TC Crew Vids - critique please

[KrazyKnux]

Here our some TC crew vids from earlier this month. We've gotten slightly better, but this is a pretty good representation of our skill level. Anyway, we're trying to improve more so please critique us. Thanks.

KrazyKnux (Fox) vs. J122 (Marth) R1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=onjHnl_8FAE
Dreamland

KrazyKnux (Sheik) vs. J122 (Marth) R2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=igHSQsEFl7s
Dreamland

KrazyKnux (Fox) vs. J122 (Samus) R3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sZ_DJLTdKQs
Dreamland

Byped (Marth) vs. J122 (Samus)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7QKVgv9S4w
Fountain of Dreams

Byped (Marth) vs. Andy (Fox)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0QdNNdUWnAw
Final Destination

YimmyZ (Peach) vs. J122 (Marth)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0-U5a2xrlEE
Dreamland

KrazyKnux (Fox) vs. YimmyZ (Peach)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWy4OAxZJvE
Battlefield

I'll add a couple more vids soon (KrazyKnux vs. J122, Byped vs. KrazyKnux, and maybe some others, i dunno)

 

[PichuFTW]

You guys didn't look too bad on an overall scale. There's always the obvious tune-ups of predicting what your opponent will do, and keeping your character moving quickly and fluently with good tech skill. One thing that bugged me a bit was that J122's Marth used fsmash way too much for damage accumulating purposes. Also in the first match, you (fox) had the match come to a complete stop, and on three or four separate occassions, you rolled right into the fsmash after taking a second to think about where to go. However the quick little combo gimp you pulled to take away his second stock quickly was pretty nice.
The Marth could use a lot more movement, and more FFing. Marth is capable of being much faster than what i was seeing.

Not too bad though.

 

[balladechina212]

Note to those viewing the videos:

In the 5th vid, "Andy (Fox)" is not in our crew. He is a pro from St. Louis.

By the way, I'm J122, I've gotten a little quicker since those vids but I still need to work on some stuff.

 

[Keitaro]

Note to those viewing the videos:

In the 5th vid, "Andy (Fox)" is not in our crew. He is a pro from St. Louis.

By the way, I'm J122, I've gotten a little quicker since those vids but I still need to work on some stuff.

You had some great skill with your Marth but you definitely do need to have more movement/mindgames. Some more wavedashing and dancing I'd suggest. I'd check out a Taj Marth video like the link I just gave. He's one of my favorite Marth's one it comes to mindgames.