Star Wolf Squadron Manual-Wolfplay Basics Video

[Biggie Smalls]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=CkOfPnA-R00

The official Star Wolf Squadron manual on basic Wolf play. I will be making an advanced techniques video soon. Any constructive critiscism would be nice, or comments.

 

[MarthMX]

i was expecting combos

 

[pockyD]

i want my 5 mins back

 

[Biggie Smalls]

It's called a basics video for a reason, *******.

MarthMX, yeah, I'm sorry about that but I'll put some more in the advanced techniques video which I might release if this one gets sorta popular for beginners who just bought brawl.

 

[chaos_Leader]

Firstly, the video was informative, it did its job

Secondly, It can do its job better, here's my recommendations:

-Cut the minute-long intro, the viewers came to see a Wolf instructional video, not a minute of SSE clips.
-when you mention using the reflector as a defensive technique, you show no demonstration video demonstrating that a successful reflector can be followed-up by any number of other moves.
-Your target audience is new players who know very little, and you go straight into scarring and DAC with no mention of how useful RAR is for Wolf. It would also be helpful to show some examples of viable attack strings/combos that Wolf players can pick up and practice right away.

Its a good start, it just needs to be filled out and polished.

 

[Psychoace]

It's called a basics video for a reason, *******.

MarthMX, yeah, I'm sorry about that but I'll put some more in the advanced techniques video which I might release if this one gets sorta popular for beginners who just bought brawl.

Then why isn't is in the general video section?

 

[Mr.Trite]

Garbaj lawl.

Dumbest intro ever. It isn't even an intro.

 

[Mokbi7]

Ha i liked it but what styll gets me is the scarring
when i try doing it all i do is the legde illiousion

 

[Inuashakent]

Useless firstminute

 

[Biggie Smalls]

Useless firstminute

Try talking about something relevant to the thread.

Garbaj lawl.

Dumbest intro ever. It isn't even an intro.

This thread isn't about my introduction, *******.

Then why isn't is in the general video section?

Combo videos are ery similar to instructional videos, plus honestly, who goes there?

Firstly, the video was informative, it did its job

Secondly, It can do its job better, here's my recommendations:

-Cut the minute-long intro, the viewers came to see a Wolf instructional video, not a minute of SSE clips.
-when you mention using the reflector as a defensive technique, you show no demonstration video demonstrating that a successful reflector can be followed-up by any number of other moves.
-Your target audience is new players who know very little, and you go straight into scarring and DAC with no mention of how useful RAR is for Wolf. It would also be helpful to show some examples of viable attack strings/combos that Wolf players can pick up and practice right away.

Its a good start, it just needs to be filled out and polished.

Now this is the criticism I need. I plan to ask someone to make me an introduction, that will be around 15 seconds.

Well, I think I did in the clip with 48% on me while beating the other guy to like 100% Down B is very combo-able with down smash and side smash, at low percents even with U smash.

Scarring is a simple technique, I thought so anyways. DAC is a bit harder, but it's worth it because it's one of the few good DACs. RAR shall be mentioned in the advanced techniques video. I should work on putting up more combos in the next video like you said.

 

[Osi]

Intro was a bit much.... didn't have too much on the basics of actually chaining moves. The scarring part is useful. A small section on performing multiple hits would have been nice.

I think the video could use a bit more work.

 

[Biggie Smalls]

Intro was a bit much.... didn't have too much on the basics of actually chaining moves. The scarring part is useful. A small section on performing multiple hits would have been nice.

I think the video could use a bit more work.

Yeah I thought so too, so I'm making an advanced techniques sequel with combos, more types or scaarring.. etc.