Missing No.? I must read this.
EDIT: Missing No. is great. Some good things about it:
+ You actually use Pokemon moves for all (or most) of his attacks
+ His Side B is unlike anything I've ever seen, and I would give it a vote just for that
+ Used color and BB code
Some bad things:
+ Some of the BB code is not working, fix that
+ The organization is just a tad awkward
+ Some of the attacks are unoriginal and boring. Water Gun is a bad culprit of this
+ I'll beat the Detail Nazi to this point, but some of the moves lack proper detail
+ While you did use BB code, it would help to
bold things and make them
stand out
Overall, it's a nice, good moveset.
Fix those things, and you'll have a solid moveset. Always remember one thing though (and this is for everyone):
If this is the best you can do, that's enough. Your best is always enough.
THAT IS ALL