Okay, so I said I'd do these rewrites, soooo.... On to it.
ChaldeaDex Entry:
Servant #167
Kiara Sessyoin
Class: Alter Ego
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 166cm/53kg?
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Modern Era, Japan
Debut: Fate/EXTRA CCC
Likes: Humans, sweet rice balls coated with sweet red beans, nursery tales
Dislikes: Pessimistic, foul-mouthed and narrow-minded sorts, men whose every action is thorny, prickly, and truculent
Line: “Alter Ego, Kiara Sessyoin. I have come to answer the voices calling for salvation. But...hehe... I wonder about the sort of person who would summon a woman like me. I am the Devilish Bodhisattva who savors all living creatures, sentient or not. You have no choice now but to stay with me until the very end.”
Comment: "Pardon my excessive tallness. I just hope you don't accidentally put me alongside the child author that writes children's stories."
Heaven's Hole. A talented psychologist who suffered from a terrible illness when young, in other timelines this led her to become the leader of a cult that perpetuated suffering, searching salvation through carnal pleasure. But this one was cured and free to live her life, to such successful degrees many claimed her a savior, while others highly spited her from envy, leading her to work in an oil rig that was eventually invaded and overrun by the Demon God Zepar.
Interested in Kiara, he imprisoned her, driving her to insanity with the intention of making her a host, showing her the inhumane and lustful misdeeds of her other selves through the multiverse, reaching a breaking point that turned into an Evil of Humanity that stopped resembling her real self, overridden to not be any different from them, to the point she concocted a plan that would cause an endless cycle of death and suffering of all living beings on Earth for her own amusement.
This is the human aspect of that psychologist that became a Beast. One who is always at the brink to return to be a Beast of Desires, a savior and dark messiah. One aware she could reach insanity again, and one whose wish is not to do that.
Parameters
Strength: D
Endurance: A+
Agility: B+
Mana: EX
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: EX
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Goddess Metamorphosis: Rank EX. An evolved version of Shapeshifting of the highest form where one undergoes metamorphosis into a goddess.
Nega-Saver: Rank A. The result of a Beast that decided to save only a world of its own, despite having the potential to be a Saver. Completely negates all skills of the Saver and Ruler classes.
Personal Skills
Authority of the Beast: Rank D. A skill that deals more damage to anything coming from Humanity or Gods.
Independent Manifestation: Rank E. The ability to sustain oneself existence.
Logos Eater: Rank C. The special trait of the Pleasure Deva. Provides a damage buff against any sentient being that possesses intelligence, regardless of scale or structure.
Clairvoyance (Beast): Rank D+++. A vision that allows the use to see through and reveal the desires and true nature of the humans, revealing the animalistic and true nature of the other part.
Thesis of the Still Heart: Rank A. A medical software program that separates the target's body, mind, and soul, in reality leaving the soul defenseless for the user to absorb it.
Human Order Ascension Ritual: Rank A: By absorbing and raising Demon God Pillars inside one’s body, one has gained supernatural powers that can control Demon God Pillars.
Noble Phantasm
Amitābha Amidala - Heaven's Hole: Pleasure Paradise - Garbhadhatu Mandala: Rank EX, Anti-Unit type.
A subtype of the Third Magic. It has the ability to draw in matter with incredibly powerful gravity on the level of a black hole, but it's said to be nothing but a hole for waste, such as the unfavorable aspects people retain even as they do good deeds. The "Hole of the Heavens" embraces all the negative information associated with humanity's egocentricity, or all the world's greed, and continues to grow. As long as intellectual activity persists, it will continue to grow. It will continue to contain the ugly desires that should not be present in humans.
Attribute: Beast
Traits: Hominidae Servant, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
Notes: Harleen's Servant. Has trouble holding back on her desires and, were it not for her Master's support, would've succumbed to them long ago, becoming a Beast in the process. This however, hasn’t faded entirely. An alternate version of herself once was Andersen's former Master. Neither have fond memories of this.
ChaldeaDex Entry:
Servant #168
Freely Joyous, Third Outer Thought Pleasure of Heaven (Beast III/Rapture)
Class: Beast
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 166cm/53kg?
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Modern Era, Japan
Likes: Humanity, the suffering of others, sexual pleasure
Dislikes: Everything else
Line: "I am the only real person in this world. The rest of 'humanity' is no more than a pack of wild beasts. That's how I was raised. That's the world I lived in. It was so rare for anyone to think of me as evil. And those who did... Well, they were shunned by society, regarded as wicked sinners, just like that pathetic, lost Archer. Those who tried to bring wicked people like me to justice were reviled as not serving society's best interests. Can you truly call such beasts human? If you could, such nameless heroes would go unrewarded for their efforts. No, I am the only human. So long as that is true, all is well. If it were not, this world would be beyond saving. "
Comment: Love is a good thing. And greed is a good thing. But when love becomes greed for pleasure, it ceases to be good.
