Wanting to delete, but don't know how.

[Yoshi]

Please ignore this post, as I'm trying to figure out how to delete former threads I've created.

 

[Glöwworm]

Is this about Mario using you to reach high platforms? Haha.

Kidding aside, this is pretty good.

 

[darkgirku]

@OP:
I liked it
Concise and well flowing sequence

acceptance then realization. kinda backwards. made me think for a bit lol.

 

[DerpDaBerp]

It rhymes

I'll be honest, between being so succinct, brief and without real syllabic consistency, it feels like just a bunch of words.

But those may be what's coming off to me as indicative of irl context. So I did feel a story here, I just think there should be more... color. and maybe a more complex structure

 

[Evil Eye]

Unrelated to your poem, but holy **** it's Yoshi.

I remember this guy.

(also I think I agree with Derp)

 

[Yoshi]

Hahaha thanks for the feedback, I wrote it on a whim to see if I can still write a somewhat meaningful poem. But what you both said makes perfect sense.
The idea is in reverse I know, but that is from personal experience. My own mentality; I always accept whatever has happened, then realize after what happens next.
Thanks Evil Eye, I didn't know I'd be remembered. Glad to know I left an impact and am now happily active again. Took some time off, but I'm back.

 

[darkgirku]

yeah I figured you knew about the reverse thing. but lol, i rather liked that aspect of it