Chris Lionheart
Smash Champion
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REVIEWS BY REQUEST
From this point on, all reviews are by request only. To request a review pm my account, Chris Lionheart on Smashboards. Thanks to this, I will make higher quality reviews. If your moveset was reviewed previously, then you can find your review here. http://www.freewebs.com/chris-lionheart/
I will still be judging on the same concepts, but I will follow the school standard (modified to accomidate S rank.)
0-66=F
67-75=D
76-85=C
86-93=B
94-100=A
101-119%=A+
120+%+=S
This system is experimental so I may have to adjust values, but currently each area is worth the following:
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
(present, COLORED, and effective)
Text- 5%
(Properly spaced, not a white wall)
Logical Order- 2%
(Is everything logically placed. Are all A attacks in one section?)
Completeness- 20%
Are all the A moves there- 10%
Are all the B moves there- 5%
Are the grabs there- 3%
Is the Final Smash there- 2%
Detail- 30%
Damage Percentages- 5%
(attacks worth 2%, specials worth 2%, etc.)
Knockback- 5%
(moves must have a general knockback amount)
Range- 5%
(How far does the move reach? Can be general.)
Speed- 5%
(Is it very slow, slow, medium, fast, very fast, etc.)
Visuals- 5%
(What does each move look like?)
Other properties- 5%
(List anything else. Priority, sticker effects, etc.)
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
(Are all the moves based on another character? See Squall Leonhart as a perfect example of what NOT to do.)
Backstory- 5%
(Tell me about this character and what makes him/her/it/rock unique.)
Creativity- 5%
(Are there any unique moves, properties, etc. that make your character stand out?)
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
(Don't make your character overpowered. Again see Squall Leonhart as a perfect example of what NOT to do.)
Underpowered?- 10%
(Try not to make your character overly underpowered. A little underpoweredness is okay and I won't take off for it, as it prevents overpoweredness but a lot turns your character into Brawl's Captain Falcon.)
Extras- 10%-42%
Stage- 5%
(Is it present? Is it original? Is it detailed? What songs play in the background? Songs make 2% of the grade.)
Boss- 5%
(Is a boss present? Is it original? Is it detailed?)
SSE Role- 1-3%
(If one is present you earn one point. If it is original you earn another. If it is detailed you earn 3 points.)
Codec Conversation- 1%
(If one is present you earn one point.)
Kirby Hat- 1-2%
(If one is present, you earn a point. If you are creative enough to make a picture, you earn another.)
Taunts- 3%
(Are all 3 taunts present.)
Victory Pose- 1-3%
(One point for every victory pose.)
Trophies- 1-2%
(One point- present. One point- detailed)
Stickers- 1%
(Present?)
Event Matches- 1%
(Present?)
Items/Assist Trophies/Poke'balls/Etc.- 1-2%
(Are any of these present? Are they detailed?)
Pros/Cons List- 1%
(Present?)
Play Style- 1-2%
(Is it there? Is it decent?)
Alternate Colors- 1-2%
(Present? Pictures?)
Stats- 3%
(Present?)
Picture- 5%
(Present?)
Other- 1%
(Anything present?)
This means that there is a total of 142 possible points. The 10 required points for extras can be made up of anything. Anything beyond that is bonus. Movesets will be sorted by owner.
The Great Panda:
Isaac (Golden Sun)- By the Great Panda
Organization- 7%
Headers- Present, Uncolored, Effective (2 out of 3%)
Logical Placement- Logical Order, A attacks not well seperated. (1 out of 2%)
Text- Properly spaced. Mostly white. Decent. (4 out of 5%)
Completeness- 20%
A Attacks- Present (10 out of 10%)
Specials- Present (5 out of 5%)
Grabs- Present (3 out of 3%)
Final Smash- Present (2 out of 2%)
Detail- 15%
Damage Percentages- Present (5 out of 5%)
Knockback- Not present (0 out of 5%)
Range- Not present (0 out of 5%)
Speed- Not present (0 out of 5%)
Visuals- Present (5 out of 5%)
Other Properties- Present, atleast somewhat (5 out of 5%)
Originality- 15%
Moves- The A attacks are unique enough. The B attacks are true to the character. ( 10 out of 10%)
Backstory- No backstory present. (0 out of 5%)
Creativity- Alot of the moves have interesting properties, particulary Nair and Dair. (5 out of 5%)
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- Nothing really screams overpowered (10 Out of 10%)
Underpowered?- Nothing really screams underpowered (10 Out of 10%)
Extras- 25%
Stage- Present, detailed, original, songs included. (5%)
Boss- Not present (0%)
SSE Role- Not present (0%)
Picture- Present (5%)
Alternate Colors- Present? Yes. Pictures? No. (1%)
Taunts- Check! (3%)
Victory Poses- Check. (3%)
Stickers- Check (1%)
Trophies- Present? Check. Detailed? Not really, as no story descriptions are included. (1%)
Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/Items/Etc.- Present? Yes. Detailed? Not really. (1%)
Pros/Cons- Not present. (0%)
Stats- (3%)
Play Style- (0%)
Codec Conversation- (1%)
Other- (1%)
Total- 102%
Rank- A+
Genesis- By The Great Panda
Organization- 8%
Headers- Present, Uncolored, Effective (2 out of 3%)
Logical Placement- Logical order, A attacks not well seperated. (1 out of 2%)
Text- Properly spaced, colored (5 out of 5%)
Completeness- 20%
A attacks- Present. (10%)
B Attacks- Present (5%)
Grabs- Check (3%)
