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Lör - Demo complete

Melomaniacal

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Well, me and my band have been in the process of recording our demo for a while now, and after over a month of recording and mixing, it is complete. The band is Lör, the genre is epic metal. I am the drummer. Palpi is the singer. We would love for you to give us a listen and any kind of feedback. Tell us what you think!

Here's our myspace, which will give more information about the band:
http://www.myspace.com/halloflor

The demo is five tracks long, running at 29 minutes. The myspace only has one song up for now (our favorite).

So... yeah. Enjoy!
 

finalark

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It sounds like you drawn inspiration from the likes of Blind Guardian, Kamelot and perhaps Hammerfall. (just a guess, not sure if I'm right). Some critiques....

- Your singer sounds like he's a bit self aware or nervous, he should work on that

- It is hard to understand what your singer is saying, mostly because the music covers up his singing

Some suggestions:

- Have your singer take some lessons in his spare time, it will improve the over all quality of your song

- Make sure that your singer can be heard and isn't covered up by the music

Other than that, ****, good job!

Also, I believe you fall into this catagory: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HeavyMithril
 

Melomaniacal

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Funny thing is I've told our singer the exact same thing (about him sounding very self-aware).
It makes me very happy that our music makes you think Blind Guardian/Kamelot/etc, because we all love those bands.

As for downloading the rest of the demo, send us an email at halloflor@hotmail.com and someone will send you the rest of it. I think that's how we agreed on doing it, haha.
 

Melomaniacal

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Haha yeah. For singing I was a lot more nervous the first day I recorded vocals. I think I sounded better on the 2nd or third day. Partial john incoming, I threw up the day I recorded from food poisoning so I was nervous about sounding good then etc etc. Thanks for the feedback.

-**** this is Palpi
 
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