AKC12
Smash Journeyman
Link to original post: Just another poem for that one girl...
Here's the quick and typical story...
One day during my sophomore year I met this girl in some HTML class for the first time. We sat together. Back then I would never dare make a move on her. She didn't as well. She looked good, very slightly chubby, but body still looks **** good. The face is heaven however. And I guess she has nice hips, legs, and rockets for arms. I was hunting bigger game that year, but never made a move.
Junior year. I was going for bigger game, I actually tried for the first time in life but that was just a learning experience. Talked to that girl once. It seems if I tried things would have started but never felt that way about her to do so.
Senior year. Looking at the girls in my classes. Nothing. Then I see that girl again, and again. Then, as if Cupid shot an arrow at me, I want her. So, going against my nature... I talk to her. Then, yes, I got her number. We tried setting up something but she's always busy. In a few aim convos she trusted me with some of her secrets about her past relationships. I helped out the best I could. It seems all fine until one day, I went to this party... I don't know what but then afterward I tried talking to her, nothing seemed to spark in that convo. Then I just... stopped going for her. It's like I found something about this dating game and I chickened out... So yeah a few months pass, whenever I see her I freak, but every time she would say hey and say a few words. This goes on a few times until I was waiting to get home after graduation rehearsal. That was the last time for that school year. 5 years and didn't capture a single one...
Summer goes by, it was July, I had no one to talk to, so I decide to send her a message. She responds, also wanting to know if we could eat out. We make plans, but things messed it up. We try again, again something came in the way for her. Right now she's on vacation, coming back on Tuesday. I don't know, it seems like she's very interested in me, esp since she asked me to something, again a first. I'm a nice enough guy, but I just need to be comfortable enough to be myself. I think I can do that. I hope I don't screw this up...
Anyways I wrote two poems for her already. They were written pretty quickly, and quite simple for now. I'd like some feedback, and maybe tips on getting her.
Hey Amy
Hey Amy
What do you see
When you look at me?
Is it fear? Is it doubt? Is it lov…
Hey Amy
When I look at you
I see a mystery
That is waiting to be solved
By someone special
Like me?
Hey Amy
Don’t be afraid
Of the road that’s laid
For us to see.
It’s better for us to go together.
I’d rather go away if it ain’t meant to be.
Hey Amy
If I said I love you
What will you do?
Will you leave me, sad
Or will you make me happy.
I’m still afraid of what’s to be when I tell you.
Hey Amy
Did I ever tell you
That you are a shining star when I see you happy
And all my problems seem to fade away when I see you that way.
And when you’re sad, I’ll be sad with you.
I’ll never ignore your thoughts and feelings.
Hey Amy
I want to share everything with you
Food, friends, feelings, fears and far more.
Because I love you
And by just looking at you
I feel complete
And without you
I’m incomplete.
Hey Amy
How about you?
What do you see
When you look at me?
Angelo Coelho
August 13, 2009
Had this idea for a while, with the "Hey Amy" thing.
What Would You Do?
What would you do
If I were hurt?
Would you comfort me? Help me? Save me?
If it were me, I’ll do all I can to heal you.
What would you do?
What would you do
If I were away?
Would you keep me occupied? Would you cry? Would you stay faithful?
If it were me, I would want to talk to you as much as possible.
What would you do?
What would you do
If we weren’t meant to be?
Would you stay with him? Would you stay in the light? Would you remember me?
If it were me, I’ll never forget you, yet move on.
What would you do?
What would you do
If our eyes met?
Would you flirt? Admire them? Make out with me?
If it were me, I’d tell you your eyes are simply beautiful.
What would you do?
What would you do
If I said I love you?
Would you stay with me forever? Would you say the same back to me?
If it were me, I’ll kiss you instantly.
What would you do?
What would you do
If we never met?
Would you still be happy? Would you be sad?
If it were me, I wouldn’t know what to do.
What would you do
If I were gone from you?
Would you cry? Would you fade? Would you die?
If it were me, I wouldn’t know what to do.
What would you do?
Angelo Coelho
August 13, 2009
The song from that hotel commercial inspired the "what would you do" theme. I suppose I'll make one that has more imagery next time...
