Please Help My Peach (yet more videos added) :)

[_umbra_]

I finally got some new videos up . Please critique my peach. I especially need help vs. sheik and maybe jigglypuff, so please help me not get *****


New Videos

Umbra (peach) vs. Matt E (fox)
Umbra (peach) vs. Matt E (Jigglypuff)
Umbra (peach) vs. Matt E (Falco)
Umbra (peach) vs. Pav (fox)
Umbra (peach) vs. Pav (sheik)
Umbra (peach) vs. Pav (captain falcon)
Umbra (peach) vs. Melon (falco)

Old Videos
umbra (peach) vs. BEEF (ganon)
umbra (peach) vs. Slim (marth)
umbra (peach) vs. Melon (falco)

 

[Professor Pro]

your peach looks pretty good cant really think of a advice lol so ummm jus keep on practicing

 

[$BONE$]

advice i could give to you is to find more experienced players. no offense. all your opponents seemed really predictable to you, you had the upperhand the whole entire time which isnt a bad thing.. lol. but, i didnt really see any serious spacing, adapting or any mindgames at all. your opponents didnt really fake you out and weren't as good as you. which made it pretty boring..

 

[_umbra_]

lol we're all pretty inexperienced... I've only been playing for about a year or so, and the melon is the only one of us who has been playing that long too . However, there are some more experienced people in the area. I'll try to get some videos of them ****** me

 

[Rapid_Assassin]

Thats a good idea. It's easier to help someone who is losing than someone who is winning anyway. If you're losing, we can tell you why you're losing. If you're winning, you're probably doing something right, at least in that match.

 

[_umbra_]

Updated with a new video... I took a few of me getting beat by other people, but they're on someone else's computer . If I can, I'll upload those, but this is all I have until then. Does anyone have any advice for me? Any stupid mistakes I'm making? please help me lol . I'm going to a tournament this saturday, so I'm trying to get all the help I can. Anyway, help me please!

 

[Pasqual]

I watched the two Falco matches.

- Nice powershielding. Always helps to frustrate your opponent's approach.
- Work on chaingrabbing spacies. I don't think you tried it once in the first match and the few attempts in the second vid were unsuccessful. Practicing that will give you a greater advantage in the matchup.
- Mix up your approaches a little more. Keep 'em guessing.

Overall, a solid Peach that just needs to raise its proficiency in some areas. Good work.

 

[Jihnsius]

Pretty good tech skill, but the mindgames are lacking and I think you shield too much.

 

[_umbra_]

I think I shield too much too . It's a habit I can't seem to get rid of. And I definitely need to practice my chainthrowing. lol thanks for the advice

 

[Master Peach]

Lets see... One thing I can say is in your new video your spamming the nair too much. Doing that will eventually make you too predictable. Put a little bit more variety into your moves and you'll do a lot better.

Your peach is pretty good, but try and fight some better people or more. The more people you fight the more experience you gain.

Pretty good tech skill, but the mindgames are lacking and I think you shield too much.

Also as he said above work on your mind games as well. Mind games are very important. Also that shield thing, I have the same problem too. It's kinda of a habit I'm trying to break. So far I'm making progress. My bro is a quick player. He forces me into my shield and with his great reaction chain grabs me to my doom.

Anyways just pratice the stuff we mentioned and you'll do fine.

Also I recommend you take a look at XIF and Mike G's ditto match. It helps a lot.

 

[_umbra_]

Updated with new videos, finally got those matches of me getting owned by pav . Please critique!