The Demonic Bodhisattva. A being of pure narcissism who values only pleasure. A calamity that destroys both humans and animals, that uses, consumes, and absorbs all life for its own selfish desires. Any who learn of this woman can at first see only her saintlike benevolence, and join the faith as she utterly enthralls them, until they self-destruct, wishing for her love. The result of the Demon God Zepar attempting to use an innocent Kiara Sessyoin to his benefit, backfiring as she spiraled out of his control into a cosmic manifestation of lust.
She is a being of pure evil, and yet insists with absolute conviction that her actions are in fact good. While she would never lie to herself, she preys on all around her with honeyed, poisonous lies, and consumes everything in her path. Her surety and doubtless ego have brought her to true enlightenment, at least from the perspective of a layman. If one were to think of her as a saint, that could be the only reason why.
Her wish was to merge with the core of the Earth to become one with it and absorb all life, allowing all of those that she doesn’t sees as human to be part of an endless cycle of desire.
Parameters
Strength: C
Endurance: EX
Agility: B
Mana: EX
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: EX
Class Skills
Authority of the Beast: Rank A. A skill that deals more damage to anything coming from Humanity or Gods.
Independent Manifestation: Rank C. The ability to sustain oneself's existence.
Self-Modification: Rank EX. The ability to modify one’s body.
Personal Skills
Ten Thousand Colored Stagnation: Rank EX. An electronic formula separating body, spirit and soul to listen to their troubles and purify them.
Karma Phage: Rank EX. The fate of the Beast who tried to bring salvation only to her own world, while possessing the qualifications to be a messiah. Kiara's five senses, removed and bestowed upon others as skills when she turned her body into SE.RA.PH.
Logos Eater: Rank EX. The special trait of the Pleasure Deva. Provides a damage buff against any sentient being that possesses intelligence, regardless of scale or structure.
Nega-Saver: Rank A. The result of a Beast that decided to save only a world of its own, despite having the potential to be a Saver. Completely negates all skills of the Saver and Ruler class.
Thesis of the Still Heart: Rank EX. A medical software program that separates the target's body, mind, and soul, in reality leaving the soul defenseless for the user to absorb it.
Noble Phantasm
Sukhāvatī - Heaven's Hole: Third Pleasure Heaven of Deeply Grateful Existence: Rank EX, Anti-Humanity type.
The Noble Phantasm of Beast III/R which breeds infinite demon pillars within her. Her body is no longer a single universe; it has become a paradise. Anyone drawn into it loses their existence, with their consciousness liberated and their will melted. No matter how strong their body, or how much armor they have, this is meaningless inside her body, and they become as powerless as a newborn as they are liberated. Beast III/R is a "hole" in reality itself, but just at the edge of annihilation, those drawn into the hole are overcome with ecstasy as they are erased. One could say that liberation from the reality of suffering is a form of salvation.
Attribute: Beast
Traits: Demonic Beast Servant, Hominidae Servant, Humanoid
Notes: Out of all the Seven Evils of Humanity, she represents the "lust" half of "desire". Kiara is technically capable of turning back into Beast III/R at any given moment, but has no reason to, and her goal is to never let it happen. Yet the Beast remains inside her subconscious, always creeping to remind her of what she considers her “true nature”.
ChaldeaDex Entry:
Servant #239
Kama (Sakura Matou)
Class: Assassin
Gender: Originally male, currently biologically and identified as female, but doesn’t minds being referred as male
Height/Weight: 156cm/46kg
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Hindu Mythology, India (Kama), Modern Era, Japan (Sakura)
Debut: Fate/Grand Order (Kama), Fate/stay night (Sakura)
Likes: Kleshas, corruption, good-for-nothing, moments when someone becomes unhappy
Dislikes: People with three eyes (especially Shiva), people who inspire hope (especially Parvati)
Line: -Sigh- “I had no intention of dropping by, but well…things happened… My name is Kama. I am the God of Love. But it’d probably for the best for you to not consult me on matters of love.”
Comment: The listed height and weight are from her base form. Depending on her mood (or her preference towards the target), her age and other stats may change somewhat.
God of Love. The love deity appearing in Hinduism, also called Kamadeva. Originally a male god who didn’t have much relevancy in events of his pantheon, the most well-known anecdote of him was how the goddess Parvati convinced him to distract her husband Shiva by shooting an arrow close to him. In response, he incinerated Kama with his Third Eye, spreading his ashes through the universe as further punishment, it being said they’re the source of love through the multiverse.
