Please rate this Snake

[GenG]

This is the Snake of a friend of mine, and he seems to have problems against this other friend's Lucario. Can you give some him some tips on this match? He doesn't have an account in Smashboards but he is watching this thread for every possible advice.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZDzkcvix7rk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5JTOh4ZgkM

Thanks in advance.

 

[-Ran]

Before he can become a good Snake player, he needs to work on his fundamentals.
- I believe that he had a power shield rate of less than 5% on projectiles/attacks.
- He was constantly attempting to pull out a grenade in a shield situation.
- The times that he rolled were almost always directly into the Lucario player.
- He is always running forwards to his opponent. Due to this his main approach is either dash attack, shield, or grab. Lucario can beat all of those in a roll, or a jump away.
- He did around 100% damage to himself in explosives on the first match.
- His grenade game is weak and boring. His is mostly just doing generic tosses without any stripping or vertical tosses, much less instant throws.
- I don't think I saw him do any B-reverses with grenades.
- Not enough jab.

Just direct him to this thread:
http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=272149

 

[Underload]

Well said by Ran. Just go to the critique majigger he linked to.