Katapultar

[Katapultar]

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This SM is a free for all. I will add in any characters if anyone requests them, or bosses. I plan to use mostly MYM6 characters (I will use all of them if I can, though it is absurd sounding, but I won’t use Spadefox set because he is in Playing God, I would be insulting it that way), though I will allow past MYM characters should anyone want theirs to appear. Also tell me if somebody is out of character with their dialogue. I won’t ask the authors for their permission to use their character; rather I will reference the author and MYM when the character is introduced. Please tell me if you want a specific character in my SM, I will put any moveset in if you request it.

Anyways, let’s get on with it…

[SIZE=+3]Katapultar’s [/SIZE]

[SIZE=+3]MYM6 Story Mode: [/SIZE]

[SIZE=+3]Falsehood Path[/SIZE]

Click on the title to view Story Mode.

 

[BKupa666]

Well, I'm sorry to see this SM's reception getting ***** over K.Rool's sets. It's an interesting start, and I'm glad to see Hades finally appearing in an SM. Seriously, both of MW's SMs were canceled mere levels before Hades was supposed to appear. You've got his personality down, although some dialogue is a bit strange (you said 'these days' twice in a row in his first lines). Still, his torturing of the a and carelessness toward his minions is perfect. Keep up the good work!

 

[darth meanie]

It's still small, but there's some promise here, that's for sure. The cutscenes, dialogue, and enemies could use a little cleaning up, but otherwise solid. Also, given the option, Magnezone is villain, like in the 11th movie, not a hero.

 

[Negi-Kun]

It's looking quite good so far. As the others said, you should review your work. Some parts such as dialogue need some enhancement.

Thanks so much for using my Poison Zombie! :D

 

[Koppakirby]

It looks pretty good so far. Thanks for using Poppy, by the way. I can't wait to see where this will go next!

 

[Katapultar]

I guess there is a lot to go now. It's true that it needs a lot of work, many things such as enemies, dialogue, err. Dialogue is the hardest thing to get right basically, It's a worrysome though to get somebody out of character. So far, If anything, I will fix things up a bit if I can at the end. Im looking for an awesome robot boss to put in as a chapter finisher...

 

[darth meanie]

Definitely improve the dialogue, make separate paragraphs so you can see it better.

Also, a few things. There are two real Golds in Pokemon canon, the game Gold, who is a silent protagonist, and the manga Gold, who's a loudmouthed kid with a vendetta against Silver.

Also, Daroach is hardly a common thief; he's an intergalactic gangster and the leader of a massive crime syndicate, The Squeak Squad.

 

[Katapultar]

I guess that's a lesson for me not to use characters that I don't know very well.
Using lots of random MYM6 Characters = SILLY
Sorry, but I don't really plan on cleaning the dialogue up, this SM is better of being a prototype.
If I do make another SM, then I will complete it to a certain extent before actually completing it. And I would make movesets for characters I want to use...
I'll try to complete this SM maybe... but be warned it will not appeal.

 

[Man of Popsicle]

Also, given the option, Magnezone is villain, like in the 11th movie, not a hero.

Magnezone is basically the police in PMD, magnezone and magnemites.