Critique a poor man's Falco (videos)

[Shai Hulud]

Shai Hulud (Falco) vs. NES n00b (CF) - Pokemon Stadium

Shai Hulud (Falco) vs. NES n00b (CF) - Fountain of Dreams

Aside from the obvious (self-destructs, missed ledge techs, etc.), what should I work on? Thanks in advance.

Falco is my 5th or 6th btw so if it looks like I don't know what I'm doing that is probably why.

 

[GamerGuitarist7]

Work on your DI maybe? i know on the first stock of match one, you would have survived the bair with good DI. besides that, excellent lasering (spammmmmmmmm) and good combos. i'm about to watch the other video then i'll edit this post and add.

 

[Miharu]

Learn to combo. For most of the first vid it was just laser laser laser to random aerial, then back to laser spamming again. It's possible to do dair-waveshine combos on CF, so put that to good use.

 

[NES n00b]

Why didn't you show the one vid I won? XD

Also, please keep the comments on just advice (no sarcastic comments >_>, I already know I am not good).

Hope to play your Falco again, Shai. I need to up my tech chase game.