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Rate my Fox ^^

Mindphazzer

Smash Apprentice
Joined
Jan 29, 2007
Messages
120
Location
Bakersfield,CA
I recorded a lot of videos of my Fox. I hope you watch them all. Please tell me what my fox is good with and needs improvement on. Thanks! :)

Fox Ditto Match 1 (I'm the green)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=boG0FN59tKo&mode=user&search=

Fox Ditto Match 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uinFZgRPDdI&mode=user&search=

Ditto Match 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ldyFoqARwaA&mode=user&search=

Ditto Match 4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a0DNJgIsX3o

Ditto Match 5

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nO6li7QFqLo

Ditto Match 6

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PViF4v0Xkf4

Ditto Match 7 [FINAL]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS1SrSrHEoo

My Fox playing Marth

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_1e4JDOleG8

My Fox playing Captain Falcon

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U-Mo0nPY6eg



Please watch all of them if you can! Thanks again!
 

Mindphazzer

Smash Apprentice
Joined
Jan 29, 2007
Messages
120
Location
Bakersfield,CA
edgehog more work on those shine combos and stuff but ur doin pretty good. could use some work on shffling i think i dont know im a horrible critiquer
Alright, thanks. Hopefully I can get some more members to help me out. I want to know if my fox could be considered horrible, alright, good, excellent, or amazing (doubt this one though).
 

Mcscruff

Smash Ace
Joined
Aug 1, 2006
Messages
822
Location
Weston, Florida
i saw many mistakes in the fox ditto. you died within the first 10 seconds, don't do that anymore. You should try and work on your technical skill. Chaingrab the fox with upthrow, then upsmash, then upair. Try to learn how to use shine comboes. At this point, all you should be doing is building your tech skill.
 

robyextreme

Smash Ace
Joined
Oct 1, 2005
Messages
795
Location
Maple Ridge B.C
I watched the first one and saw you die in like 5 seconds and closed it cause it was a lame map.

Then I watched the second one and saw you kill yourself again.

But yeah xXx-Noobking-xXx told me at a smashfest once fox's are either average or elite. :p

Keep working on it..
 

Mindphazzer

Smash Apprentice
Joined
Jan 29, 2007
Messages
120
Location
Bakersfield,CA
Yes, I have posted before telling how my fox is full of errors but I think he is pretty "okay". And I will keep practicing, though I have no one to play against just computers. lol
 

Thunderbolt

Smash Journeyman
Joined
Mar 21, 2006
Messages
392
Location
Moreno Valley, California
Ahhh your Fox needs more work.


You should practice your Wavedashes and Waveshines. And i don't remember if you SHFFL'd any aerials.


You and your friend, (other Fox) basically just have shine battles. I don't think one of them was JC or Waveshined.

(btw I saw the 1st video)
 

patches1111330

Smash Rookie
Joined
Mar 9, 2007
Messages
7
It was nice, work at it and I would use the b button more often. I think you must be faster.
Anyway nice video.
 

Problem2

Smash Champion
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Jun 12, 2006
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Location
Crowley/Fort Worth, TX
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Problem0
you (and all your friends for that matter) suicide too much. Remember, air-dodging, side-B, and fairs are the devil at the ledgel, so next time try to be a little bit more consious (spelling?) of that so you don't lose lives for no reason.
 

Zephyr

Smash Lord
Joined
Apr 30, 2006
Messages
1,639
Location
SD, CA
Don't suck.

On your scale, I would rate yours as good...but I think you need to post up vids of you playing people at tournies. It looks like you play Xan way too much.

Advice for both you and Xan...if you're as up-smash happy as you look...then learn how do use the up-smash in a way that isn't just standing. -_- JCed up-smashes can be really surprising and kill off Peaches pretty easily, too. Also, a good grab combo against fast fallers would be an up-throw, u-tilt, up-throw, up-smash, up-smash, uair. 60% right there. BTW, I've tested this combo in tournies and it works really well. It also tends to piss the opponent off. ^_^; Also, Up-smash out of shield is pretty good.

Geez, I oughta write an up-smash guide.
 

tarheeljks

Smash Lord
Joined
Dec 18, 2006
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Location
land of the free
I only watched the c.falcon match but here is what I saw: You should be doing a lot more running jc'ed grabs and jc'ed smashes. Also, you should be waveshining a lot against c.falcon
 

Mindphazzer

Smash Apprentice
Joined
Jan 29, 2007
Messages
120
Location
Bakersfield,CA
Eh, I never get a chance to go to tournies, Bakersfield sucks for tournaments. I have a Roy I would like people to rate as well if that's cool.
 

Seison

Smash Journeyman
Joined
Mar 19, 2007
Messages
220
Not bad, but you really shouldn't bust out the blaster at close range anymore... it isn't worth an up-smash to the face. Also, you should practice general technical skill more, preferably on an unmanned player 2, or a lvl 1 computer; alot of times when you could have wavedashed or waveshined into an up-tilt, you simply walked briskly toward your opponant and tried to land an upsmash. You're asking to be shield-grabbed, or back-wavedash to f-tilted.

Keeping working on it though, and do try to play other players when you can. (no offense Xan) :p
 

_Phloat_

Smash Champion
Joined
Dec 1, 2006
Messages
2,953
Location
Tennessee V_V
Hmm, you are decent already, and your friend is not bad, here are some things

~Edge guard a little more aggresivly, you don't really need to wait for them go for the ledge hopped Bairs a little.
~Learn to shine cancel, particularly the waveshine, that thing is a beauty!
~I saw you and him wavedash a little after a kill to show off, but it is much better in battle ;)
~There are more ways to recover than fire fox and illusion, they have so low priority, and are so predictable. A lot of the time you could have just FFed a Nair or fell away to the ledge, or even have used a low airdodge.
 

_Phloat_

Smash Champion
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Dec 1, 2006
Messages
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Tennessee V_V
Not bad, keep up the good work!

Here is some constructive critisism

~JC all of your shines! Even learn to wavedash out of them, this makes for great combos
~You dont have to shine out of all your attacks, you can throw in a jabjab Usmash!
~I can't tell very well, but I think you missed a few L-cancels, remember, the L means lag cancel, you can use Z, R or even.. L
~If you are close enough to recover without using a b move, then don't, fox's are really predictable and will get you killed quickly, FF to the ledge, attack with Nair, or even airdodge as he attacks
~This may be a hard one, but try to have the reaction to actually tech the shine, it makes you a lot less vunerable, don't worry, no one can do it 100% of the time :)
~TEH MINDGRAINES. Read all of the essays here, and then give your friends the migraines, lol :)

That Is all I have for now, but I will come up with more, and post a few more, if you have a question pm me, or if you feel it is a generic fox question ask on this topic so a few more people see it :)

DANGIT. Sorry for the double post, the window closed, and I though for sure It died?

I dunno
 
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