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Video Critique Thread

Corigames

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Hello, and welcome to the Dedicated Samus Review Thread, which will be refered to from here on out as DSRT (said like Desert, :p).

How does it work? Simply say hello, introduce yourself if you're new and post your video link. If you have any notes like, "I've noticed I Dash Attack a lot," or, "I am a n00b," you can throw that in if you want. All the info we can get, the better. No Johns!

Here is an example:

Hi, I'm COREYgames. I have been coming to smashboards for a little over a year now. here is my video:
http://www.gametrailers.com/player/usermovies/139934.html

I think that I do ok, but my friend, who I am playing in that video, knows all my mind games. Can you help me?
/example

It's as simple as that. Don't be discouraged to put in your 2 cents! I trust that they will above average reviews, and people should trust them.

If you disagree with what one of your critics says, there is no need to argue. Just say thank you. It's just advice, you don't have to take it. Also, if one of the critics says "You suck," or, "You are a n00b," a) you probably are b) we are helping change that. If you feel offended, just send me or them a PM. There's no need to make a big scene because your feelings were hurt, but it also isn't right for anyone here to feel superior to anyone else. We are all in this together.

If you have any suggestions or comments, feel free to send me a PM.
With that, I give you DSRT!!!!!!!!

Videos Linked to their creator in order of appearance (except me):

Coreygames:
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=6241152&postcount=350
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13712009&postcount=1199

Jettythat Samus
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3579870&postcount=10
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3584718&postcount=32

Oskurito
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3588404&postcount=34

Death
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3629105&postcount=52
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3639842&postcount=68
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3646201&postcount=74
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3647914&postcount=75

Phanna
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3631047&postcount=58
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3731692&postcount=120

UltimateLink
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3631594&postcount=60

ihavespaceballs
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3636322&postcount=66
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3987496&postcount=147

Lanowen
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3642459&postcount=72

Tha_Shogun_12
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3680435&postcount=91

Sl1th
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3671522&postcount=85

Hylian
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3694590&postcount=99
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3699369&postcount=106

Eternal Samus
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3695355&postcount=100

[TLT]BloodFalcon
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3713253&postcount=113

Aftermath
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3728026&postcount=117
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3773983&postcount=138

Jasona
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3730674&postcount=119

Thepurplecobra
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3747332&postcount=132

S.R. XXVII
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3798715&postcount=143

PikachuSSBM
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=3987124&postcount=145

Spigel
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=4063436&postcount=149

Yoshi Fan
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=4607987&postcount=154

$hyne
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=4724840&postcount=158

AIDS
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=4752516&postcount=165
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5163299&postcount=174
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5606648&postcount=200
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10775232&postcount=765

Dot Eater
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=4852333&postcount=166

Grunt
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5543533&postcount=191

-Philip Coast Philip-
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5729883&postcount=206
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5801994&postcount=221
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13669111&postcount=1173

Alukard
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5746218&postcount=209

Tyser
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5952799&postcount=225
http://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=tyser+samus&search_sort=video_date_uploaded

'Fro
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5965616&postcount=227

majoras.
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5975996&postcount=228

Farguade
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=5996299&postcount=234

Wombo Combo
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=6064503&postcount=298

Fed
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=6079268&postcount=312

The Prime
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11724969&postcount=916
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13697129&postcount=1197

ZDuck
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10827418&postcount=790
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10804163&postcount=782
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11052259&postcount=824
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11284812&postcount=866
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11486490&postcount=899
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11637061&postcount=909
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11765371&postcount=924
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12214185&postcount=986
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12352716&postcount=990
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12756956&postcount=1039
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13193286&postcount=1083
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13450580&postcount=1114
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13606564&postcount=1133

MonkUnit
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12587765&postcount=1020
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13570536&postcount=1121

Abcool
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10810652&postcount=786
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10901494&postcount=803
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11251216&postcount=859
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11802496&postcount=937
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11928333&postcount=963
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12504414&postcount=1006
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13230684&postcount=1084

Pluplue
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13103362&postcount=1080
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13236205&postcount=1086
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13236227&postcount=1087

silentSWAG
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13372902&postcount=1110

L7Junkie
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13242004&postcount=1093

Banyah87
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12843746&postcount=1066

Blaze3927
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12893990&postcount=1069

Rat
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10930644&postcount=822
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11769286&postcount=929
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12917449&postcount=1075

Fauster Fayk
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12917449&postcount=1075

Vadgama
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12612741&postcount=1023
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12640858&postcount=1031

Orn
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11813101&postcount=949
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12122142&postcount=965
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12404060&postcount=993
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12614456&postcount=1026

Pi
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10184411&postcount=697
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10853401&postcount=797
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11091028&postcount=839
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11085992&postcount=834
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12521645&postcount=1007

Thimo
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12544145&postcount=1010

AshuRawRun
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12492151&postcount=1000
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=12492427&postcount=1002

