Alien Vision
Smash Ace
- Joined
- Apr 25, 2011
- Messages
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Rock Bottom
A mountain empty of hope,
cracked from top to bottom;
somewhere lies a dead goat,
forever shall this haunt em'.
The past has taken it's toll,
the mountain could stand no more;
defeat begins to play it's role,
crashing down to a level once before.
The clouds fill with ire,
the world begins to shake;
there was nothing else to admire,
lying next to a dried up lake.
Now a rock once filled with life,
blocking the paths of many;
never can they be cut by knife,
blaming everyone for their insanity.
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I'm a beginner at poetry. So give me all you've got.
A mountain empty of hope,
cracked from top to bottom;
somewhere lies a dead goat,
forever shall this haunt em'.
The past has taken it's toll,
the mountain could stand no more;
defeat begins to play it's role,
crashing down to a level once before.
The clouds fill with ire,
the world begins to shake;
there was nothing else to admire,
lying next to a dried up lake.
Now a rock once filled with life,
blocking the paths of many;
never can they be cut by knife,
blaming everyone for their insanity.
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I'm a beginner at poetry. So give me all you've got.
