rate my MK (with vids)

[Muzga]

NEW VIDEOS BELOW THESE! rate and critique plz!!!

hey guys!

you know the drill.
i just want some help to improve.

(Please ignore these ones. they are very old)
me vs ike.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHYzQ3HfriM
me vs pika (how i loathe it)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TA1a7FUXqZg
me vs pika again
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ye3rcz4y1AA
me vs rob
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ogoBdTMOgJg
me vs toon link (gah!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VYpTifmBRWo
toon link agan!
URL="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mV1Wh2BcuFE"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mV1Wh2BcuFE[/URL]
and me vs game & watch
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9eVrGDHfEeE

all the games there are from a local tourney.
cheers!

EDIT: WOO! UPDATES! MORE RECENT VIDEOS!!!:D:D:D
Critique and enjoy!

Muzga(mk) vs Glenn (pit)
+http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vgxBYybAiIs
+http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tzbj6hPt7EE&feature=related

Muzga (Mk) vs Adro (Zelda/Ike)
+http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rrXoxRHdIBo&feature=related
+http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puNuhfkBxk0

Muzga (MK) vs C7 (Pit)
-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6RYkAPC1KA
-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dxD-3ofGU1o&feature=related

Muzga (MK) vs Synnic (Fox)
+http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93bACM4iqyI
-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1A9yWKPsa0c

(vids marked with a + are wins, vids marked with - are losses)

 

[Quez256]

1) Grab more, he's too good to not abuse shieldgrabbing, and his dash-grab has ridiculous range.
2) Shuttle Loop is often not your only recovery option; the side-b is alright, but usually the tornado can do a better job with a lower risk for getting punished if it's blocked.
3) I suppose spacing could use a bit of work, but I don't want to sound like a hypocrite.

I'll fine-tune this a bit when I get through more vids.

Good work overall though ^_^

 

[Muzga]

cheers for the feedback! anyone else?

 

[metahunter]

1- short hop
2- space yourself
3- be more agresive, your giving them to much breathing room
4- learn to edgegaurd
5- f-tilt more
6- never side-b (tornado dose a better job)

 

[Muzga]

Learn to edgeguard?
A bit blunt
what do i need to do more of that im not already doing edgeguardingwise?
be a bit more spesific?
same with telling me to short hop.
im pretty sure i do short hop

could you try to be a bit less blunt and a little more spesific?

edit: you really do sound like you know what youre doing, im not doubting that.
i just want to pay a lot of attention to detail.

 

[Affinity]

Not bad. Just a few things I noticed.

-Space against your opponents. Always try to keep safe distance while still being aggressive.
-Don't d-smash so much. Try to use more d-tilts and f-tilts in place of d-smash when your opponent has low damage.
-I like your d-air edgeguarding, but try to mix up your edgeguarding a little bit with n-airs and reverse shuttle loops.
-Use mach tornado more, but not too much.

Hope I helped

 

[Shears]

metaknight always has the advantage when a characters above you, thats for all characters, except one...

 

[Muzga]

om gonna focus on these issues one at a time then,
okay so spacings a definite issue, how do i work on that?

 

[Affinity]

om gonna focus on these issues one at a time then,
okay so spacings a definite issue, how do i work on that?

Try going into practice mode and work on hitting your opponent with the very tip of your attacks, like F-air, F-tilt, and D-tilt.

 

[Muzga]

keep your eyes out people, there will be more vids coming within the next month
either way, keep it coming

 

[Muzga]

BUMP FOR NEW VIDS!
(soz for double post)

 

[Justaway]

since this is a rate thread Im gonna rate you as having a pretty decent MK but your opponents really weren't on your level in most of those so it's hard to tell

 

[Muzga]

Constructive criticism is always appreciated as well!
keep it coming

 

[grandmaster192]

It's not bad at all.

It need some better spacing though. Don't just go rushing into stuff like that.

Use the dtilt and ftilt at maximum distance along with the fair.

 

[Muzga]

thanks for all the help so far. any and all criticism is wanted and appreciated (from the new vids)
(more plx)