help?

[WayChuDat]

critique would be appreciated:

ignore the first half of this one: i was mad nervous.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F2jrQOewikg

this one is a little better.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V5-8vzfv9S4

thanks.

 

[JonaDiaper]

where the raptor boosts at? i saw one in the second vid but it doesnt count.....cuz you killed yourself. great combo starter as you already know. you had some nice nair uair uair combo but the was no knee finisher. i liked that down throw dair that killed him. nice falcon. shouldnt we(not me anymore, just sayin in general) be asking you for help and not vice versa? and you were nervous???? bad john. what were you nervous about?

 

[WayChuDat]

haha why would anyone ask me for advice? yea i was nervous cuz i played him in teams the day before and it went down to me and him 1v1. and he ***** me. so i was nervous that it owuld happen again. that's why i kept messing up my throws and stuff. but yea i don't like using raptor boost anymore cuz it never seems to land against marths. i like it against fast fallers though. but yea i know this match up pretty well. but its tough sometimes to follow DI. like that nair uair uair combo, how could i have continued that? i think maybe the second uair shoulda been a nair. then i coulda uair kneed or somethin. or just kneed.

as for the dthrow dair, i do that cuz everyone always DI's to avoid the knee. so i just dair them and it always catches people off guard.

 

[JonaDiaper]

maybe people would ask you for advice cuz your on a team with chudat and pc??!?!?! that must mean something. but i see, he put fear in you cuz he ***** you once. thats why my tag is now ****. intimidating, very intimidating. you should just knee after you get in a nair, then knee again. and one more if you can. you should kill yourself for the sake of a crazy combo. i do it all the time.

 

[abit_rusty]

Not bad at all...really was expecting a knee at 2:54 (2nd match) though

 

[ThatGuy]

Wow did that Marth choke. He was manhandling you the whole time. He needs more experience with those Dreamland platforms though

I think the problem was you have too many patterns to your attacks and approaches, and you don't have much adaptability...I'll toss some more advice when I have time.

 

[WayChuDat]

Not bad at all...really was expecting a knee at 2:54 (2nd match) though

haha yea everytime i rewatch it i always feel a little bit sad when i don't see the knee.

Wow did that Marth choke. He was manhandling you the whole time. He needs more experience with those Dreamland platforms though

I think the problem was you have too many patterns to your attacks and approaches, and you don't have much adaptability...I'll toss some more advice when I have time.

yea this is t he first time i've watched myself play in a long time. i noticed i kept just dashing away then coming in with nair. and is double jump dair something i should get rid of? i feel like i get punished for it a lot. but i never think a SH dair is gonna land. but yea. if you could point out my patterns that would be awesome, then i could just... not do them as much haha. thanks.


edit: also, being a team with chu and pc doesn't really mean anything haha. i just happened to spend a lot time with them when they came down for evo west.