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Item Creation Contest Round 2: Donkey Kong (Now Accepting Entries & Seeking Judges!)

DakotaBonez

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I have yet to play Fire Emblem, but these Tomes people keep talking about sound pretty interesting. It would be cool if, after picking one up, your attacks gain whatever elemental effect they represent.

For example, after picking up a lightning tome, your attacks can paralyze the opponent. The fire tome could add extra burn damage and a life sap tome would restore health equal to the amount of damage ya deal.

The tomes effects last for 9 tilt attacks, or 3 smash attacks. Smash attacks would have a greater effect, similar to how charging the super scope causes greater damage but reduces the number of shots that can be fired.

Sorry if this totally goes against the logic of tomes.
 

RADSheikah

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I have yet to play Fire Emblem, but these Tomes people keep talking about sound pretty interesting. It would be cool if, after picking one up, your attacks gain whatever elemental effect they represent.

For example, after picking up a lightning tome, your attacks can paralyze the opponent. The fire tome could add extra burn damage and a life sap tome would restore health equal to the amount of damage ya deal.

The tomes effects last for 9 tilt attacks, or 3 smash attacks. Smash attacks would have a greater effect, similar to how charging the super scope causes greater damage but reduces the number of shots that can be fired.

Sorry if this totally goes against the logic of tomes.
Sounds great but sadly this round is closed. But it is still good thou :(... maybe next round...
 

Pieman0920

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Sorry if this totally goes against the logic of tomes.
The idea isn't bad, but it doesn't quite fit tomes as they are in Fire Emblem. Each tome casts a different spell, and aren't generally physical attacks or things that empower physical attacks. To be in spirit with how they are in FE, it would be like picking up a book in the same way you would pick up a ray gun, but instead of shooting a laser, it shot a PK Fire or Din's Fire.

There's almost certainly an analogue item for the power up idea somewhere though.
 

LF2K

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Perhaps a Wind Tome could be used to create a strong gale to blow your enemies away? It wouldn't hurt them, but just push them away.
 
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Aninymouse

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Perhaps a Wind Tome could be used to create a strong gale to blow your enemies away? It wouldn't hurt them, but just push them away.
Might be cool, but just keep in mind just how well-liked Mario's FLUDD was... Which is to say, not at all.
 

D-idara

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Might be cool, but just keep in mind just how well-liked Mario's FLUDD was... Which is to say, not at all.
Mario's FLUDD wasn't disliked because of the function, it was disliked because the function sucked, just look at Kyogre, it's an amazing Pokeball Pokemon.
 

RADSheikah

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Guys stay on track. This is about items not the "FLUDD hate thread" at least discuss how much you liked every ones items.
 

LF2K

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Besides, FLUDD didn't suck. It did just the opposite. :troll:

We're going to be creative for the Zelda round. A lot of items have already been used.
 

RADSheikah

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Sorry guys I'm still not done yet. (Procrastination is a B****) but I promise I will get them soon enough. If the other judges wish it too be they can post their scores. I'm sorry this is taking forever (Not as long as the Wario round for stages) But I promise I will get it done soon enough! Again I am sorry!
 

Rocket Raccoon

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I guess I'll go first.


Creativity: 6/10

Accuracy: 7/10

Likeableness: 8/10

Total: 21/30


After reading the page on Lehran's medal and how messed up it is. I can say that the Medallion is supposed to make you crazy. Ike tried to touch it. What I like about your version is that you can accidentally touch it and makes your character hard to control. Double damage is a good side effect.


Creativity : 5/10

Accuracy : 7/10

Likeableness : 9/10

Total: 21/30


Ah yes, a common item of Fire Emblem. At first glance, it looked pretty cool. The fact that it has a lightning abilities is pretty cool. Only problem is that A. Unlimited uses, the point of collecting swords in FE is to make sure you don't run out of uses on swords. On the lightning topic, it's uses varies so I'll let that slide.


Creativity :10/10

Accuracy : 8/10

Likeableness : 8/10

Total: 26/30


What really is good about this is how you managed to create a Promotional Item and put it into Smash Bros. And I'm at a loss of words on good you managed it.
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LF2K

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Well, Ike's back! Funny coincidence we started with Fire Emblem. :p
 

Rocket Raccoon

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Whew, it's been along time since I last posted. I HAVE NEWS TO BRING!

I AM THE NEW OP OF THIS THREAD!



As a result, I have bring you your scores!

Creativity: 6/10
Accuracy: 7/10
Likeableness: 8/10
Total: 21/30

After reading the page on Lehran's medal and how messed up it is. I can say that the Medallion is supposed to make you crazy. Ike tried to touch it. What I like about your version is that you can accidentally touch it and makes your character hard to control. Double damage is a good side effect.

Creativity : 5/10
Accuracy : 7/10
Likeableness : 9/10
Total: 21/30

Ah yes, a common item of Fire Emblem. At first glance, it looked pretty cool. The fact that it has a lightning abilities is pretty cool. Only problem is that A. Unlimited uses, the point of collecting swords in FE is to make sure you don't run out of uses on swords. On the lightning topic, it's uses varies so I'll let that slide.

Creativity :10/10
Accuracy : 8/10
Likeableness : 8/10
Total: 26/30

What really is good about this is how you managed to create a Promotional Item and put it into Smash Bros. And I'm at a loss of words on good you managed it.
Creativity: 8/10
Accuracy: 7/10
Likeableness:6/10
Total: 21/30 (Again?)
It is a tricky, clever item to use in a battle. Although, this isn't Kansas Fire Emblem, this is Smash we're talking about. The damage, in my view, probably needed 5%. Now the teleporting back is extremely difficult to handle. Which gave you some credibility. You stuck with the "Can't get out of the map" rule and earned a point or two. Great item, has a risk-reward system, and is really neat. The casuals probably wouldn't like it for trickiness.


Creativity : 5/10
Accuracy 7/10
Likeableness 7/10
Total : 19/30
The Nosferatu Tome would be a neutral item, but you forgot the most important thing. HOW IN IKE'S SAKE DO YOU ACTIVATE IT? WHAT DO I LOSE TO USE IT? Let's not get too far. Three times is good enough for healing. Throwing the book is pretty funny and will not complain about. Casuals, IMO, would scour for this item. This item could throw someone's strategy. Nothing to complain except for that one part.

Creativity: 7/10
Accuracy:8/10
Likeableness: 9/10
Total 24/30

This. Your idea is perfect to me. Who doesn't want a healing attack. I do for sure. But, the USES, MAN! This is most important. Ignoring that, I love this. Personal favorite.

Creativity: 8/10
Accuracy: 8/10
Likableness:6/10
Total: 22/30
You presented well, but your main struggle that I found was it was only for team battles.

Creativity: 7/10
Accuracy:9/10
Likableness: 9/10
Total: 25/30

CASUALS WILL EAT THAT UP! It was pretty close to the original, though.


Creativity: 6/10
Accuracy: 7/10
Likableness: 6/10
Total: 19/30

Yours was well, pretty bland. It's too simple.

Creativity: 8/10
Accuracy: 9/10
Likableness: 8/10
Total: 25/30


IT'S ONE BAD LOOKING SWORD! Great choice! It really stays close to the original!


Also, please note this wasn't my 100% A-Game. I might start up another FE round soon.

ALSO, JUDGES! I NEED SOME! PM me if you wish to be a judge!
 
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