Ganon first, cuz I guess he's important.
I'm doing this match:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbKN9FyUVUk&feature=channel_page
0:16- I know you wanna space him, but if he's running away at the beginning of the match, then just close the distance. Do one Fair like that, and if he's not approaching, go for a Fair right into a place where he has to make a clutch decision. Pressure him. You're f*ckin Ganon!
0:22- WL'ing isn't always the best idea. WL away if anything.
0:25- I dunno, it might be best to roll there or WD backward or something. Sheik's moves are so dumb.
0:31- Why up-B so early?
loool stop up-B'ing so early!
0:38- Uair or something. You know he's gonna try to hit you since he's been kinda aggro so far.
0:48- Bair was kind of a bad idea imo. WD forward and Bair wall or Ftilt or not jump in front of Sheik. Nice tech though.
0:57- wtfux with down-B? He wasn't trying to approach at ALL with those moves you're throwing out. Ganon controls the stage so well, don't ruin it by charging at him like that. At least get in closer if you're going to forward B lol. Maybe you could dash around a little then forward B to make him think it's safe.
1:13- He's not gonna run at you, why would you Fair? Dash a little more first, then Fair if you want to that badly. You shouldn't have Usmashed right before then, but just know you could try to see what he does as you run at him. If he comes at you, then Fair is good. If he runs away, then you chase for longer, THEN Fair. If he shields, maybe grab, or do some...Ganon tricks. I dunno. Bair wall or DD to down-B or run up and retreating Fair. Heck if I know.
1:16- Why no Bair? Might not have mattered, but still.
1:18- no edge grab?
1:20- wtf Bair? Wtf jab??? Fair him or Uair him you aren't ready. If you land and he's there GRAB HIM! Dthrow to Bair or whatever.
1:24- don't get directly over Sheik. Bad bad bad. Retreating Fair yay.
You killed him, then you just let him run around as you Fair'd. Wut. Actually, if the second Fair doesn't connect, then that should let you know that you might be gaining stage control, so advance on him some. I dunno what to think about that WL Uair, but it seems smarter to me to follow up with Ftilt since they'll probably see that coming and run away or shield to WD backward.
Then you did **** Ganon stuff. YAY.
2:01- Why did you run away lol. Retreating Bair, shield, WD back, jab, grab, something other than letting Sheik, the most agile character, chase you lol.
2:06- try to angle your up-B so that you barely land on the stage to at least make things harder for him. Chances are you can make it back more against non-Sheik characters much better though.
Beginning of third stock: L2l-cancel, those DJs weren't retreating, the Fairs weren't spaced, and it wasn't mixed up (timing or technique) at all. That's very wrong. You've seen the vids, do a SH Bair to falling Bair or Fair or whatever. Varieties of that stuff. Do it.
2:28- why Fair there lol. Uair if anything. Roll would be good.
2:36- just WD back to the edge loooool. Flashy doofus.
2:45- you had SO much pressure on him, and you go blow it by running away and Bair'ing? No one in the history of smash would've followed you there lol. Keep pressuring him in that tiny spot you caught him in PLEASE.
3:04- he's attacking, so either Uair him to make him stay still or shield or angle Ftilt. Geez.
Fox
this match:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zU8N932ILjA&feature=channel_page
0:14- wtf is with those jumps? Laser or go get him lol.
0:36- why is there no Usmash or Nair or even laser follow up?
There's a long period of time with you standing around and attacking without momentum after this. Keep moving. Make use of platforms. LASER. Plz DD moar.
1:02- Usmash.
1:13- Dair? No. Jump or WD OOS plz. It would've worked if Peach was pressuring you hard, but that wasn't the case.
Too much Dair OOS!
Too much attempt at shine across the stage! Shine to Uthrow to Uair to Uair to lasers to shield pressure is so much better.
1:52- It wasn't a bad try really, but just kinda regrab a few times to see where he's gonna go. Maybe Dair woulda worked, or you could always just jump on and do, get this, NOTHING until you land. Brilliance.
1:56- doh.
2:01- you're not fluid. You just sit there and "whee Uair." DD so he doesn't know, so you can get momentum, and so you don't miss embarrassingly like that.
2:04- Where are you going???? Pressure! You have a bad habit about forcing people off of the stage. Make them feel trapped there. By moving away you let them feel safe. You wanna gimp, remember?
2:09- Orly? Don't do that....
2:47- Don't run away! After all of that work getting him to roll, you should chase instead of run away. Gah. Uthrow or Usmash if you get there fast enough.
2:56- Wait. If you'd DD more and guess less and read more, then you would be 3 stocking his Peach right now.
3:18- You usually wanna go past your opponent with a Nair because they're expecting that. Stingers has played defensively the whole match, he's not suddenly gonna approach you. It's also ok to run up and grab.
Overall for Fox: needs more DD and reading and practice overall. Very little chains. Too much focus on shining across the stage, and edgeguarding and recovery from the edge could stand to see improvement also.