i think youre a little below my level but i cant tell because the fox was pretty terrible. tell him he needs to not keep getting daired from your full jump. fox should be constantly moving. i can never full jump dair my friend's fox because he is always moving and he will space it so i miss then he grabs me. in general the fox has alot to learn. tell him to chain throw too. in fact, tell him he needs to grab more. grabs own falcos because he can chain them into uairs or usmashes.
for you, work on the reverse shl, you messed it up a few times. work on your shine combos as well. i know youve seen the crazy **** we can do to foxes. since your opponent is a noob, you can practice tech skill on him like the combos.