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Critique my Fox

Metal Reeper

Smash Champion
Joined
Oct 20, 2006
Messages
2,285
Location
Abington PA
Im not even gonna comment on that first match lol.
I really like your fox, you dashdance when you should and are patient.
@1:38 you shield and Codi is behind you, you should of Shined OoS, but instead you full hop Bar, then Codi Bair's you.

LMAO @ 1:52

You played the Marth MU very well. I would say approach with more shines and laser more. let him come to you. Although that is very hard on YS. Maybe that's why you chose not to.
I guess just notice when to shine OoS more and shinegrab more?
Hope I helped alil bit, someone better should critique though lol.
 

Animal

Smash Lord
Joined
Oct 20, 2009
Messages
1,142
haha thanks, yeah i made some really dumb decisions sometimes during these matches for some reason, probably because they were just friendlies but yeah i do need to shine grab more. thanks for the feed backkkkkk
 

PK Webb

Smash Champion
Joined
Dec 24, 2007
Messages
2,753
Location
the lab
rilly nice 1st match those gimps were on point. umm the first up smash u landed i noticed he didnt tech u cud have upsmashed him again i believe it cud have led to more but u still got the job done. because ived noticed alot of players dont tech the upsmash for sum odd reason and ive found a hi success rated in just upsmashing again now if they do tech next time come in with bair or nair
 

jbsimmons

Smash Rookie
Joined
Feb 2, 2011
Messages
2
You definitely know how to control your space. Looked slow, but it was very effective. Impressed
 

KirbyKaze

Smash Legend
Joined
Nov 18, 2007
Messages
17,679
Location
Spiral Mountain
You have some really bad defensive habits.

And you also have some really bad attacking tendencies.

Might explain more later.
 

Pr0jecT

Smash Ace
Joined
Oct 16, 2006
Messages
509
Location
SWFL/NY
You and Codi are getting a lot better fast.

Less spot dodging. You panic waaaaaaaay too hard under pressure and when you have momentum. Mix it up a little evan.

More empty aerials into grabs (your from NY, master the tomahawk kid) and shinegrabs (I know your grimey enough to abuse the **** out of that)

Ima **** you when I come visit in march
 

Problem2

Smash Champion
Joined
Jun 12, 2006
Messages
2,318
Location
Crowley/Fort Worth, TX
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Problem0
@Codi: Stop trying to punish things with d-smash. Most of the time, Fox was at a high enough percent to die from u-smash

@Animal: I know it is friendlies, but take better care of your health between stocks. Need to work on avoiding damage when your opponent re spawns.
 
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