Can you guys help me improve on my falco?

[Aznseal]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sdMF4x9w3f8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmy-9ZpLfEI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wt0DU-lDETE <--- OMG JUNGLE JAPES
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_fq7eYqgMkM

Any criticism or advice appreciated, no matter how harsh xD

 

[Miharu]

Waveshine? Shine to fulljump dair won't cut it if your opponent knows how to DI. Seems like you need to work on consistency with combos, since the Fox that you're up against is pretty much just a punching bag for you. So learn to finish off your combos better, since the Fox at this point is just not teching, and letting you get a free smash in. Learn which smashes can chain after which aerials, and the timings for those and such, since most of the combos that you're doing now wouldn't work on someone who can tech/DI. Also, work on a different approach other than double jump dair, since a decent Fox will just dd back and grab you in the afterlag, and you'll be screwed after that.

Try to get some vids of someone closer to your skill level so we can give out better critiques.

 

[d_shep04]

your falco needs a lot of work bro... and that fox guy needs alot of work also... well since he is basically a noob... you should try that down grab (throw) against him with falco... as long as you have falco and he has fox it should work... but dont expect it to work against advance players... you would probably get like 2 of those on them... if that... and you should probably low hop more... falco has the best jump in the game... so if they manage 2 jump over your low hop... double jump and spike while doing it... or nuetral a.... you basically dont want 2 waste anymoves or leave yourself open b/c against a good fox like hydrokirby/zhu/pc chris you would get destroyed... just make sure you l-cancel after everything you do... and shl more... and work on edge recovery... and find a better fox 2 play against... (hydro kirby are you and zhu going 2 pound 3--> if so... MAN... I WOULD LOVE TO DITTO YOU AND HIM...)

 

[Layupfreak]

welcome to the jungle!

 

[Miharu]

welcome to the jungle!

Why are you bumping a 2-week old critique topic with some random ****ty spam?