DeVoe
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11897594&postcount=954

DarrellD
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10911133&postcount=806
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11545187&postcount=903

Andymosity
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11724486&postcount=915

00000001
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11397185&postcount=885
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11397418&postcount=887

Omniscius
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11432166&postcount=893

Violence
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11289215&postcount=871

Geist
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10505744&postcount=743
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11282361&postcount=864

AntoPark
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10342907&postcount=727
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10349977&postcount=730
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=11075955&postcount=830

AshPikachu17
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10807899&postcount=784

Duals
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10839940&postcount=791

Edgeluca
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10389495&postcount=739
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10763554&postcount=757

DOTA_owns_all
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10733730&postcount=748

LOLI!
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10241798&postcount=721

Amanze
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=10229578&postcount=717

Terranoia
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=9947135&postcount=680

-taco
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=9986175&postcount=687

TheLifeRuiner
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=9814423&postcount=669

ResTy
http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=9599548&postcount=606

Talvi
www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=9658040&postcount=610
 

Hylian

Not even death can save you from me
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Post away :).
 

Saymus

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Ohh, whoops!!!

Here you go:
You need to be more aggressive, you're making much of a presence in the match. It's almost like you're not even playing, and your opponent is just spamming the air and managing to hit you every once and awhile.

Ok this thread is getting spammed now...

/not helping
 

Mars-

Smash Champion
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Messages
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Chicago area
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VJkIdHeuQk

Please critique this video for me. I need more experts' opinions. I think one of my problems is that I use smash attacks too much. Thanks in advance.
Crouch cancel forward airs, just try it, it will teach them a lesson. Also I noticed sometimes both of you jumped, sex kick right away, you should hit him first.

I didn't see enough forward smashes, although your spacing was way off so that is probably why. Just a little fact, samus's forward smash>marths in range.

Try using forward tilts more, they eat up marths, and since marth imo has an advantage, you need every cheap tactic back.

In general all tilts work, I have been using downtilt a lot more like wes told me to, and it works really well for starting up combos.

Your combo game itself was pretty good, you seemed to know how to do this well.

Bombs, while yes, they can catch your opponent off guard, you just used it so much it was more of a hazard to you, and then when they did hit, you didn't do anything afterwords. Try bombing, then sit on your shield, when he slashes drop your shield and forward or downsmash him.

Edgeguarding is tough, you seemed to have the general idea, however when they are up high jump out and sex kick them, it works really well.

Grapple wise, I didn't see enough. Not saying spam grapples, but it is useful for combos. Crashman pointed out a short but effective combo downthrow to dash attack.

Most of this stuff I have mentioned is pretty basic, you might not be able to do it at first, not because it is hard to do, just because you don't have the right mindset.
 

Mars-

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I beleive it is hitbox wise though, so like marth leans forward, then you can outspace him.
 

Samus Syndrome

Smash Apprentice
Joined
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Messages
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Northern California
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VJkIdHeuQk

Please critique this video for me. I need more experts' opinions. I think one of my problems is that I use smash attacks too much. Thanks in advance.
It's almost never a good idea to fire missiles while you are standing, too much lag. And when recovering it's usually better to save your second jump for when you are closer to the edge so you can double jump-fair them.

Usually you do not want to play that close to a Marth because of his(?) grab but you seem to know how to play this particular Marth so I guess it was okay.

Very nice use of tilts too.
 

E P I C

Smash Journeyman
Joined
Dec 26, 2007
Messages
411
Location
Smashville
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VJkIdHeuQk

Please critique this video for me. I need more experts' opinions. I think one of my problems is that I use smash attacks too much. Thanks in advance.

Dont use dash attack when they are on the ground. That is just what I go by because they can easily shield grab you and that attack is predictable. Instead, jabs and Ftilts (this is what I do, but just do anything other than dash move and you're good).
Wavedash out of Shield helps alot against Marth. When he hits your shield with an Ftilt or an Fsmash it gives you an opening to Smash his as.s right back.
Work on your edgeguarding. When they are real close to the battlefield, dont shoot missles. Instead, get ready to either edgehog or Utilt his as.s.
DO NOT try to challenge a Marth when he's on the ground and you're above him. You will lose every single time. Marth's Uair and Utilt WILL hit you. When you're above, just try to get an edge or the ground, then proceed.
Use Samus' grab. Its good.
Charge up your Charged Blast more. You only did once I think. Do this after every kill.
You're purty decent though, keep Smashin mang. I hope I helped a little bit.
 

Corigames

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Same for a falco doing lazors, but we all know what happens if they don't SHFF lazor. Punishment. That's why you usually MC and not stand missile.
 

E P I C

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Standing still missles < MC missles .. that's just how it is ..
*waits for people to come over for criteeking*
 

Mars-

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Same for a falco doing lazors, but we all know what happens if they don't SHFF lazor. Punishment. That's why you usually MC and not stand missile.
Missiles and lasers are 2 different things with 2 different purpuses. Lets see you KO somebody with a laser.
 

