Critique my Captain Douglas J. Falcon

[Tomacawk]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3bpk5oxhzo
audio is super out of synch
rob and big fans will appreciate my ringtone. The "phone call johns" were about my side B off the map, so yeah it's hella out of sync
and the tag is "M3K" not M2K"

 

[Zone]

You're so greedy, then again you were just ****** the entire match. Hard to critique when your outputting most of the damage.

Should try and post vids of you being destroyed. Makes it easier to critique.

 

[Tomacawk]

You're so greedy, then again you were just ****** the entire match. Hard to critique when your outputting most of the damage.

Should try and post vids of you being destroyed. Makes it easier to critique.

we almost never record and that's the only match I got
Yeah I was getting greedy >.>
And I was told I "lack style," that is, I play too generic and don't really do anything unexpected, and become predictable.
Discuss?

 

[DrewB008]

dont try to do stupid stuff just to create your own style, youll just do things at bad times and get punished. doing unexpected things is not as good as doing good things.

your own style will develop, if youre predictable youll get punished for it and change

 

[ComboTurtle]

tbh i loved all the stupid **** you went for and did, it made me smile and i found your captain to be pretty entertaining and good to watch as well as fast paced and solid

 

[Kiwikomix]

Needs more pawnch

And yes, a vid of you versus someone much better is always preferable.

 

[Ripple]

well, looks like we get to record me ****** you tomacawk.

 

[Tomacawk]

well, looks like we get to record me ****** you tomacawk.

says the roy main that's known as being the worst player in the area
(and can't thunders and therefore is a newb)
thanks for the advice guys