Final Smash- Check (2%)
Detail- 15%
Damage percentages- Check (5%)
Speed- Nope (0%)
Knockback- Only on a few moves. Must be on every move. (0%)
Reach- Not on every attack. (0%)
Visuals- Check (5%)
Other Properties- Check (5%)
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- Despite degradation, he starts out really powerful. His Final Smash leaves no survivors?! (0%)
Underpowered?- No (10%)
Originality- 15%
Moves- The moves are certainly true to the character. (10%)
Backstory- Though some extras contain slight details about him, no formal backstory is present. (0%)
Creativity- Degradation is very interesting. Like Lucario in reverse but so much worse. (5%)
Extras- 29%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included (5%)
Boss- Nope (0%)
Stats- Present, even though they are broken. (3%)
Pros/Cons- Not present (0%)
Play Style- Not present (0%)
Trophies- Present, yes. Detailed, yes. (2%)
Taunts- Present (3%)
Victory Poses- Present (3%)
Codec Conversation- (1%)
Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/Items/Etc.- (0%)
Colors- Present, No pictures (1%)
Picture- (5%)
Kirby Hat- (1%)
Stickers- (1%)
Event Matches- (1%)
Others- (1%)
Total- 97%
Rank- A
TWILTHERO:
Sagi- By TWILTHERO
Organization- 10%
Headers- Present, Colored, Effective (3%)
Logical Placement- Logical order, A attacks well seperated (2%)
Text- Properly spaced, colored (5%)
Completion- 20%
A attacks- (10%)
B attacks- (5%)
Grabs- (3%)
Final Smash- (2%)
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Speed- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Range- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- Not that I can tell. 10%
Underpowered?- Not that I can tell. 10%
Originality- 20%
Moves- The moves are clever and true to the character. The power level on Neutral B is good. 10%
Backstory- There is a comprehensive backstory on the character. 5%
Creativity- I haven't played the game, but it seems that you have an impressive show of a unique character. 5%
Extras- 34%
Stage-Present, Detailed, Songs included. (5%)
Boss- 5%
Trophies- 2%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Items/Poke'balls/Assist Trophy's/etc.- 1%
Subspace Emissary- 3%
Stickers- 1%
Stats- 3%
Pros/Cons- 1%
Kirby Hat- Absolutely awesome 2%
Picture- 5%
Other- 1%
Total- 134%
Rank- S
Comments- A near perfect example of what a moveset should be.
Leonardo
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10
Specials- 5
Grabs- 3
Final Smash- 2
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
No.
Underpowered?- 10%
No.
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
You've done everything that could be done with a ninja turtle, and probably more.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
The layout was interesting, the assist trophy was made of win, a lot of the moves were true to the character.
Extras- 23%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
SSE Role- 3%
Trophies- 2%
Kirby Hat- 0%
Codec- 1%
Colors- 0%
Playstyle- 2%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Items/Assist Trophies/Poke'balls/etc.- 1% (Epic, epic win on the assist trophy.)
Total- 113%
Rank- A+
*Comments- Good as always. You might want to work on the extras though.
TheSundanceKid:
Ty the Tasmanian Tiger- By TheSundanceKid
Organization- 9%
Headers- Present, Colored, Somewhat effective (3%)
Logical Placement- Logically placed. A attacks should be seperated. (1%)
Text- Colored. Well spaced. 5%
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
B attacks- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- Present for the most part. 5%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Originality-10%
Moves- Many moves are copied from another character. Some moves are interesting though. (5%)
Backstory- 0%
Creativity- I haven't played the game, but it looks like you've done everything you could with what you had. 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- Hard to tell without proper stats. 5%
Underpowered?- Hard to tell without proper stats. 5%
*I'll give you half way here.
Extras- 24%
Stage- Included, decently detailed, songs included. 5%
Boss- 0%
Picture- 5%
Stats- 3%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Play Style- 0%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Pose- 3%
Items/Assist Trophies/Poke'balls/etc.- 1%
Colors- Included. No pictures. 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 93%
Rank- B
Smashbot 226:
Sol- By Smashbot 226
Organization- 10%
Headers- Present, Colored, Effective 3%
Logical Placement- Logical Order, A attacks somewhat seperated. 2%
Text- Colored, Well Spaced 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
B Attacks- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 24%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- Present on attacks, but missing on grabs and aerials. 3%
Knockback- Present on attacks, missing on grabs. 4%
Speed- Present on some moves, missing on others. 3%
Reach- Present on a good number of moves, but not all. 4%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- 0%
A lot of things seem a bit overpowered. His Dair is both faster and stronger (and overall more useful) than its cousin, Sheik's Dair. The Final Smash instant kills (though this might not be so bad if the move was better described.)
