Need help cleaning up pikachu combos (video)

[MrMarbles]

Hi guys I've recently started trying to play smash competitively online and with my friends so naturally i came to smashboards to up my game! so I'm starting to get the hang of these combos but i am still too slow and they aren't quite connecting... or maybe I'm using the wrong moves which makes them impossible to connect? I know most if not all of these probably wouldn't work against a good player. any tips for speeding these up or helping them connect would be greatly appreciated!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CDbIzn8WSmM

 

[SheerMadness]

Your combos look fine. You just need more practice and experience. Having online play, where you can get on and practice vs a bunch of different match ups and skill levels essentially 24/7 will help you out a ton.

I'll avoid giving any tips and critiques here and just wait until we play on console. It's way more beneficial when you can see visual examples.

 

[MrMarbles]

sweet i appreciate the help!