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I Got 2 Vids

Samuelson

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chic

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I'm no expert by any means but heres my take.
(I just watched the second one btw)

I though it was pretty good. The only real problems I saw is you do the same ledge guard tactic (the side kick)...you might wanna switch it up because many players will come to expect it, do something to avoid it then punish you. Another thing is you kept doing jab jab jab, you might wanna jab+ grab or jab cancel + f smash or something else just to keep em guessing. Also I don't think it's a good idea to approach by rolling. Most guys are able to tech chase it if they can read it well. Overall pretty good I think... :)
 

elheber

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Nice work Sam! You gave it to Peach pretty hard there; Mario might get jealous. I agree with chic, especialy on your Jabs. It was really noticable while watching it. The rest, I have to admit, I din't notice till chic mentioned it.

PS. Azen's Marth is a beast.
 

hippiedude92

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I just only watched Azen's match cause well, it had Azen :p Anyways I don't think you should give us a Wifi match to critique because Wifi matchs is meh. It's self explantory~ So here's my critique.

You played honestly WAY too safe with Luigi. I mean sure it's Azen, it's a Peach, it's Wifi, but your aggressivesness wasnt there. You were too heavy on the jabs. Rolling is too excessive. You should never run towards them and tornado in front of their face. More SH fireballs is needed. You need to work on positioning, DI, spacing. There's lots of to explain but im hella lazy but there are things i liked.

1. i liked the Fair WoP. You could have done more but that was okay

2. this one made me wtf mostly. the rising tornado w/o the 2nd jump. you almost acheived the full height for it. most definitly nice tho
 

Samuelson

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Ahah yeah. I'm kinda of sorry for harsh critique though. I've been in a bad mood really, I've been getting 2-3stocked for past week :/ but still that rising tornado still made me go wtf lol
O i didn't really think you were harsh. At least it was constructive and you weren't like "You're a n00b" or something like that. I laughed that you caught EVERY mistake i made though hahahaha
 
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