Rate my two teams.

[Dastrn]

I'm going to double post to get this going. These are the two teams I came up with.

I'd like to take a minute to point out that I suck at Pokemon, so you should take this opportunity to educate a noob.

Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 Def/80 SAtk/176 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Wish
- Softboiled
- Ice Beam
- Toxic
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Infernape (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 24 Atk/232 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Flamethrower
- Close Combat
- Nasty Plot
- Hidden Power [Ice]
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Salamence (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 120 Atk/136 Spd/252 SAtk
Rash nature (+SAtk, -SDef)
- Brick Break
- Draco Meteor
- Flamethrower
- Roost
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Lucario (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Close Combat
- Swords Dance
- Extremespeed
- Crunch
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Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP/252 Atk/4 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Crunch
- Stone Edge
- Earthquake
- Pursuit
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Skarmory (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/96 Atk/4 Spd/156 SDef
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Stealth Rock
- Whirlwind
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[Dastrn]

Team 2:

Celebi @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP/220 Def/36 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Leech Seed
- Grass Knot
- Recover
- Hidden Power [Fire]
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Azelf @ Life Orb
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 36 HP/220 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Nasty Plot
- Psychic
- Flamethrower
- Grass Knot
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Starmie @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 160 HP/216 Spd/132 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Rapid Spin
- Recover
- Surf
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Zapdos @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/220 Def/36 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Roost
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Toxic
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Electivire (M) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
- Cross Chop
- Earthquake
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Dragonite (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 64 Atk/192 Spd/252 HP
Lonely nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Dragon Dance
- Light Screen
- Roost
- Dragon Claw
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[ozg82889]

writing out what you use each pokemon do for your team would be useful.

i think changing up your tyranitars evs would make it a lot stronger.
any strong sweeper with stabbed earthquake or fighting move will ohko it nearly 100% of the time.
i ran a damage calc to see how much damage an
infernape@ life orb
adamant
252 atk/ 252 spd/ 4 hp
-close combat
-the rest doesn't matter.
ok if you were faster then it you could probably ohko it with EQ as it is a frail sweeper but as its adamant with only 4 spd evs you wont be outspeeding it. with one close combat with no boosts to atk it would do 222.6%-261.9% dmg more then enough to ko your ttar twice with one attack. i used to think that puting all evs into its atk/sp.atk stat and its hp stat helped it survive and kill better. having a high speed is what helps your sweeper live longer. if it is faster and can ko your opponent before it can hurt you then its doing what a sweeper should.
if you want you could switch the sp and hp evs around if you don't want to change your moves around or use a dragon dancing set.

ttar @ left overs/ life orb
adamant/jolly
for evs you can go 252 atk/ 252spd/ 4hp or lower your atk or speed to increase your defenses. remember ttar gets a 50% sd.def increase in sandstorm.
-dragon dance
-EQ
-crunch
-stone edge
or you can use ice/fire fang inplace of crunch or stone edge.
after a DD with the adamant nature you would get 324 spd and 356 with jolly nature. thats enough to out speed 100 base speed pokes with 252 spd evs and a +spd nature.


also about the dragonite. is it a typo because it says it has 252 sp.atk but its only attack move is dragon claw and that is a physical move not special. maybe you ment 252 sp.def

psychic is not a good hidden power. doesn't celebi have access to stronger psychic moves. also psychic doesn't have great coverage.

this was all typed on the wii with no keyboard so there are spelling problems. i will fix and add things when i get on the comp in the morning.

 

[Dastrn]

celebi is supposed to be hidden power fire. i'll fix the typo.

also, the dragonite was supposed to be holding a leftovers and that's supposed to be 252 HP. sorry for the mistakes.

 

[Warriors]

lots of OU but gets the job done.

great movesets for a single battle

 

[boo836]

I'm sorry, but scarftran eats your second team.

Not to mention about dragonite. Light screen wont do much, it already dies to alot of ice attacks.

I've also noticed that scarf doexes-E hurts team 1 badly with standard set.

 

[Dastrn]

Ok I update my first team and got a couple good wins in a row. Skarmory and Blissey have been tearing up for me. Whoever said skarmbliss is dead is ********.

Here's my new first team:

Gyarados (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 216 HP/16 Atk/176 Def/100 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Waterfall
- Taunt
- Stone Edge
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Infernape (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 24 Atk/232 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Flamethrower
- Close Combat
- Nasty Plot
- Hidden Power [Ice]
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Salamence (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 120 Atk/136 Spd/252 SAtk
Rash nature (+SAtk, -SDef)
- Brick Break
- Draco Meteor
- Flamethrower
- Roost
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Electivire (M) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
- Cross Chop
- Earthquake
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Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 Def/80 SAtk/176 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Wish
- Softboiled
- Ice Beam
- Toxic
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Skarmory (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/96 Atk/4 Spd/156 SDef
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Stealth Rock
- Whirlwind
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