Corigames

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Forward is funny in person.

And I don't see why MC is any different than Lazor Canceling. The reason for both of them is so that you can immediately do an attack after wards. Granted, the lazors are for approaching while missiles are usually for pressure, but the use of canceling them is exactly the same. It doesn't leave you open for attack.

Let's see you KO someone using only standing missiles.
 

E P I C

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Forward is funny in person.

And I don't see why MC is any different than Lazor Canceling. The reason for both of them is so that you can immediately do an attack after wards. Granted, the lazors are for approaching while missiles are usually for pressure, but the use of canceling them is exactly the same. It doesn't leave you open for attack.

Let's see you KO someone using only standing missiles.
I believe we have a winner!
 

Mars-

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Forward is funny in person.

And I don't see why MC is any different than Lazor Canceling. The reason for both of them is so that you can immediately do an attack after wards. Granted, the lazors are for approaching while missiles are usually for pressure, but the use of canceling them is exactly the same. It doesn't leave you open for attack.

Let's see you KO someone using only standing missiles.
The difference is we aren't talking about which one can be followed up with another attack, we are talking about which can be fired faster. Shooting missiles rapidly while standing still is a much better option when your camping somebody then missile canceling. Although you won't be able to follow up as quickly, you shouldn't be shooting missiles point blank, so it shouldn't matter that much.

If you are vs me in a samus ditto spamming your *** off with all your fancy platform canceling, I'm just going to stand still spamming missiles, there is no point in me doing otherwise, and doing otherwise puts me in risk for getting hit by your missiles.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gotOcc6eYcI

You can watch the whole match, I do a lot of standing still missiles, but look at 4:08, perfect example of where standing missiles are better then missile canceling.
 

Samus Syndrome

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Now if we look at what I originally said.........


It's almost never a good idea to fire missiles while you are standing, too much lag.

Mars-"we aren't talking about which one can be followed up with another attack, we are talking about which can be fired faster". I said it, not you-thats not what I meant. Sorry if it wasn't clear what I was talking about.

Thanks guys for backing me up.

Now lets stop this meaningless argument about when to MC and when not to.
 

Mars-

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Okay, so basicly, your saying that it is right to be shooting missiles point blank? Because that is the only reason it would matter so much that you should be canceling it. Unless of course you are simply spamming missiles. Which on FD, having no platforms, standing still missiles are much more efficient then short hopping every single time you want to missile.

I don't know if you took me wrong or something, but I was pointing out some stupid *** point you made about missile canceling. Maybe you should look at it more logicly next time and think, what were his options in that match, not what is the best option he has on whatever stage I feel like pretending he is on.
 

E P I C

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People, do realize this is a criteeking thread, not an arguing why you should MC instead of Standing still missles thread. Go make that thread actually.
 

Corigames

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If you are vs me in a samus ditto spamming your *** off with all your fancy platform canceling, I'm just going to stand still spamming missiles, there is no point in me doing otherwise, and doing otherwise puts me in risk for getting hit by your missiles.
Let me end this by saying that were the case, then I could end that little fight by firing one homing missile from the platform, causing you to have to do something else. I'm not challenging your intellect, I'm not saying you are absolutely wrong, but I am saying that it is USUALLY better to MC because it doesn't leave you open. No big deal, stop making it one.

Now, what's this about videos and critiques? Oh... :laugh:

Uh............ needs more f tilts *runs away*
 

AIDS

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lol i think when you swore marth went super sayin and his power level went OVER 9000!!!!!, so yeah, same as above lol + friendly game play is better! lawl
 

Saymus

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The PWN
I watched that video against Falcon.
Nova definitely knows what to do against Falcon, that's for sure.

The only thing I can suggest is slowing down, let the Falcon take the more 'aggressive' side, and practice some defense. Might make the match a little boring, but it'd be good practice maybe.
 

E P I C

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Ok, plz rate my friend's samus. Here are a couple of his vids:

Pwnage

Comeback
Only things Nova needs to work on is not spending his DJ when he is missling, he does it every so often. That Ganon should have won but he got dayum unlucky and that Ganon was pretty good also, I liked him. Nova is also very aggressive. Its not necessarily a bad thing since he's pretty good at keeping pressure, but if he fights someone one with better priority and who uses a better character, such as, Marth, Spacies, Sheik and Falcon, he wont win with such an aggressive style. I aint a fan of the aggressiveness, but it's interesting seeing it. Overall, he's a dam.n good Samus.
 

E P I C

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Im pretty sure you can UpB Falcon and not get punished too badly or not at all. I see HugS do it against Falcons once in a while, so it must be pretty good. The only character who I think it shouldnt be used against is probably Ganondorf. He seriously does not move and you get punished afterwards.
 
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