Script for Super Smash Bros. Brawl series

[NintendoNerd]

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Hi there. The past few day's I've been busy writing a script (see title duh..).
I made this script to show the possibilities of how awesome it would be, and I hope someone will think: I would like to make this!
Most of the information can be read in this document together with the script itself ofcourse.
http://updo.nl/file/0c86562f.doc

My English is not really good, and Autocorrect wasn't working :l
So, I'm sorry for typo's.
If you have read my script, I would like to hear your opinion! Am I wasting my time? Or is this super awesome, and do you wish someone would make this? Tell me!

PS: Am I posting this in the right board? Sorry if I'm not.

 

[TL?]

You might have a shot considering the SSE is just one big terrible crossover fan fiction.

 

[~Tac~]

TrendMicro antivirus claims the second link as dangerous and a previous source for malicious software.

Also. Good luck on that script, seeing as how Nintendo's success was majorly built on non-verbal characters. Then they throw in Sonic and Snake.

 

[NintendoNerd]

TrendMicro antivirus claims the second link as dangerous and a previous source for malicious software.

Also. Good luck on that script, seeing as how Nintendo's success was majorly built on non-verbal characters. Then they throw in Sonic and Snake.

Second link?

Thanks.

@TL? What's wrong with Subspace Emissary? It's a great story.
Remember, I'm writing this, to show the possibilities, and how awesome it would be.

 

[Budget Player Cadet_]

Second link?

Thanks.

@TL? What's wrong with Subspace Emissary? It's a great story.
Remember, I'm writing this, to show the possibilities, and how awesome it would be.

Does the term "slash fan fiction" mean anything to you? It's essentially a poorly-written story that throws established characters from exceedingly different backgrounds together with little to no reason for it; it often involves lowering the power level of some of the involved and/or raising the power of the others. It ****s on the existing Canon for the established character and is generally almost impossible to reasonably salvage.

Sound familiar?

In the SSE, you take a bunch of established characters, totally juggle their power levels, stick them together in the same game world with literally no justification for doing so, and then provides a story that a 5-year-old could write. Actually, anyone who has read Axe Cop knows that 5-year-olds write better stories.

SSE at the very least offered the heroes no voice, but as far as writing goes, if you were to compare it to even the incredibly flimsy backstory of, say, Soul Calibur, or Tekken, then it would be like comparing Shakespear with "My Immortal". No explanation is given for how a dinosaur, a medival swordsman, and a bounty hunter in a power suit coexist in the same setting; no explanation is given for the coexistence of PT with Lucario and Pikachu; no reasoning is presented for why a floating princess with some vegetables is a match for a special ops member with quite ridiculous CQC abilities... These are all basic issues with slash fan fiction, and the all are present in the SSE. They are, to an extent, in SSB present to a very wide extent, but there's a difference between mechanical gameplay and writing a story.

TL,DR: Slash fan fiction is almost always very stupid; "stories" in smash bros that go cross-world and go deeper than Melee's Adventure mode (IMO the best 1P-mode in smash history) are just bad news.

 

[Teran]

You might have a shot considering the SSE is just one big terrible crossover fan fiction.

I thought SSE was awesome.

Ganon with world's largest shoop da whoop

Yeah life is complete.

 

[~Tac~]

When you see a G&W break his own game and do this in a 3D world, then life is complete for me.

 

[Imperion]

Quite ann intriguing script. As mentioned, I get the explainotory feeling from Pokemon, wich I like.
Kinda gives you the feel of the series is trying to teach you something. I say keep it up!

 

[Life]

See, I liked SSE. Makes a lot more sense if you "read the manual", so to speak, however. (And there's obvious Sakurai Kirby bias, but it was originally supposed to be a Kirby game that got adapted for a dozen or so other series sooooooo)