Alright so you wanted me to critic your Falcon, I will tell you what I liked and disliked the most , but I am not used to give advice so dont take it too hard!
1st: Roll witch falcon is good in certain situations.
example: When you just teched and an air attack will be to slow since theree is a chance you get hit/ grabbed again
Or use the gentleman after you techked, so be a bit carefull with those rolls cause the can be predictable!
2nd: You got falcons air game pretty well. Your L-canceling almost everything and use lots of nairs ( which is good! )
Try to aim your attacks a bit better with falcon, cause you might be flying over and back your opponent the whole match!
Example versus jigglypuff or spacies who use a lot of nair themselves. (especially nair spamming foxes )
Just jump up and dair or knee or wait dash dance and grab them then!
I Like the fact your moonwalking after you get a kill, keep practecing and you can use a `MJ` as an aprroach!
3rd: Alright... I saw some peeps saying this already but your use of raptor boost has to stop!
My opinion about this move is too use it as a defense move and not as an approach
Example: when you just techked or rolled or missed an air attack and your are about to get hit but mostly grabbed, you might want to use front B , since you are moving a bit backwards to avoid the grab!
After that you can combo the way you like ^^
4th: Try more spacing and approaches with grabs. Just try to find a gab/ a hole in your oppenent defense and get in there! ^^ down or uptrow , ofcourse you know this already
5th the more players you play , the more you will learn. I have always played 1 person who`d nick name is reffered to `Fernandez` , and know he counters falcon and I am used to his playstyl , so I get suprised a ot by other players. Try to play as many people as you can!
ehm I hoped this helped? think not lol