Critique my Fox!!!

[Havokbringer]

Hey everybody finally got some videos of my fox on youtube , I second fox (my main is marth).Anyways I'm pretty technical but you will see that your self.Hopefully you all enjoy my vids and give me some positive feed back oh and makesure you watch the second one at least because it's great.Thanks Enjoy.

Fox Matches
Match one

Match two

Match three

Match four

Match five

 

[Brookman]

I only watched the first match. I think you're pretty good and should focus on improving your own recovery and teaching your friend how to edge gaurd better.

 

[Havokbringer]

Thank you.Well my recovery didn't need to be to fancy that match but I know what you mean , also my friend is good at edge guarding just...well...it's only the first match but you'll see the rest of the matches his edge guarding is better especially match 4.Thank you for your feedback.:D

 

[Hylian]

I got reminded of my own fox while watching the first match >_>. Pretty good.

 

[Havokbringer]

Thank you very much Hylian.:D

 

[takieddine]

You need to work on eluding your opponent, it seems as if you were hasty, which threw some of your l-cancels/spacing off.

Decent fox though.

 

[j00t]

Eh, the way I see it, you tried too many drillshine combos on Marth. Just one waveshine -> uthrow -> uair should be fine.

 

[Brookman]

I'd really like to see you vs a better opponent.

More up throw up airs, please.

 

[Havokbringer]

Lol.Yea well I know that I can u-throw up-air after drill shine more but these are friendlies so I didnt want to be an ******* but yea I know what you all mean and if I get to use my fox in a tourney match then I will make sure to record it.Thanks for your feedback everybody.:D

 

[Zelda Master]

Awesome! :D

You should make more! I'd definetely love to watch them! =D

 

[Brookman]

up throw back air fast full up tilt will work in place of u airs at lower percents...sort of.

 

[mikeHAZE]

Lol.Yea well I know that I can u-throw up-air after drill shine more but these are friendlies so I didnt want to be an ******* but yea I know what you all mean and if I get to use my fox in a tourney match then I will make sure to record it.Thanks for your feedback everybody.:D

don't be afraid to be a ******* in friendlies. It's good to practice as you actually would in tournament sometimes, just to make sure you know what you're doing.

 

[Brookman]

don't be afraid to be a ******* in friendlies. It's good to practice as you actually would in tournament sometimes, just to make sure you know what you're doing.

I'm solid testament to what happens when you don't play seriously enough in friendly matches.

 

[Havokbringer]

Well thanks everybody for your advice and great feedback on my Fox.Zelda Master I will definetly put more up for you all to watch.As for Brookman and Menacing Mike , your advice will not be wasted thanks.Of course to explain myself about the friendlies we do try the hardest we can and I will make sure when we record again I will show you what my fox can do.Thanks:D

 

[L-10]

awesome foxxxxx
kinda like mine but better spacing.. not to put u down in anyway

 

[Havokbringer]

LOL!No problem man...then again I only second fox O_o*gasp*

 

[Relhots]

The first match was really good. I would use more aerial combos though but thats because my playing style is not like yours. But I loved the first match it was awesome!

 

[GOTM]

i only watched the first match. with that said...

being aggressive is good but remember, sometimes playing campy until you find an opening to be aggressive is key. especially vs. marth. good tech skill though.

 

[Havokbringer]

Thank you very much I will keep that in mind.:D

 

[nashdar13]

I only watched the first match....

At 1:02 of the match you illisuoned with Fox at Marth which is a nono because that was good oppuntunity for Marth to start a decent combo on you. Alot of The times that marth could of started a good combo on you he diidn't because he is a bit novice like at 1:05 of the match. ( basing everything off the first match for this post but will watch others later.)

You got alot of really good wavedashing and shining and mindgames.

For the Marth... start letting you range advantage come in effect and stop letting the Fox get so close and charge you with his B^, when he is charging that is the time for you to start a decent combo. You need to work on cmobo and executing thme to your opponet.

keep practicing guys (^_^)!!!

EDIT:::: I watched a bit of the 4th match and wanted to change that the Marth isn't that novice, just to get that cleared up.

