Rate and Critique please!

[Timo]

Hey guys.
Some days ago, i made some vids of my mario vs. captain falcon.
i want to get better with him and i need your help.
check this out:

Timo (Mario) vs. Gdot (Captain Falcon) 1:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GGQzxAnZZjQ&feature=channel_page

Timo (Mario) vs. Gdot (Captain Falcon) 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0EQeM7dC0c&feature=channel

Timo (Mario) vs. Gdot (Captain Falcon) 3:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69k6AReuR80&feature=channel

Would be great to receive some comments.
Thanks in advance and enjoy.

 

[Dogysamich]

I've only watched the first one so far.

You've got some things goin for ya, man. Got your techs down for the most part. Generally make good choices.

I think when you edgeguard (especially against capfal) you outta look to actually hit him out instead of just throwing fireballs at him. That can actually help his recovery in exchange for tacking on some damage.

I also think you looked for f.airs at the wrong time, and passed up good times to do them. Like when he landed on the stage for no reason, you opted to take u.air-d.smash. Which is a perfectly good choice, but you could have f.air'd there instead. Other times, you'd look to throw f.air at him while he was moving or zoning (read: not blocking). Dont do that, those should never hit.

That's all I got off the top of my head.

 

[Timo]

thank you very much for figuring some things out (:
yeah, you're right with the fireballs. i have to remember that. edgehogging + use of bairs would be a better choice. you're also right with my fairs. shffling fairs is not the way how to play mario ^^' i have to do it at the correct time.

first, i thought, when a german guy posts some vids, he won't get an answer lol.
maybe your comment is just a move to not leave this thread with no answers xD
but, yeah, thanks for your comment (: