critiques please?

[FB Dj_Iskascribble]

These are some matches me and Fromundaman recorded a few days ago, and I have been rapidly improving in the last few days so I would like to hear what the meta boards have to say about how I play.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I-aBIME3EE8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRgU-nVAot8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QMII76vR__c
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PkXf5xjLTi4 (favorite)

I know I do some stupid things in these particular matches, particularly in the first one. And I also feel I use drill too predictably in my recovery. Id gladly apreciate any other things other people may pick up that I dont see.

 

[FB Dj_Iskascribble]

anything at all?

 

[fromundaman]

*BUMP!*

Nothing at all? Don't be ***** guys, help out the fellow MK, and make fun of the Kirby as he gets his *** *****.

 

[Affinity]

Man, that Kirby needs work...


Not a bad MK, just try working on your grab game and spacing.

Good stuff overall.

 

[FB Dj_Iskascribble]

Yea better spacing is highest on my improvement priority list, and by grab game do you mean more throws, better placed ones or better followups?

 

[Affinity]

Better placed ones and better follow-ups.

 

[UncleSam]

Better placed ones and better follow-ups.

U-throw has many follow-ups

 

[Affinity]

U-throw has many follow-ups

What follow-ups? No reliable follow-ups from U-throw come to mind.

 

[FB Dj_Iskascribble]

they would have to be dependent on di, low percentages it could lead into shuttle loop, but that is situational.

 

[fromundaman]

And I'm pretty sure I'd have to DI into you for that, and I eat to much SL already to try and DI into another one.