Check my Mario! Updated 12/11

[Dr Peepee]

Alright, I'm not good at videomaking, so hopefully I have the skills to compensate for it. About the vids, they're all against my 11-year-old brother, but I taught him so you can judge us after the vid. More on the way soon (hopefully).
Ok, more here. See if this helps any.


Dr Peepee(Mario) vs Twitch(Fox) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pAn-pibFEo
Dr Peepee(Mario) vs Twitch(Fox) 2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZUSdnYHfVE
Dr Peepee(Mario) vs Twitch(Marth) 1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0P2NEZvYiIw
Dr Peepee(Mario) vs Twitch(Marth) 2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP3jQMWUG8Q


Alright, new matches up after we went to a tourney. Take a look:

Dr Peepee vs Twitch(Fox) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OaIryJ_SWbk
Dr Peepee vs Twitch(Fox) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4_94DV7imI
Dr Peepee vs Twitch(Doc) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndbAR4nlq6Y
Dr Peepee vs Twitch(Doc) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qP_jn2Q2tbY
Dr Peepee vs Twitch(Luigi) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wC5dsJKW5AQ
Dr Peepee vs Twitch(Sheik) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fZnr3-M7HNg
The sound and motion quality still sucks really bad, but if you can get past that, then try to enjoy and critique/comment.


New Matches with actual quality!
Dr Peepee(Mario) vs BEHR(Ganon) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xAGBtoKbva0
Dr Peepee(Mario) vs Vilt(Samus) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnUdZYkTllU
Dr Peepee(Mario) vs Vilt(YL) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MH0lGAMcFJ4

Doubles!!
Dr Peepee(Mario)+BEHR(Ganon) vs Twitch+Vilt(Sheik) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7TkILw4eOUk
Dr Peepee(Mario)+Twitch(Sheik) vs BEHR(Ganon)+Vilt(Fox) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YwQKRGF7uKU
Dr Peepee(Mario)+Vilt(Luigi) vs BEHR(Ganon)+Twitch(Fox) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wOi5z8WyRrM

 

[G-Rabbit]

Good skillz.

 

[Dr Peepee]

Thanks, and again I should start havin some more soon, I guess you can critique and rate also. Anything to help me improve my skills!

 

[Tha_Shogun_12]

Nice combos.

 

[Smash brother 93]

very good skillz

 

[Dr Peepee]

Preciate it, guys. My other matches I didn't do so well on, so it will be easier to see my mistakes then. For now, just offer any suggestions you have on anything, I'm all ears.

 

[Tha_Shogun_12]

Well it's almost hard to comment on videos u just own the opponent on. You read him pretty well so there's not too much to say. I few attacks missed but I don't think u could critique it. Give me one of the vids to didn't do so well on and I could critique.

 

[A2ZOMG]

You did really, really, well anticipating his moves and applying mindgames + comboing. Both of you were pretty good, but the one I feel needs critique is your brother, who needs to use more Blasters and Upsmash at bare minimum. =P

 

[Dr Peepee]

Ok yeah, I'll put up some new vids ASAP, and I have no idea bout how long that will be mostly cuz I have little time but I will certainly try. I'm considerin puttin my bro on the Fox forum to get him some help. He has other characters, so it won't always be Mario vs Fox. I'm doin my best!

 

[Super Mari0]

Your mario is kind of awkward =/ im not sure if you got good mindgames... i really can only say keep up the nice work and for tipps...

Your mario is well...really FAST!!! its like...wow i...i dont know what to say its not a really GOOD mario its just that you play pretty awkward somehow i dunno

its an interesting type of fighting! ...really ... i actually like it


Overall its good stuff man, I just cant really give you lots of tips maybe try to co-operate with WD more and try spacing a little more often...

You do lots of Nairs, thats good but try to reduce it by using SHABAWD k?

And since you like Dash Dancing try WDashDancing ^.^

When i say awkward i mean a strange way of play i have never really seen often ...but good...good stuff xD
I like it though, good stuff i enjoy watching your mario play...its...its a liiiittle bit awkward though..

 

[Dr Peepee]

Yeah, I kinda invented my own way of doin things, and I hope it turned out pretty well...Yeah, the SHABAWD needs to be used more that would help me alot. I know it's odd, but it got me pretty far in the tourney here, not to say it's perfect, but I guess the strange movements threw the opponents off or somethin...I'll have more matches where I don't play so hot later, depends on something that happens today, I will try to put more matches with my bro up. Thanks for commenting!

 

[Coin Chaser]

i think the reason everyone is saying ur awkward is bc of the opponent ur fighting

no offence but ur brother isnt a very good fox....or isnt playing smart against mario and all ur doing is waiting for him to come at u and u f-smash him

which is exactly what u should do against an agressive fox....just smarter foxes wont charge out at u and will try and fake u out more, or will come from a vertical approach......

can u put up matches against someone else?

 

[Dr Peepee]

Coin, i'm really, really sorry but no one lives close to me otherwise I definately would. I will, however, put up some matches of him playin someone else, maybe that will help a little? If I can, I'll try to get a match recorded when i go somewhere the weekened of the 16th. I really need the help and I'm sorry this isn't the best thing to work with.