 

[Havokbringer]

Yea lol.It's KingGerudo playing marth but , even if you saw the fourth match his marth just doesn't space properly and his timing is a bit shaky.If you want just watch his Ganondorf , it's much better.

 

[Samus-T]

good fox your friend needs a lil work though...

 

[Havokbringer]

Yup it does.:D

 

[KIngGerudo]

Havokbringer, you forgot to tell them i dont use marth. now i look like someone who doesnt know anything. going on sunday?

EDIT: somehow my internet fuqd this up and made it look like it was only one page so i couldnt see what else you said. im bored and havent smashed in a while so i will have to warm up my cheatin stuff and maybe we can fox ditto and i will falco ditto casey tomorrow.

 

[RaynEX]

Not bad, not bad.

You need to think a bit more though. Nair approaches are nice, but try playing a bit defensively. Also, be careful near the edge, in your first match, there were times at which you randomly ended up offstage and had to illusion back. Against a better edge-guarder, you would've been done.

otherwise, good ish.

 

[Havokbringer]

Lolz.Thanks for the advice(seriously)but these are friendlies so we try not to work too hard at them since we play almost everyday(atleast when college starts back up).Also I just think playing offensivly with fox just works out better , his range sucks (besides his lasor) so it doesnt really work out besides spamming bairs the whole game which is no fun.Thanks for your comments:D.

 

[mikeHAZE]

foxes range doesn't suck lol.

wowwwww.

 

[RaynEX]

You've obviously never seen a really smart fox play. I never said to play ONLY defensively. You need to learn how to priority camp sometimes. To know what move beats out what, and when to use it, is key in Fox play.

Lolz.Thanks for the advice(seriously)but these are friendlies so we try not to work too hard at them since we play almost everyday

Why would you post matches you weren't playing seriously in, then ask for a critique? Don't make friendly johns.

 

[Brookman]

Fox's range is kinda bad...especially compared to marth >____>

It's his speed that really makes up for his lack of range...

 

[hugedogface]

No good, eat a waffle and try again :

 

[RaynEX]

That looks rather tasty.

 

[Havokbringer]

You've obviously never seen a really smart fox play. I never said to play ONLY defensively. You need to learn how to priority camp sometimes. To know what move beats out what, and when to use it, is key in Fox play.



Why would you post matches you weren't playing seriously in, then ask for a critique? Don't make friendly johns.

What the hell??Why are you so mad?I never disregarded your advice because I know what you mean , what I meant was that I prefer to play offensive but doesn't mean I don't know how to play defensive when I need too(I main Marth...enough said).How would you know if I've never seen a smart fox play before?I live in freakin Cali where I can watch Zelgadis,Luninspectre,Tang,Falcomist(when he plays fox),Zodiaklucien,etc. play at biweeklies.

 

[RaynEX]

I wasn't mad...

& the only reason I said you've "obviously never seen a really smart fox play" is because you figured that all offense is best.

I was trying to relay the fact that a mixture of both offense and defense (and no, spamming bairs isn't defense, like you thought it was), is what most Fox players should strive to embody.

So to restate my first few words: I wasn't mad....seriously..lol.

 

[Havokbringer]

Oh ok.At first i was like "What the craap??"but cool as long as your not mad thats good.Like I said before , I get what your saying and of course I know the meaning of a good offense and defense.What I meant was that with Fox it's just too much fun to play offensivly.Well only way I can show you is if I record a match with a much better marth , so thats what i'll do(expect that in the near future).Thank you for you comments.:D

 

[Luigi_Lova62]

Really good. That kinda reminds me of the time when I used those kind of techniques on my friends.

 

[Havokbringer]

Rofls.Thanks for your comments.:D

 

[kobefox2485]

good but you need to switch between offensive style to defensive so you would be less predictable. but seriously i couldnt find almost anything wrong, so work on mindgames. dashdance, shine and use triangle juming

 

[bb.]

Hey Ky!

Nice fox, ive seen it more technical though =P
And you forgot me on the smart fox list of Norcal >=/

=)

 

[Havokbringer]

I believe i said etc.Yea i can be more technical but that will ruin the fun.:D

 

[2-Tone]

your fox is pretty good. Not to repeat what others have said, but yeah, a little work is needed on the defense. Other than that keep doin' your thing.