Underpowered?- 10%
Well he certainly isn't underpowered.
Originality- 3%
Moves- 1%
A lot of the attacks seem stolen. Uair is clearly CF's. Dair is like Sheik's only better. Side B is very similar to Falcon Punch. Up Special is somewhat like Fire Fox, (but it is different enough to be tolerable). Grand Viper is clearly based off of the Falcon Kick. Neutral B is the only original special. The Final Smash sounds kind of like Tabuu's Off-Waves, except that Sol is vulnerable. Bair sounds like a long reach, low knockback version of Pit's Bair. Fair is similar to Snake's Fair. You are using a Punch, Kick combo (atleast it isn't Punch, Punch, Kick.)
Backstory- 0%
Not included.
Creativity- 2%
A lot of the are either stolen moves or are really generic. Not a lot of interesting mechanics. You did, however show creativity in your SSE Role.
Extras- 19%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Picture- 5%
SSE Role- Present, original, detailed. 3%
Victory Poses- Two out of Three. 2%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Taunts- 3%
Stats- 3%
Alternate Outfit- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 96%
Rank- A
*Comments- Needs more creativity. Include more extras.
Chief Mendez:
Simon Belmont- By Chief Mendez
Organization- 10%
Headers- Colored, Effective. 3%
Logical Placement- Properly spaced. A attacks well seperated. 2%
Text- Colored, Well Spaced. 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs/Throws- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 26%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- Not present on many attacks. 1%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- Definitely not. 10%
Undpowered?- Not really. He is a strong but slow by the looks of it (and doesn't absolutely dominate that category either.) 10%
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
Probably one of the most creative (in function) neutral A moves I have ever seen. He is certainly not like anyone currently in Smash.
Backstory- 5%
Not the best I've ever seen, but still really good.
Creativity- 5%
A lot of interesting features make Simon a great moveset.
Extras- 27%
Pictures- 5%
Stage- Present, Detailed, Songs Included. 5%
Boss- Couldn't Dracula make a good boss? 0%
Stickers- 1%
Stats- 3%
Trophies- 2%
Alternate Outfits- Very very nice. 2%
Items/Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/etc. 1%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Victory Poses- 3%
Taunts- 3%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Total- 123%
Rank- S
*Comments-
The highest scoring moveset thus far. Such quality is to be expected of Mendez.
dancingfrogman
Miles "Tails" Prower
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Present, colored, effective.
Logical Placement- 2%
Text in a logical order, a attacks well seperated.
Text- 5%
Well spaced, colored.
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
*Comment- Pictures really helped.
Damage Percentages- 5%
They are present but please put at the end of each description for easy reference.
Speed-5%
Knockback- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
Nope.
Underpowered?- 10%
He is really light, but not particularly underpowered.
Originality- 20%
Attacks- 10%
A lot of great attacks like the Magic Hook. Great job.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
A lot of work was put into extras and making this moveset stand out... the attacks look fun to use. What more can I say?
Extras- 33%
Picture- 5%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included. 5%
Boss- None.... 0%
SSE Role- 3%
Trophies- Amazing job here. 2%
Stats- 3%
Kirby Hat- Picture included. 2%
Codec- 1%
Event Matches- 1%
Items/Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/etc.- 1%
Stickers- 1%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Colors- 1%
Pros and Cons- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 123%
Rank- S
Comments- Very nice effort. You tied with Mendez =).
Meadow
Bard
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Present, colored, effective.
Logical Placement- 2%
Good order, A attacks seperated.
Text- 5%
Well spaced, colored.
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
*Comments- You did an amazing job in the detail department.
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?-
For all the detail you put, nothing seems really overpowered. 10%
Underpowered?-
I'm not sure... if she is, then it is negligible. 10%
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
A lot of these moves seem really fun, or atleast out of the ordinary. I would definitely play as this character.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
Everything from the moves to the layout seems pretty well done and creative.
Extras- 30%
Picture- 5%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included. 5%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Alternate Costumes- Present and pictured. 2%
Trophies- Present and detailed. 2%
Items/Poke'ball/Assist Trophy/Etc.- 1%
SSE Role- Present, original, and reasonably decent. 3%
Pros and Cons- 1%
Playstyle- 2%
Stats- 3%
Total- 120%
Rank- S
*Comments- Amazing job for a new contestant.... actually amazing job for anyone. I look forward to seeing more from you. Great detail in the moveset itself. I noticed that the moveset isn't quite finished, so maximize your score by including as many extras as possible.
