Critique Please

[Leviathan741]

hmm... ok first of all i am not qutting cuz you use sheik. (yes the matchup is bull****, but thats not y), and you already no why, the same reason you complain when you are losing, but this time it has gotten worse so shut the **** up and stop thinking you know why I am acting the way I am.

 

[Leviathan741]

oh and Smashjin thanks for the help, but your talking to a ex-smash player so no point in telling me how to improve though. Oh and as for trying to say that I am good, that is a funny joke, and you and I both know that I suck. I have been playing the game for 2 years...... I should be much much much much better.

 

[-Sinister-]

dude you're ******** if you think you should be as good as scar. you don't get to play against all the pros like he does all the time. if you should be that good, so should the rest of us. you have no argument. how about you go play golf for a couple years and whine about how you're not as good as phil mickelson. yeah, no ****.

btw. it's your own fault your not as good as you think you should be. so if you really cared then get better. but you claim not to care yet you continue to ***** and moan.

dude you're ****ing pathetic. it used to be so much fun back when you wouldn't ***** all the time. sure i do too sometimes, but you do it soo much more. There hasn't been a single time i've been over there since you guys moved to that house that didn't end up like yesterday at some point.

 

[Leviathan741]

except that the 2 don't have anything in common? look either way I'm done so quit going on a double standard and telling me to stop whining and play and then telling me not to play if I don't have fun.

 

[-Sinister-]

no there is no "double standard". here is what i always say you should do:

1. stop whining

OR

2. stop playing

and since you have already chosen to stop playing, you might as well stop whining. like you said, you already quit so it doesn't even matter

 

[Leviathan741]

oh yea you've never whined about how much falcon ***** sheik on stage..... never ever... oh and you never say "Nav, your a ***** for not playing" and then say "Then don't play if your gonna whine about complaining, and its find if I do".......

 

[Smashjin]

oh and Smashjin thanks for the help, but your talking to a ex-smash player so no point in telling me how to improve though. Oh and as for trying to say that I am good, that is a funny joke, and you and I both know that I suck. I have been playing the game for 2 years...... I should be much much much much better.

Honestly I'm kinda impressed for only two years. I've been playing at least four years, how do you think I feel? lol

 

[Leviathan741]

really?! hmmm....

 

[Leviathan741]

so then I am not quitting, so any critique would be fine and any help would be

 

[Wenbobular]

Haha
Pretty amusing

Don't really know what to say vs Falco ... learn how to move out of shield and how to deal with lasers <_<
Don't roll toward him on fadeaway aerials and wavedash out of shield more <- emphasis on wavedash out of shield more for all matchups because I don't think you do it

DI away should be your default DI, react to combo finishers

All forms of throwing out an aerial immediately after being put in a disadvantaged position (doublejump aerial toward the stage, falling with an aerial when popped up in the air, etc.) should be used sparingly if at all. You'd almost always be better off trying to reset to neutral

JC your grabs ~_~

When edgeguarding Falcon, it's often better to stand on stage and edgeguard with knee. Hanging on the ledge means you need perfect reaction to cover Falcon landing on stage and the DI back onto the ledge option.

Learn how to pivot Nair, it's pretty beast and pretty essential for the space animal and Falcon matchups IMO. If the other Falcon can pivot Nair his Nair will beat your approaching Nair

Moonwalking is almost always the stupidest option. The only time it's actually useful is if you need to Bair going forward or you need to get to the ledge faster than running -> roll -> jump onto ledge ... and you need to be very tight with your moonwalks for it to be effective at all (I'm not even sure if it's faster if you do it right)

Bolded are points that I think are most important.

 

[abit_rusty]

Learn how to pivot Nair, it's pretty beast and pretty essential for the space animal and Falcon matchups IMO.

Pivot nair...huh?

 

[Wenbobular]

You dash one way, pivot, Nair in place in the other direction.

 

[Winston]

^ The point is it allows you have more control spacing your nairs out of dashdance/lets you turn around nair quickly.

 

[Leviathan741]

k thanks will work on it this ****

 

[>Bert<]

JC your grabs ~_~

Lol his controller actually makes a loud clicking noise everytime he tries to JC a grab. I hear it across the room sometimes. But he's planning on getting a new controller cuz I guess he spilled soda on it?

But yea, definitely fix your edge guarding. Besides the Spacies, your edge guarding neeeeeeeds to be better especially against Sheik (perfect chance to moonwalk back into a bair or even a uair). And TECH THE WALL WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE. You did it once in friendlies the other day and I nearly **** myself cuz I didn't think you could do it lol. Stay focused the entire match too. Often times I see you sandbag more when you're losing by a stock becuz u have the mentallity that you are going to lose no matter what. Play hard, think fast, and don't mess up lol (get a new controller too please)

 

[Wenbobular]

Teching Dsmashes is really easy if you hug the wall, problem is you sometimes up-b into the rest of the move -____-

Moonwalking vs Sheik is really dumb. You should just grap the ledge -> stomp knee

I have no idea how to edgeguard spacies. You just have to go out there a lot of the time, or try ledgehop Uair but that never seems to cover the toward the ledge Firefox from above

 

[Leviathan741]

k ty guys. Anymore help would be appreciated.

 

[Leviathan741]

Need as much help as I can get.