taking that girl Samus away! He screams for them to take him too, but it is too late. He is crying and enraged. He looks around, and sees an opening in a pirate ship. Sylux sneaks in the cargo hold, and the ship flies off.
Sylux wakes up in a cold sweat. The same dream he had every night since the incident. Oh well... He puts on his suit, goes in his ship, and goes hunting for the federation.

 

[Reyairia]

ts;nd.

10 chars.

 

[antimatter]

:veryconfu
that's a weird acronym. what's it stand for?

 

[Shuma]

I thought Sylux's charm came from that fact that he was a walking mistery killing machine.

 

[Reyairia]

:veryconfu
that's a weird acronym. what's it stand for?

Too Short; Needs Detail.

 

[IsmaR]

Needs work, but pretty good IMO


-May we flee?

 

[antimatter]

I thought Sylux's charm came from that fact that he was a walking mistery killing machine.

true, but i figured i could try and find rationale behind his actions.

 

[Reyairia]

I thought Sylux's charm came from that fact that he was a walking mistery killing machine.

That's exactly why fanfiction can be so much fun.
(It's just taken the wrong way sometimes)

EDIT: antimatter, when was the last time you read a novel for pleasure?

 

[Collective of Bears]

That's exactly why fanfiction can be so much fun.
(It's just taken the wrong way sometimes)

EDIT: antimatter, when was the last time you read a novel for pleasure?

Well idk about him, but I've never read a novel unless I had to.

 

[IsmaR]

-I have boredom...

 

[RDK]

:veryconfu
that's a weird acronym. what's it stand for?

That's the expression on my face every time I enter the Brawl Boards.

This one works, too:

 

[Reyairia]

Well idk about him, but I've never read a novel unless I had to.

You fail. :|

 

[Lord Viper]

-I have boredom...

I HAVE FURY!!!!

But yea, I didn't think this thread was open due to the last one being close. I guess I'll return when some more art comes or so.

 

[Collective of Bears]

You fail. :|

I just don't like reading. But when I HAVE to, at least I sometimes can almost sort of kinda enjoy it.

 

[IsmaR]

I HAVE FURY!!!!

But yea, I didn't think this thread was open due to the last one being close. I guess I'll return when some more art comes or so.

-I need no long speech before this battle, which will be mighty!

Snack on my wrath, fink-rats!

 

[Collective of Bears]

-I need no long speech before this battle, which will be mighty!

Snack on my wrath, fink-rats!

WITH MUSTARD OF DOOM ON TOP!!!

 

[IsmaR]

-Bah! Now is when the talking stops! I do not have time to stop and smell foul roses such as you!

 

[Collective of Bears]

-Bah! Now is when the talking stops! I do not have time to stop and smell foul roses such as you!

One fell swoop is how I shall deal with you fink-rats!!!

Fawful wins the internet.

 

[Reyairia]

Ok, antimatter. I'll give a thorough look into your writing but... you're not going to like it.

Have you tried reading what you write out loud? It really helps, if it doesn't sound right, chances are it's not written right either. Secondly, up your grammar. There are too many periods where there's supposed to be commas, and a lack of capitalizing words afterwards. Thirdly, it needs more detail, it just sounds as if you're making a sort of plot summary; try to imagine yourself in Sylux's shoes; the smells, the sounds, the sensations... everything. There is no real emotion going into your writing, and no action. It would help to use an expanded and specific vocabulary; instead of saying "goes to the ship" try "treads slowly, feet feeling heavy from the sudden wake-up call." DETAIL!! Lastly, let's get into the plot; Starting off a story with a dream is very unoriginal. Go to a publisher with that they'll read two sentences and toss it right out the window. It doesn't help that it goes with the cliche of "waking up in cold sweat from nightmarish past." Try something new and different.

AND INDICATE THOUGHTS IN NARRATIVE!!

 

[Shuma]

Sylux's shoes contain an awfull amount of blue.

 

[Collective of Bears]

Sylux's shoes contain an awfull amount of blue.

Well, Sylux IS blue, y'know.