Akiak
Goomba- By Akiak
Organization- 6%
Headers- 2%
Well they are there and they are effective... needs color.
Logical Placement- 2%
Logical order.... A attacks very well seperated.
Text- 2%
Somewhat spaced. Not colored.
Completion- 19%
A attacks- 9%
Dash attack?
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
Not really.
Underpowered?- 10%
No.
Originality- 17%
Moves- 10%
Well, you did well for such a generic character.
Backstory- 2%
.... That description can hardly be considered a story.
Creativity- 5%
Again.... you've done a fair amount with so little.
Extras- 17%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Play Style- 0%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Codec- 1%
Alternate Colors- 1%
Items/Poke'balls/Assist Trophies/Etc.- 0%
Other- 0%
Total- 93%
Rank- B
*Comments- A good start, but you'll need a lot more than that.
Shy Guy- By Akiak
Organization- 7%
Headers- 2%
Not colored.
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 3%
No colors....
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 25%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5% (For future reference, please put the damage percentages at the end of each attack).
Speed- 0%
Reach- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
The Down Smash is a bit questionable (is it the same as a regular Bomb-Omb?) but overall nothing seems particularly broken.
Underpowered?- 10%
No.
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
I'm not really sure if the moves are true to the character, but they sure as hell are creative.
Backstory- 5%
I suppose that counts as a backstory....
Creativity- 5%
A lot of interesting moves and visuals.
Extras- 20%
Picture- 5%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Pose- 3%
Alternate Colors- 1%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Stats- 3%
Playstyle- 2%
Codec- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 112%
Rank- A+
BKupa666
Tiggah
*Comments- Ewww.... a gangster version of Tigger..... if it wasn't my job to review this... I wouldn't.
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 15%
Overpowered?- 5%
The neutral special seems a bit overpowered. The stats seem a tad overpowered as well... but nothing blatant.
Underpowered?- 10%
Definitely not.
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
The moves are creative (yet so horribly innappropriate.. this game is rated T not M!)
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
Unfortunately... I have to be fair and say that the obscenities here are unlike anything in Brawl....
Extras- 30%
Picture- 5%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included. 5%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
Pros and Cons- 1%
Trophies- 2%
SSE Role- Present, Original, Detailed. 3%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Colors- 1%
Codec- 1%
Assist Trophies/Items/Poke'balls/etc.- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 125%
Rank- S
*Comments- Absolutely painful to read, but the moveset deserves a good score.
Shadow5567
Zero
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 15%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 0%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- 5%
The Final Smash for normal zero looks a tad broken but I'm not really sure. You need to include the proper stats on everything or it is impossible to judge balance.
Underpowered?- 5%
Again necessary stats aren't included. Also the double damage from spikes seems like a unnecessary weakness.
Originality- 14%
Moves- 9%
A lot of the moves seem like generic sword slashes, though some of them are rather interesting. I'll be lenient (sp?).
Backstory- 0%
Why didn't you include one? Seriously its like a free 5 points.
Creativity- 5%
The Black Zero and Absolute Zero transformation mechanics are interesting. You earned these points.
Extras- 21%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
SSE Role- 3%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Codec- 1%
Colors- 1%
Stats- 3%
Other- 1%
Total- 90%
Rank- B
*Comments- Your extras section really needs work. Add reach, knockback, and speed to EVERY attack. Don't take my review to harshly, because you can always request a re-score after you add more details and extras to the moveset.
Gryphon
Saki Amamiya
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- 5%
Impossible to tell without Attack Speed and Reach. Half credit.
Underpowered?- 5%
Impossible to tell without Attack Speed and Reach. Half credit.
Originality- 15%
Moves- 5%
A lot of the moves seem like rip-offs of other character's moves, but they have considerable differences. Notice that similar to *insert other character's move* was on every special.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
Despite the similarities, the up special was quite unique. Some of the attacks were okay. You even added sticker effects.
Extras- 14%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
SSE Role- 0%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 0%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Playstyle- 1% (that Gryphon's Version of Saki can hardly be considered a "playstyle".)
Kirby Hat- 0%
Colors- 0%
Codec- 1%
Items/Assist/Trophy/Poke'ball/etc.- 0%
Other- 1%
Total- 89%
Rank- B
*Comments- It's not bad.... but it could be a LOT better. The attack creativity was weak. The extras section was hardly even notable. You need to improve on these areas. You also didn't add attack speed and range both to the stats and to EVERY attack, automatically taking away 10% from detail and 10% from Balance. Remember that I'm not insulting you, but merely giving you some constructive criticism.
REVIEWS BY REQUEST
From this point on, all reviews are by request only. To request a review pm my account, Chris Lionheart on Smashboards. Thanks to this, I will make higher quality reviews. If your moveset was reviewed previously, then you can find your review here. http://www.freewebs.com/chris-lionheart/
I will still be judging on the same concepts, but I will follow the school standard (modified to accomidate S rank.)
