Look, if you can say things like:
Marth
Match 9
At the beginning, you could have been easily sheildgrabbed but he spot-dodged, you should have took advantage of his lag and grabbed over backing away. The b-throw at 11 set up for some tech chasing and a makeshift combo due to the fox not teching.
You f-smashed alot after this and it could have been punished badly and remember to smash di those up-airs. Good edgeguard though. Random f-smash at .48?...
At 1.22, you charged an f-smash and the fox went right into it..you don't need to charge all the time as its easy to see what you're doing in your edgeguards. At 1.35, you should have sweetspotted so you could have at least hurt the fox on his landing lag. Near 1.43, you started a good chainthrow but then back-throwed and screwed it up bad..
If you know the fox is going to go for the shine spike, try to f-air or something, make his life harder. About 2.03, you just let him fall to the ground..try to continue combos and your chainthrowing. The approaching f-smash at 2.29 was abit too straight forward. Remember to wiggle out of stun and try to get height over the stage, rather than off, when knocked high.
Charged f-smash for no reason at 2.46, you had this match one and you're slowly losing it. From here..try less rolling and punishing lag on rolls and spot dodges..I really can't say much on the close quarters combat besides to keep your cool and punish over being afraid and jerky. You don't want to be on a platform for very long when fox is under you, don't stand there, get off asap.
At 3.47, he was offered up easy for a stock but you let him hit, bad mistake. Charged f-smash at 4.06?..bad choice..you should have leaped out and swatted him a few times since he was so close to the stage.
at 4.29, I'm beginning to believe you want to lose..you passed up an easy edgeguard attempt.
When someone is that high, you shouldn't be trying to hit with the f-smash..try something like a tippered nair,d-tilt or bair, its much easier to connect with those. And he makes it back after you hit him off the stage..you should have edgehogged.
For the most part, you misjudged distance work on that. Other problems would be attacking/grabbing in the wrong direction or generally using a move while the fox wasn't there, like netural a-ing when he was above you. You also tried to end combos too soon with f-smashes..you need to be more visual on your combos instead of auto, so you can tell whats going to hit. Many times you just watched him return and you did nothing..eh?..work on that.
Side note: I hear lots of kids then I hear a deeper older voice.
For fox
Why did you start lasering in place at the beginning? it screamed hit me..You really need to work on your teching skill, you missed numorous techs through the match.
The backward jump to up-b at .24 was dumb and un-needed, reframe from stuff like that.
Make your nairs lower, don't leap so high..As for the charged f-smash hitting..learn to ledgetech.
You are trying to use lasers...but not very skilled with them yet, but I'm glad you are using them. Try to be less predictable about your approaches, make the marth come to you for a change. Also, dreamland has a high ceiling, you don't always have to up-throw to u-air against marth which you mostly did, mix it up.
At 1.10, why did you watch him return without doing anything? At 1.22, you should have either illusioned (of which, you need to be doing more if possible due to it being harder to react to as the marth was having trouble with it already) or you could have up-bed up and moved toward the stage.
At 1.33, the bair was ill advised..very high and inaccurate and passed up your chance on taking that stock. Okay now..when marth is that high, try to land a n-air or a Falling u-air...as your u-airs were far too obvious. I'd have been going for nairs which are much easier to land.
Mix up your grabbing once again, even try a d-throw to up-smash as if its not teched, it hits..be fast and unpredictable. At 2.34, instead of lasering, you should have been out there stopping him..like a nair.
The bair from ledge wasn't a bright idea as it was far too high. At 3.25, you should have known better to edgehog..you should have been up there stopping him. The fire fox at 3.32 was..dumb. so was the one at 3.44. and at 3.46, you should have been taken out.
You can see the other mistakes and its mostly the same thing so I'll stop there. I'm tired of typing.
Overall: the ceiling was very high, you shouldn't have been doing so many u-airs when he was in kill %, you should have been going for the side kill at that point but if you do u-air so much, try falling u-airs to mix it up. Don't be so spot dodgy in close combat, keep a cool head and react according. Learn to tech so you can avoid taking needless damage, mix up your grabbing and recovery. Get better at that lasering too. I see you're starting to shine combo, good, get better at it!
Then Dear God you need a life. You suck at this game too.
And yes I was being sarcastic, sir.
And I am asian so I'll say whatever I want sir.
