Help My Snake Please!

[Eddy 650]

I took a break for a while and I just started playing again. I know my Snake has a lot of flaws and there is a lot of things that can be improved on. I am looking for some constructive criticism. Be nice to t3h n00b please.

My vids are located at : http://www.youtube.com/user/baySICKbrawl

 

[Black_Heretic]

another Snake from the bay area? awesome

I'll edit with critiques when I'm out of class

 

[8AngeL8]

The opponents you're playing against are playing pretty badly, so it's hard to really give you a good critique. In general, I'm not seeing enough C4 or mines. More grabs, too.

I saw you do the full jab combo a lot, also. Try mixing it up by doing the first hit of the jab and then Ftilting immediately.

 

[bigmac267]

I only watched the first video of you against a Falco. Maybe it's just me, but I prefer to use Mortar Slide a little more often. Like, when you are in the middle of the stage and you knock the opponent off the stage. It gets you closer to the edge and makes a possible threat for your opponent.

 

[Traviz]

i think u should use the full hopped nair a bit more often like when falco tries to phantasm. gets em everytime

 

[Budget Player Cadet_]

Not impressed. You take a lot of damage that could be dodged or countered; I saw one Fsmash in that falco vid in particular that really made me shake my head and sigh... Also, prolly more nades.

 

[magikguy]

He did say his snake had a lot of flaws.

 

[Eddy 650]

yeah i didn't post my snake to impress anyone I posted it cuz i can use a lot of help. ill take all your guys input and try to get more matches up within the next week. thanks for your guys help thus far.