0-66=F
67-75=D
76-85=C
86-93=B
94-100=A
101-119%=A+
120+%+=S
This system is experimental so I may have to adjust values, but currently each area is worth the following:
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
(present, COLORED, and effective)
Text- 5%
(Properly spaced, not a white wall)
Logical Order- 2%
(Is everything logically placed. Are all A attacks in one section?)
Completeness- 20%
Are all the A moves there- 10%
Are all the B moves there- 5%
Are the grabs there- 3%
Is the Final Smash there- 2%
Detail- 30%
Damage Percentages- 5%
(attacks worth 2%, specials worth 2%, etc.)
Knockback- 5%
(moves must have a general knockback amount)
Range- 5%
(How far does the move reach? Can be general.)
Speed- 5%
(Is it very slow, slow, medium, fast, very fast, etc.)
Visuals- 5%
(What does each move look like?)
Other properties- 5%
(List anything else. Priority, sticker effects, etc.)
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
(Are all the moves based on another character? See Squall Leonhart as a perfect example of what NOT to do.)
Backstory- 5%
(Tell me about this character and what makes him/her/it/rock unique.)
Creativity- 5%
(Are there any unique moves, properties, etc. that make your character stand out?)
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
(Don't make your character overpowered. Again see Squall Leonhart as a perfect example of what NOT to do.)
Underpowered?- 10%
(Try not to make your character overly underpowered. A little underpoweredness is okay and I won't take off for it, as it prevents overpoweredness but a lot turns your character into Brawl's Captain Falcon.)
Extras- 10%-42%
Stage- 5%
(Is it present? Is it original? Is it detailed? What songs play in the background? Songs make 2% of the grade.)
Boss- 5%
(Is a boss present? Is it original? Is it detailed?)
SSE Role- 1-3%
(If one is present you earn one point. If it is original you earn another. If it is detailed you earn 3 points.)
Codec Conversation- 1%
(If one is present you earn one point.)
Kirby Hat- 1-2%
(If one is present, you earn a point. If you are creative enough to make a picture, you earn another.)
Taunts- 3%
(Are all 3 taunts present.)
Victory Pose- 1-3%
(One point for every victory pose.)
Trophies- 1-2%
(One point- present. One point- detailed)
Stickers- 1%
(Present?)
Event Matches- 1%
(Present?)
Items/Assist Trophies/Poke'balls/Etc.- 1-2%
(Are any of these present? Are they detailed?)
Pros/Cons List- 1%
(Present?)
Play Style- 1-2%
(Is it there? Is it decent?)
Alternate Colors- 1-2%
(Present? Pictures?)
Stats- 3%
(Present?)
Picture- 5%
(Present?)
Other- 1%
(Anything present?)
This means that there is a total of 142 possible points. The 10 required points for extras can be made up of anything. Anything beyond that is bonus. Movesets will be sorted by owner.
The Great Panda:
Isaac (Golden Sun)- By the Great Panda
Organization- 7%
Headers- Present, Uncolored, Effective (2 out of 3%)
Logical Placement- Logical Order, A attacks not well seperated. (1 out of 2%)
Text- Properly spaced. Mostly white. Decent. (4 out of 5%)
Completeness- 20%
A Attacks- Present (10 out of 10%)
Specials- Present (5 out of 5%)
Grabs- Present (3 out of 3%)
Final Smash- Present (2 out of 2%)
Detail- 15%
Damage Percentages- Present (5 out of 5%)
Knockback- Not present (0 out of 5%)
Range- Not present (0 out of 5%)
Speed- Not present (0 out of 5%)
Visuals- Present (5 out of 5%)
Other Properties- Present, atleast somewhat (5 out of 5%)
Originality- 15%
Moves- The A attacks are unique enough. The B attacks are true to the character. ( 10 out of 10%)
Backstory- No backstory present. (0 out of 5%)
Creativity- Alot of the moves have interesting properties, particulary Nair and Dair. (5 out of 5%)
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- Nothing really screams overpowered (10 Out of 10%)
Underpowered?- Nothing really screams underpowered (10 Out of 10%)
Extras- 25%
Stage- Present, detailed, original, songs included. (5%)
Boss- Not present (0%)
SSE Role- Not present (0%)
Picture- Present (5%)
Alternate Colors- Present? Yes. Pictures? No. (1%)
Taunts- Check! (3%)
Victory Poses- Check. (3%)
Stickers- Check (1%)
Trophies- Present? Check. Detailed? Not really, as no story descriptions are included. (1%)
Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/Items/Etc.- Present? Yes. Detailed? Not really. (1%)
Pros/Cons- Not present. (0%)
Stats- (3%)
Play Style- (0%)
Codec Conversation- (1%)
Other- (1%)
Total- 102%
Rank- A+
Genesis- By The Great Panda
Organization- 8%
Headers- Present, Uncolored, Effective (2 out of 3%)
Logical Placement- Logical order, A attacks not well seperated. (1 out of 2%)
Text- Properly spaced, colored (5 out of 5%)
Completeness- 20%
A attacks- Present. (10%)
B Attacks- Present (5%)
Grabs- Check (3%)
Final Smash- Check (2%)
Detail- 15%
Damage percentages- Check (5%)
Speed- Nope (0%)
Knockback- Only on a few moves. Must be on every move. (0%)
Reach- Not on every attack. (0%)
Visuals- Check (5%)
Other Properties- Check (5%)