As for what that concerns to Kama, the experience left him with immeasurable trauma, leaving him with a contradictory idealism; a god of love that no longer believed in love, despite loving everything. This cynicism is what led him to take possession of the negative aspects of Sakura Matou, and partook in a plan that would eliminate all of magic with the intention to get rid of her killers. That is, until a certain Goddess of Light has reminded Kama what it meant to be loved...
Kama formerly wished for the extermination of Parvati and Shiva, the ones responsible for her horrible death and mental scars. Nowadays... Kama's wish is to remain at the side of Palutena... not that she would ever say it out loud or anything.
Parameters
Strength: D
Endurance: B+
Agility: B
Mana: A+
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: C
Class Skill
Presence Concealment: Rank -. The ability to hide one’s presence.
Personal Skills
Independent Manifestation: Rank C. The ability to sustain oneself's existence.
Magic Resistance: Rank A. Protection from magic effects.
Riding: Rank A. The ability to master any mount.
Blessing of the Lust Goddess: Rank B. A lust goddess’s bless towards herself, absorbing lifeforce of others for self-healing, akin to a succubus.
Ananga Ranga: Rank EX. The manifestation of Kama incarnation as “The Incorporeal”, representing when her ashes being spread through the universe. It allows herself to exist with multiple bodies.
Mara-Papiyas: Rank EX. A skill that temporarily Kama's nature as the incarnation of worldly desires; the Demon King Mara, the incarnation of worldly desires.
God of Love's Essence: Rank B. A skill that comprises Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body and repels mental interference. It also gives the special property of being able to change at will to an appropriate form to love.
Noble Phantasms
Kama Sammohana: Love Wanes, For Affection is Absent: Rank C, Anti-Unit type.
The original Noble Phantasm of the god of love Kama. The arrow of flowers held by Kama, called Sammohana. It has the effect of evoking feelings of love in those it pierces. Due to her trauma, she’s not too keen on using her Noble Phantasm for the sake of others in general. On the contrary, getting in the way of people who squeal and giggle about love and affection would be extremely entertaining.
Saṃsāra Kama: Passion Burns, For Love Exists: Rank C, Anti-Unit type.
The other form of the arrow of flowers, Sammohana. In a state where her nature as "Ananga" and "The Seducer" strongly manifests, the body she lost itself will be interpreted as the arrow of love. A depraved love that is akin to the endless cycle of reincarnation. There exist countless episodes of reincarnation and rebirth for her, so she possesses the title of Master of the cycle of Reincarnation.
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Child (youngest body only), Hominidae Pseudo-Servant, Humanoid, Divine, Weak to Enuma Elish
Notes: One of Palutena's current Servants, having fallen in love with the latter. While initially summoned as a Beast merged with the Demon King Mara, King Hassan has slain those Beast attributes from her, leaving her in her base Assassin form. The forms she takes are a child, representing an innocent love, a young adult, representing a romanticized love, and a mature woman, representing depraved love.
ChaldeaDex Entry:
Servant #240
Kama/Mara (Sakura Matou) (Beast III/Lapse)
Class: Beast
Gender: Originally male, currently biologically and identified as female, but doesn’t minds being referred as male
Height/Weight: 156cm/46kg
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Hindu Mythology, India (Kama and Mara), Modern Era, Japan (Sakura)
Debut: Fate/Grand Order (Kama and Mara), Fate/stay night (Sakura)
Likes: Getting in the way of others, carnal desire, depravity, hopeless people
Dislikes: People with three eyes (especially Shiva), people who inspire hope (especially Parvati)
Line: "No matter how much you kill. No matter how many lies you tell. No matter how much wine you drink. No matter how many things you steal. No matter how much sex you have. No matter— how useless of a human you become. I will love you. I will love you even if you plummet to the depths of hell. That is the proof of my love. My love, which forgives everything—"
Comment: The typical ratio of Kama and Mara is 6:4, but when the proportion heavily leans towards Mara, the Saint Graph awakens as a Beast.
Demon Lord of Lust. The aspect of Kama who appeared in Buddhism, the Demon King of Desires Mara, who attempted to bring ruin to Buddha by wanting to make him fall to temptation. Kama/Mara may act and talk oppressive, sadistic, and condescending, but no matter who she is, she is still able to "love" as well as being able to twist others into wild sensual madness. Yet this love is not offered for its object's benefit. Kama/Mara's Bestial nature comes not from corrupting others by drowning them in love, but by using love itself to corrupt them.
