critique my snake

[strike42]

me(snake) vs neo14(falco)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E5--GfwwMyY

me(snake) vs wolf(neo14)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sEfGSvO0yHk

me(snake) vs ike(neo14)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hDDV9o7LlmQ

me(snake) vs metaknight(neo14)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rb15LsxUZCQ

me(snake) vs rob(neo14)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UkEKrp2veXc

SNAKE(ME) VS WOLF(NEO14) 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nqvj0TSifE

SNAKE(ME) VS WOLF(NEO14) 3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EYXwWzC_2Gk

SNAKE(ME) VS WOLF(NEO14) 4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CGZLBmt9blc

SNAKE(ME) VS WOLF(NEO14) 5
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-EaCSWTxuI

SNAKE(ME) VS WOLF(NEO14) 6
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2K7pNyYWeDw

SNAKE(ME) VS WOLF(NEO14) 7
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C450D6APPQ







please share with me advice,what i did wrong, how i can improve and what i need to work on.

more will be posted later

note: i don't know why neo14 used so many different characters, he ushally uses wolf.
also if he gets pissed off he will just commit suicide.

 

[mr_kennedy44]

Good Snake. I think you need to use Snake's AAA combo a bit more often. I liked your use of crawling and dtilt (I didn't know that Falco's reflector could be crawled under). Good use of 'nades. All in all a good Snake. One question though, why did your opponent not bother to try and recover at the end?

 

[strike42]

oh he just gave up( he was pissed) thats why and thank you for the comments.

added another video, boy youtube takes a ling while to upload a video.

 

[abit_rusty]

Seems like you've got the handle on Snake pretty well. Off the top of my head maybe you should grenade counter more, against more aggressive falcos it's pretty critical. In addition, other Falcos will probably use illusion if they see you go prone, maybe you should tell that to your falco friend to give yourself more of a challenge?

Also don't forget to go for the uptilts in the 90's% if you want a quick kill

Still you've got a good Snake. Nice uair timing and nikita work.

 

[strike42]

thanks for the advice rusty, and i will tell my friend that though i don't know why he kept using different characters. he mains wolf so ya. also my snake vs wolf vid has been added.

 

[strike42]

metaknight and ike vids have been added, so review away.

 

[abit_rusty]

Lmao ...um I get the impression that your friend is a bit on the pissed off side. haha.

 

[strike42]

ya he gets that way when i beat him with snake. lol
also if its not too much trouble do ya think you could take a look at some of the other vis i have posted. mainly the wolf one if you have to time.

last vid posted until i can get him to play some more.

 

[mr_kennedy44]

Wow I thought that after seeing the first video that your Nikita usage could be better but after viewing the others I think its great now. Its too bad he just jumped off in the Meta Knight match, that was a good match up until then. My favourite part came when Ike was using Quick Draw to recover and your Nikita rocket caused him to stop and take a swing at it in mid-air, therefore gimping him.

 

[strike42]

ya i realy liked that meta match, it was fun until he killed himself. and thanks for the compliments on my nikita. is there anything that u think that i could of done better?

 

[abit_rusty]

ya i realy liked that meta match, it was fun until he killed himself. and thanks for the compliments on my nikita. is there anything that u think that i could of done better?

Right now, it seems like you overall demolish your friend. If you could somehow convince him to not give up so easily, instead try to improve (he certainly has room for it, no offense to him but I've gotten many a can of whoopass opened on me by falcos/wolves/metas), and finding counter strategies, it will in turn force you to find other creative ways to get around his counters instead of having the same routine over and over. Then it'll basically go back and forth that way until you both have very good games. That's how you'll both keep improving.

^Taken from personal experience and most likely everyone can agree.

 

[strike42]

O.k. I Have Added More Snake Vs Wolf Vids, Wolf Is His Main So I Would Like You Guys To Review These Vids If You Can.

 

[Cecilanius]

I really like these videos!

One thing I have noticed is that you seem to be a little too cocky with the nikita. <--(I'm not trying to offend you) What amazed me is that, sometimes it worked. But, It seems as if you let your nikita keep going even after the enemy dodges. When you tried turning it around, you usually got punished for it. I would just press R or L right when the nikita missile is right on top of the opponent just to be sure you have enough time to get out of the way of the opponent's attack.

What sometimes works is if you curve it up just a little bit and let it drop, the opponent will try to side-step dodge it. But, the side dodge only works for a small amount of time. So, when it drops it will hit right after the opponent dodges.

What else I have noticed is that your dodges don't look like they were beneficial (looking at the second video of the wolf fights.) Your shield was deteriorating very quickly. If you were facing someone like Marth, he would break your shield pretty quickly. Just like how in my video, my friend broke my shield twice...and thankfully...it only cost one stock. Your air dodging should be improved. You got juggled a lot by trying to use neutral a and hoping it would work. You should also use more side-step dodging. But, some of Wolf's attacks just ignore the side-step dodge like the over tilt. I hate that attack. I would just try to see if the dodges work because you seem to play with your friend a lot.

Other than that, great job! I really liked the work you did with your up-air. You actually made me not as worried to use it more often.

Good luck to you!

 

[strike42]

Cecilanius: thanks for the advice, i know that i should drop the nikita sooner it's just that i still think it's like melee where you can just tap the button to drop it. also thanks for the nikita and shield/dogging ideas.

more should be uploaded later.

 

[strike42]

anyone else?

 

[Cecilanius]

More advice? Hmm...Give your friend a hug! Tell him, "Good match!" after each match.

 

[strike42]

i think i should b/c out of the 20 something games we played he only won 3 times and that was eather because i was tired or i royally screwed up.