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- Despite degradation, he starts out really powerful. His Final Smash leaves no survivors?! (0%)
Underpowered?- No (10%)
Originality- 15%
Moves- The moves are certainly true to the character. (10%)
Backstory- Though some extras contain slight details about him, no formal backstory is present. (0%)
Creativity- Degradation is very interesting. Like Lucario in reverse but so much worse. (5%)
Extras- 29%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included (5%)
Boss- Nope (0%)
Stats- Present, even though they are broken. (3%)
Pros/Cons- Not present (0%)
Play Style- Not present (0%)
Trophies- Present, yes. Detailed, yes. (2%)
Taunts- Present (3%)
Victory Poses- Present (3%)
Codec Conversation- (1%)
Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/Items/Etc.- (0%)
Colors- Present, No pictures (1%)
Picture- (5%)
Kirby Hat- (1%)
Stickers- (1%)
Event Matches- (1%)
Others- (1%)
Total- 97%
Rank- A
TWILTHERO:
Sagi- By TWILTHERO
Organization- 10%
Headers- Present, Colored, Effective (3%)
Logical Placement- Logical order, A attacks well seperated (2%)
Text- Properly spaced, colored (5%)
Completion- 20%
A attacks- (10%)
B attacks- (5%)
Grabs- (3%)
Final Smash- (2%)
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Speed- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Range- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- Not that I can tell. 10%
Underpowered?- Not that I can tell. 10%
Originality- 20%
Moves- The moves are clever and true to the character. The power level on Neutral B is good. 10%
Backstory- There is a comprehensive backstory on the character. 5%
Creativity- I haven't played the game, but it seems that you have an impressive show of a unique character. 5%
Extras- 34%
Stage-Present, Detailed, Songs included. (5%)
Boss- 5%
Trophies- 2%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Items/Poke'balls/Assist Trophy's/etc.- 1%
Subspace Emissary- 3%
Stickers- 1%
Stats- 3%
Pros/Cons- 1%
Kirby Hat- Absolutely awesome 2%
Picture- 5%
Other- 1%
Total- 134%
Rank- S
Comments- A near perfect example of what a moveset should be.
Leonardo
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10
Specials- 5
Grabs- 3
Final Smash- 2
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
No.
Underpowered?- 10%
No.
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
You've done everything that could be done with a ninja turtle, and probably more.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
The layout was interesting, the assist trophy was made of win, a lot of the moves were true to the character.
Extras- 23%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
SSE Role- 3%
Trophies- 2%
Kirby Hat- 0%
Codec- 1%
Colors- 0%
Playstyle- 2%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Items/Assist Trophies/Poke'balls/etc.- 1% (Epic, epic win on the assist trophy.)
Total- 113%
Rank- A+
*Comments- Good as always. You might want to work on the extras though.
TheSundanceKid:
Ty the Tasmanian Tiger- By TheSundanceKid
Organization- 9%
Headers- Present, Colored, Somewhat effective (3%)
Logical Placement- Logically placed. A attacks should be seperated. (1%)
Text- Colored. Well spaced. 5%
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
B attacks- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- Present for the most part. 5%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Originality-10%
Moves- Many moves are copied from another character. Some moves are interesting though. (5%)
Backstory- 0%
Creativity- I haven't played the game, but it looks like you've done everything you could with what you had. 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- Hard to tell without proper stats. 5%
Underpowered?- Hard to tell without proper stats. 5%
*I'll give you half way here.
Extras- 24%
Stage- Included, decently detailed, songs included. 5%
Boss- 0%
Picture- 5%
Stats- 3%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Play Style- 0%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Pose- 3%
Items/Assist Trophies/Poke'balls/etc.- 1%
Colors- Included. No pictures. 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 93%
Rank- B
Smashbot 226:
Sol- By Smashbot 226
Organization- 10%
Headers- Present, Colored, Effective 3%
Logical Placement- Logical Order, A attacks somewhat seperated. 2%
Text- Colored, Well Spaced 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
B Attacks- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 24%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- Present on attacks, but missing on grabs and aerials. 3%
Knockback- Present on attacks, missing on grabs. 4%
Speed- Present on some moves, missing on others. 3%
Reach- Present on a good number of moves, but not all. 4%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- 0%
A lot of things seem a bit overpowered. His Dair is both faster and stronger (and overall more useful) than its cousin, Sheik's Dair. The Final Smash instant kills (though this might not be so bad if the move was better described.)
Underpowered?- 10%
Well he certainly isn't underpowered.
