Critique my link please !!!!

[m007allred]

Can All you guys please critique me playing as link!!!!
Heres the link to the video on youtube. Hopefully it works.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qMj7sCWhbDs











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[Onomanic]

Didn't you already make a thread for this? -.-

 

[m007allred]

Yeah I did, it was a couple weeks ago. Sorry, Im new to this website, still trying to figure things out.
What did you think of my link, Ive seen yours. I trust your opinion.

 

[Anonano]

First off, your Link is pretty good.
But, you need to not play CPU's. Play friends, WiFi, etc., but CPU's play nothing like how a human does, and although we really want to help you... we can't say anything about how you'd do against a human player, especially competitively.
If you want I could play some WiFi matches against you that you can record (just set the matches to 3 or 4 minutes so that even if we go over you can still record them). This way you can post some matches against another human player and we can all give you advice up here. I can also give you some personal pointers that way too.

 

[Onomanic]

More projectiles, less aerial Up B. You should have made a vid with person though. Play some wifi with someone (not me, I don't play Wifi/can't play Wifi). You'll learn.

 

[m007allred]

Alright, sounds great Anonano!! Im Not next to my wii now, to get the friend codes, I'll get them later today an post them on my page.

 

[Anonano]

Alright, you can just PM your FC to me. If you don't know how to do that, then just click on my name on this post, and click the option "Send a private message to Anonano." That's if you don't care whether anybody else can see it.
Naturally my FC is underneath my name on the left.

I'm available whenever you are.

EDIT: If you don't know how to find your FC on your SSBB, connect to WiFi, go to With Friends, and then click the Friend Roster. Your FC should be at the top (as well as options for putting mean things to taunt me with, like "Fruitcake" and "LOL Ano sux").

And I'll use other characters besides Link. I actually gave Havokk's Pit a nice feel of my Ike a little while ago--the only battle I won, BTW.

EDIT 2: I just found out my parents took my Wii away (again) so we can't do it today... But maybe Monday night? I'm pretty sure I could get it back for a half hour or so then.

 

[sasook]

The first thing, before all else, I would say is to work on your movement. There were a lot of times when you just stood still. Keep moving with Link, always.

 

[Linkforce]

...And just for the record. Of all the CPU's, don't fight Ike.

CPU Ike is freaking ********. Seriously, he doesn't even try to recover..