Looking for feedback

[Locuan]

I'm looking for general tips or strats on how to improve my game:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zj_gtEqxzo4

(friendly match at tournament PUCPR)

I have another vid I presume but it's from july/august? but I'll post it either way:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KGqHkH-xW1k

vs. xYz

(I used to banana>grab to much...)

well either way I hope I have some feedback and thx in advance.

 

[TreK]

Same problem as mine. Don't jump into the **** !

 

[fZk]

Never approach with dash attack unless you hit with a banana. I saw that a lot in your match against Noux, you ran into ****.

 

[-Cake-]

against the rob- every time you or rob is off the stage be on the look out for his laser.

 

[Ugg]

As stated before, don't approach with dash attack unless he's slipped on a banana, you got shield grabbed a couple times in the second video because of that

And cake, he really always should be on the look out for the laser, wether it's on or off stage
I liked your peanut gun shots at the very beginning of the video though, and you had some nice edgeguarding in the first video

 

[-Cake-]

well, i meant, when you knock rob off stage, its almost a guarantee that he'll use his laser or gyro before he gets back on ( that's what all the robs i face do)