Originality- 3%
Moves- 1%
A lot of the attacks seem stolen. Uair is clearly CF's. Dair is like Sheik's only better. Side B is very similar to Falcon Punch. Up Special is somewhat like Fire Fox, (but it is different enough to be tolerable). Grand Viper is clearly based off of the Falcon Kick. Neutral B is the only original special. The Final Smash sounds kind of like Tabuu's Off-Waves, except that Sol is vulnerable. Bair sounds like a long reach, low knockback version of Pit's Bair. Fair is similar to Snake's Fair. You are using a Punch, Kick combo (atleast it isn't Punch, Punch, Kick.)
Backstory- 0%
Not included.
Creativity- 2%
A lot of the are either stolen moves or are really generic. Not a lot of interesting mechanics. You did, however show creativity in your SSE Role.
Extras- 19%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Picture- 5%
SSE Role- Present, original, detailed. 3%
Victory Poses- Two out of Three. 2%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Taunts- 3%
Stats- 3%
Alternate Outfit- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 96%
Rank- A
*Comments- Needs more creativity. Include more extras.
Chief Mendez:
Simon Belmont- By Chief Mendez
Organization- 10%
Headers- Colored, Effective. 3%
Logical Placement- Properly spaced. A attacks well seperated. 2%
Text- Colored, Well Spaced. 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs/Throws- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 26%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- Not present on many attacks. 1%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- Definitely not. 10%
Undpowered?- Not really. He is a strong but slow by the looks of it (and doesn't absolutely dominate that category either.) 10%
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
Probably one of the most creative (in function) neutral A moves I have ever seen. He is certainly not like anyone currently in Smash.
Backstory- 5%
Not the best I've ever seen, but still really good.
Creativity- 5%
A lot of interesting features make Simon a great moveset.
Extras- 27%
Pictures- 5%
Stage- Present, Detailed, Songs Included. 5%
Boss- Couldn't Dracula make a good boss? 0%
Stickers- 1%
Stats- 3%
Trophies- 2%
Alternate Outfits- Very very nice. 2%
Items/Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/etc. 1%
Codec Conversation- 1%
Victory Poses- 3%
Taunts- 3%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Total- 123%
Rank- S
*Comments-
The highest scoring moveset thus far. Such quality is to be expected of Mendez.
dancingfrogman
Miles "Tails" Prower
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Present, colored, effective.
Logical Placement- 2%
Text in a logical order, a attacks well seperated.
Text- 5%
Well spaced, colored.
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
*Comment- Pictures really helped.
Damage Percentages- 5%
They are present but please put at the end of each description for easy reference.
Speed-5%
Knockback- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
Nope.
Underpowered?- 10%
He is really light, but not particularly underpowered.
Originality- 20%
Attacks- 10%
A lot of great attacks like the Magic Hook. Great job.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
A lot of work was put into extras and making this moveset stand out... the attacks look fun to use. What more can I say?
Extras- 33%
Picture- 5%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included. 5%
Boss- None.... 0%
SSE Role- 3%
Trophies- Amazing job here. 2%
Stats- 3%
Kirby Hat- Picture included. 2%
Codec- 1%
Event Matches- 1%
Items/Assist Trophy/Poke'ball/etc.- 1%
Stickers- 1%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Colors- 1%
Pros and Cons- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 123%
Rank- S
Comments- Very nice effort. You tied with Mendez =).
Meadow
Bard
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Present, colored, effective.
Logical Placement- 2%
Good order, A attacks seperated.
Text- 5%
Well spaced, colored.
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
*Comments- You did an amazing job in the detail department.
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?-
For all the detail you put, nothing seems really overpowered. 10%
Underpowered?-
I'm not sure... if she is, then it is negligible. 10%
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
A lot of these moves seem really fun, or atleast out of the ordinary. I would definitely play as this character.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
Everything from the moves to the layout seems pretty well done and creative.
Extras- 30%
Picture- 5%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included. 5%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Alternate Costumes- Present and pictured. 2%
Trophies- Present and detailed. 2%
Items/Poke'ball/Assist Trophy/Etc.- 1%
SSE Role- Present, original, and reasonably decent. 3%
Pros and Cons- 1%
Playstyle- 2%
Stats- 3%
Total- 120%
Rank- S
*Comments- Amazing job for a new contestant.... actually amazing job for anyone. I look forward to seeing more from you. Great detail in the moveset itself. I noticed that the moveset isn't quite finished, so maximize your score by including as many extras as possible.
Akiak
Goomba- By Akiak
Organization- 6%
Headers- 2%
Well they are there and they are effective... needs color.
Logical Placement- 2%
Logical order.... A attacks very well seperated.
Text- 2%
Somewhat spaced. Not colored.
Completion- 19%
A attacks- 9%
Dash attack?
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
Not really.
Underpowered?- 10%
No.
Originality- 17%
Moves- 10%
Well, you did well for such a generic character.