 

[Coin Chaser]

Coin, i'm really, really sorry but no one lives close to me otherwise I definately would. I will, however, put up some matches of him playin someone else, maybe that will help a little? If I can, I'll try to get a match recorded when i go somewhere the weekened of the 16th. I really need the help and I'm sorry this isn't the best thing to work with.

HAHA its ok dude, u dont have to apologize......its just very hard to tell u how to make ur mario better like u helped me in my thread when u **** them in less than 2 minutes.....im not sure if teaching ur brother not to b so agressive.....or him picking another character thats hes more comfortable with.......u dont have to apologize i like watchig mario completely pwn fox

 

[Dr Peepee]

It is pretty fun whuppin a Fox, only lame thing is when he gets those shine spikes(his only kill method and he's actually decent at it) that he fortunately didn't pull off. I'll try to put a vid up where he just ***** my recovery, shouldn't be too hard to find. Right now, I just wanna let everyone know bout my skillz then I'll post more, video maker permitting.

 

[Dr Peepee]

Sorry for the double post, but I really want you guys to see these matches.

 

[stingers]

Peepee is too good ;_;

 

[Dr Peepee]

Preciate the quick response dude. Looks like I'll do pretty well against ya huh?

 

[stingers]

****, you'll be kicking my *** all around the place <_<

I'm gonna like the practice though :D

 

[Dr Peepee]

Oh yeah, gonna be tight. I don't have much competitive Peach experience though (only played a good Peach like 10 times). We'll see how it goes. Oh yeah, any criticism?

 

[stingers]

Your opponent isn't good enough :/

 

[Dr Peepee]

Lol, he's really not that bad. I just don't give him a chance to do a whole lot is all. We'll see if your opinion changes when you play him(course he probly sucks against Peach cuz he CCs like crazy). Anyone, or Stingers, have anythin else to comment/critique on?

 

[UltiMario]

Congratz
Your one of the 4 people in on the planet that I know aare better than me as Mario.
Mad Skittlz, try Challenging Eggz next

 

[Dr Peepee]

Sweet. Responses don't get much better than that. Maybe I'll get an encouaging post from the Big Man himself. Until then, anyone have anything to add?

 

[WFL]

Congratz
Your one of the 4 people in on the planet that I know aare better than me as Mario.
Mad Skittlz, try Challenging Eggz next

You must live on a very small planet then. There are a lot of good Marios out there and his was decent.

The one thing I noticed that made all of these matches easier for you was that your brother didn't seem like he went for combos like a fox should. He went for all of the generic combos or just to get 1 or 2 hits in. You have a pretty decent Mario, the only thing that's holding you back is your lack of applying wavelands which help out a lot when playing Mario, also try and find someone better because once you start playing better people you'll start to learn how to avoid being combo'd, getting back onto the stage against edge-guarding (it seemed like you know this though), and learn how to follow di which makes comboing easier.

 

[Pine]

i just watched that first match....and by COMPARISON it looked good....but that fox made my inner fox weep

 

[Dr Peepee]

WFL, I realize my bro isn't the greatest or anythin, but he is good practice for combos and stuff, and yeah, I could've followed DI better and I do need to waveland more. Other than that though, wouldn't you say my Mario is actually pretty good? Pine, well thanks man, I'm glad that my hard work is paying off.

 

[W.Jr]

good stuff

 

[UltiMario]

You must live on a very small planet then. There are a lot of good Marios out there and his was decent.

I am a decent Mario, I just can never tell from being in the exact middle of the 'No SSBM Tourney' Zone of my State. There HAVE been like 1 Marzillion SSBM Tourneys around My area, but I learned about them and believe they have stopped already. I wish I could actually fight Eggz and see how good I am at Mario, too bad we live on the opposite sides of the freaking Continent >.>

Dr. PeePee, you are one of the Better Marios I have seen, but..... You might take down 2 Stocks (Max) against Eggz, unless he SDs XD.

 

[Dr Peepee]

Well, thanks (I think). I'm still practicing and learning with Mario, and I think I'm only gonna get better from here on in. Playing Eggz would be sweet, but, seeing as I have limited ditto experience, I'm not entirely sure how I would do. It would still be cool if Eggz would somehow tell me his thoughts about it though...

 

[UltiMario]

Look, you should be HONORED if you can take down at least two stocks of Eggz with your Mario, so go for it bud =)
And Yes, whats a Mario video thread without a post from Eggz?

 

[Dr Peepee]

Ahhhhh, I guess you're right, my bad. Still waitin for it...

 

[Dr Peepee]

Updated with new singles and doubles ideas. Plz tell me what ya think.

 

[stingers]

bump. peepee needs critique

 

[Dr Peepee]

Lol .

Sorry Dogy.

 

[stingers]

what a silly post.

 

[Dogysamich]

I mean, on a normal day I'd probably just close it and say what the **** are you necro bumping for, but it's not like anything really happens in the forums to warrant it atm. XD

You could atleast not make spam posts.