When incinerated by Shiva, Kama gained a physical body of the universe, but that also meant that her counterpart, the Demon King Mara, also gained the power of a boundless realm. A manifestation of calamity, a being of the universe itself with love and desire, which meant she was more than qualified to become a Beast capable of destroying humanity.
Her wish is simple; the extermination of Parvati and Shiva, the ones responsible for her horrible death and mental scars, whatever cost there is to that, is of no matter to her.
Parameters
Strength: C
Endurance: EX
Agility: A
Mana: EX
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: EX
Class Skills
Authority of the Beast: Rank A. A skill that deals more damage to anything coming from Humanity or Gods.
Independent Manifestation: Rank C. The ability to sustain oneself's existence.
Self-Modification: Rank -. The ability to modify one’s body. Nullified by Divine Core of the God of Love.
Personal Skills
Embrace of Dreams: Rank A. Summons "doubles” that are unevenly distributed inside the universe by "Constitution That Accepts Every Desire", with abilities just as akin as the original.
Pathos Scepter: Rank A. The special trait of the Demon King of the Sixth Heaven, Hajun. The power of the Beast's Crown of Light.
God of Love's Essence: Rank A. A skill that comprises Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body and repels mental interference, It also gives the special property of being able to change at will to an appropriate form to love.
Nega-Desire: Rank A. The absolute and ultimate skill of adoration possessed by the beast that is the incarnation of worldly desires. An existence that gives love, she is completely immune to "charm".
Constitution That Accepts Every Desire: Rank EX. An authority that makes sure that each and every (worldly) desire inhabiting this universe is cuddled close together, pampered, and corrupted.
Affection of the Heavenly Demon: Rank A. The one who defeats Beast III/L or one of her doubles will have all of the debuffs that have been applied to them up to this point cleared. A skill that embodies Beast III/L's special trait of "loving even her killer".
Noble Phantasms
Saṃsāra Kama/Mara Avaruddha: Realm of Love, Burning Universe: Rank EX, Anti-World type.
The word saṃsāra means "cycle" in Sanskrit, and it's derived from Kama's other name, Samsaraguru. Avaruddha in Sanskrit means "obstruction," and it points to Mara's many attempts to interfere with Buddha. The ultimate corruptive Noble Phantasm that represents both Kama and Mara, who possess demonic natures on a cataclysmic level. When one experiences this Noble Phantasm inside Kama's universe, they will undoubtedly behold a true hell—or perhaps paradise—of Kama sending herself (or copies of herself) to all without discrimination, and burning up the universe with her one-sided love to exhaust her targets.
Attribute: Beast
Traits: Demonic Beast Servant, Hominidae Pseudo-Servant, Humanoid, Divine, King, Threat to Humanity
Notes: As an Evil of Humanity, she represesents the "depravity" half of "desire". Toffee’s Servant, who she contracted with to eliminate all magic, as even if it means her end, it will also mean the erasure of Shiva and Parvati. Kama is technically capable of turning back into Beast III/L at any given moment, but has no reason to.
True...
Pit: "...No?"
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Palu: -embracing Kama because the mention of being rid of must've made her feel extremely sad- "Don't you get it, Luvia? She was bitter and evil because she was deceived, humiliated and no one really cared about her. By trying to kick her out, you'd only be repeating history, leaving her alone, feeling betrayed, building up hatred and potentially even becoming a Beast again.
By keeping her here, she gets a nice, warm home with a family that cares about her. For the first time in millenia, she felt joy, and she felt like she had a reason to live other than revenge. This is our opportunity to turn an Evil of Humanity into something less... evil."
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-she has more?-
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Kamui: -glomps- "JEANNE!"
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Byleth: "You have?"
That's the thing.
Elizabeth: "............................................................................"
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Martha/Jeanne/Luvia: "........" -confused at what to do-
Caren: -Sips cocoa- "Doesn't matters to me either way"
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-More cards?-
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Jeanne: "Ow! Her"
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Guifei: "Plenty, frankly"
Star: "We can't keep worrying about that..."
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Perfect. They won't be leaving this base now...
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...Do you me to try speaking with her?
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-To the kitchen staff!-
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Susie: "Oh thank God, we finally get to get out of here!"
Lily: "It's impossible to not ponder for me..."
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Slipstream: "So is that all for now?"
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Aya: "...Weeeeell..."
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-Good then-
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Charlotte:
If I can...
-Yes-
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Peridot:"Oh, totally!"
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-Merasmus has gone home!-
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-She seriously did, much more than she realized-
-YAY-
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-den?-
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-not coming back?-
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Kanna: "You're smiling~!"
-Who is with Nanoha-
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-Well, more about piano- P
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Cleopatra: "There he goes"
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-She smiles widely-
Brynhildr: "I-I am..."