Backstory- 2%
.... That description can hardly be considered a story.
Creativity- 5%
Again.... you've done a fair amount with so little.
Extras- 17%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Play Style- 0%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Codec- 1%
Alternate Colors- 1%
Items/Poke'balls/Assist Trophies/Etc.- 0%
Other- 0%
Total- 93%
Rank- B
*Comments- A good start, but you'll need a lot more than that.
Shy Guy- By Akiak
Organization- 7%
Headers- 2%
Not colored.
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 3%
No colors....
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 25%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5% (For future reference, please put the damage percentages at the end of each attack).
Speed- 0%
Reach- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 20%
Overpowered?- 10%
The Down Smash is a bit questionable (is it the same as a regular Bomb-Omb?) but overall nothing seems particularly broken.
Underpowered?- 10%
No.
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
I'm not really sure if the moves are true to the character, but they sure as hell are creative.
Backstory- 5%
I suppose that counts as a backstory....
Creativity- 5%
A lot of interesting moves and visuals.
Extras- 20%
Picture- 5%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Pose- 3%
Alternate Colors- 1%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Stats- 3%
Playstyle- 2%
Codec- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 112%
Rank- A+
BKupa666
Tiggah
*Comments- Ewww.... a gangster version of Tigger..... if it wasn't my job to review this... I wouldn't.
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 30%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 5%
Reach- 5%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 15%
Overpowered?- 5%
The neutral special seems a bit overpowered. The stats seem a tad overpowered as well... but nothing blatant.
Underpowered?- 10%
Definitely not.
Originality- 20%
Moves- 10%
The moves are creative (yet so horribly innappropriate.. this game is rated T not M!)
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
Unfortunately... I have to be fair and say that the obscenities here are unlike anything in Brawl....
Extras- 30%
Picture- 5%
Stage- Present, detailed, songs included. 5%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
Pros and Cons- 1%
Trophies- 2%
SSE Role- Present, Original, Detailed. 3%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Colors- 1%
Codec- 1%
Assist Trophies/Items/Poke'balls/etc.- 1%
Other- 1%
Total- 125%
Rank- S
*Comments- Absolutely painful to read, but the moveset deserves a good score.
Shadow5567
Zero
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 15%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 0%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- 5%
The Final Smash for normal zero looks a tad broken but I'm not really sure. You need to include the proper stats on everything or it is impossible to judge balance.
Underpowered?- 5%
Again necessary stats aren't included. Also the double damage from spikes seems like a unnecessary weakness.
Originality- 14%
Moves- 9%
A lot of the moves seem like generic sword slashes, though some of them are rather interesting. I'll be lenient (sp?).
Backstory- 0%
Why didn't you include one? Seriously its like a free 5 points.
Creativity- 5%
The Black Zero and Absolute Zero transformation mechanics are interesting. You earned these points.
Extras- 21%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 3%
SSE Role- 3%
Kirby Hat- 1%
Codec- 1%
Colors- 1%
Stats- 3%
Other- 1%
Total- 90%
Rank- B
*Comments- Your extras section really needs work. Add reach, knockback, and speed to EVERY attack. Don't take my review to harshly, because you can always request a re-score after you add more details and extras to the moveset.
Gryphon
Saki Amamiya
Organization- 10%
Headers- 3%
Logical Placement- 2%
Text- 5%
Completion- 20%
A Attacks- 10%
Specials- 5%
Grabs- 3%
Final Smash- 2%
Detail- 20%
Visuals- 5%
Damage Percentages- 5%
Knockback- 5%
Speed- 0%
Reach- 0%
Other Properties- 5%
Balance- 10%
Overpowered?- 5%
Impossible to tell without Attack Speed and Reach. Half credit.
Underpowered?- 5%
Impossible to tell without Attack Speed and Reach. Half credit.
Originality- 15%
Moves- 5%
A lot of the moves seem like rip-offs of other character's moves, but they have considerable differences. Notice that similar to *insert other character's move* was on every special.
Backstory- 5%
Creativity- 5%
Despite the similarities, the up special was quite unique. Some of the attacks were okay. You even added sticker effects.
Extras- 14%
Picture- 5%
Stage- 0%
Boss- 0%
Stats- 3%
SSE Role- 0%
Taunts- 3%
Victory Poses- 0%
Pros and Cons- 0%
Playstyle- 1% (that Gryphon's Version of Saki can hardly be considered a "playstyle".)
Kirby Hat- 0%
Colors- 0%
Codec- 1%
Items/Assist/Trophy/Poke'ball/etc.- 0%
Other- 1%
Total- 89%
Rank- B
*Comments- It's not bad.... but it could be a LOT better. The attack creativity was weak. The extras section was hardly even notable. You need to improve on these areas. You also didn't add attack speed and range both to the stats and to EVERY attack, automatically taking away 10% from detail and 10% from Balance. Remember that I'm not insulting you, but merely giving you some constructive criticism.