Well I suppose you want pics... Later I suppose if you ask for it.
Here's the quick and typical story...
One day during my sophomore year I met this girl in some HTML class for the first time. We sat together. Back then I would never dare make a move on her. She didn't as well. She looked good, very slightly chubby, but body still looks **** good. The face is heaven however. And I guess she has nice hips, legs, and rockets for arms. I was hunting bigger game that year, but never made a move.
Junior year. I was going for bigger game, I actually tried for the first time in life but that was just a learning experience. Talked to that girl once. It seems if I tried things would have started but never felt that way about her to do so.
Senior year. Looking at the girls in my classes. Nothing. Then I see that girl again, and again. Then, as if Cupid shot an arrow at me, I want her. So, going against my nature... I talk to her. Then, yes, I got her number. We tried setting up something but she's always busy. In a few aim convos she trusted me with some of her secrets about her past relationships. I helped out the best I could. It seems all fine until one day, I went to this party... I don't know what but then afterward I tried talking to her, nothing seemed to spark in that convo. Then I just... stopped going for her. It's like I found something about this dating game and I chickened out... So yeah a few months pass, whenever I see her I freak, but every time she would say hey and say a few words. This goes on a few times until I was waiting to get home after graduation rehearsal. That was the last time for that school year. 5 years and didn't capture a single one...
Summer goes by, it was July, I had no one to talk to, so I decide to send her a message. She responds, also wanting to know if we could eat out. We make plans, but things messed it up. We try again, again something came in the way for her. Right now she's on vacation, coming back on Tuesday. I don't know, it seems like she's very interested in me, esp since she asked me to something, again a first. I'm a nice enough guy, but I just need to be comfortable enough to be myself. I think I can do that. I hope I don't screw this up...
Anyways I wrote two poems for her already. They were written pretty quickly, and quite simple for now. I'd like some feedback, and maybe tips on getting her.
Hey Amy
Hey Amy
What do you see
When you look at me?
Is it fear? Is it doubt? Is it lov…
Hey Amy
When I look at you
I see a mystery
That is waiting to be solved
By someone special
Like me?
Hey Amy
Don’t be afraid
Of the road that’s laid
For us to see.
It’s better for us to go together.
I’d rather go away if it ain’t meant to be.
Hey Amy
If I said I love you
What will you do?
Will you leave me, sad
Or will you make me happy.
I’m still afraid of what’s to be when I tell you.
Hey Amy
Did I ever tell you
That you are a shining star when I see you happy
And all my problems seem to fade away when I see you that way.
And when you’re sad, I’ll be sad with you.
I’ll never ignore your thoughts and feelings.
Hey Amy
I want to share everything with you
Food, friends, feelings, fears and far more.
Because I love you
And by just looking at you
I feel complete
And without you
I’m incomplete.
Hey Amy
How about you?
What do you see
When you look at me?
Angelo Coelho
August 13, 2009
Had this idea for a while, with the "Hey Amy" thing.
What Would You Do?
What would you do
If I were hurt?
Would you comfort me? Help me? Save me?
If it were me, I’ll do all I can to heal you.
What would you do?
What would you do
If I were away?
Would you keep me occupied? Would you cry? Would you stay faithful?
If it were me, I would want to talk to you as much as possible.
What would you do?
What would you do
If we weren’t meant to be?
Would you stay with him? Would you stay in the light? Would you remember me?
If it were me, I’ll never forget you, yet move on.
What would you do?
What would you do
If our eyes met?
Would you flirt? Admire them? Make out with me?
If it were me, I’d tell you your eyes are simply beautiful.
What would you do?
What would you do
If I said I love you?
Would you stay with me forever? Would you say the same back to me?
If it were me, I’ll kiss you instantly.
What would you do?
What would you do
If we never met?
Would you still be happy? Would you be sad?
If it were me, I wouldn’t know what to do.
What would you do
If I were gone from you?
Would you cry? Would you fade? Would you die?
If it were me, I wouldn’t know what to do.
What would you do?
Angelo Coelho
August 13, 2009
The song from that hotel commercial inspired the "what would you do" theme. I suppose I'll make one that has more imagery next time...
Well I suppose you want pics... Later I suppose if you ask for it.
